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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 90)

Ramhari IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 July 2011 at 5:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 6thElement

Originally posted by Ramhari

Very Beautiful part.
I keep falling in love more  and more with RishNaini.
I still have a doubt whether Rishabh was truly drunk or just acting.
Naini was so much in a confusion and dilemma for a long time.
Seems to me that her mind was refusing to give up
while her heart and body were reacting exactly opposite.
The way she was checking him out opening his shirt was so sweet.
She seems to be enjoying their togetherness though it was unconscious.
She turned so restless when he just drifted away.
The last part  where he comes closer to her again and they both smile was beautiful.
Waiting for the next part.

You only think, she was checking him out Ramhari? LOL You Naive Naive girl...
You are right, there was a battle of egos inside her and she was refused to give up.
Yeah! I liked the last part too...But do you think, it was too long for just a scene, where she got him to her bed and slept together?
Lord! I hope I didn't get carried away.

Thank you
You of course did not at all get carried away.
Rather you portrayed her inner conflict and emotions so so beautifully.
Wonderful wonderful part
I always love to read and re read
But i guess cant relike the part
Thanks again for such beautiful updates

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blueopal IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 5004

Posted: 10 July 2011 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   superbbb  updates  dear...
maan  n  abhi  punched  dev  n  OMG  dev  is  gayConfused...really  unexpected...
maan  really  convince  geet   n  naini  very  wellWink...
naini  is  fighting  with  herself  for  accepting  abhi...u  present  it  beautifully...
i  loved  it...looking   fwd...

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janu_2006 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 July 2011 at 1:24pm | IP Logged
gr8 parts..
cont.sooon dear..

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zaara2212 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 13657

Posted: 13 July 2011 at 2:32am | IP Logged
hi, long time I had not got pms, so just came back to catch up glad that you had updated and i had missed quite a few updates...

Dev is gay Shocked wow, hope Geet would not be much happier, when Maan is not with her...

hope Nainin and Rishabh's love story also takes a turn...keep writing Smile

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Lov26 Senior Member

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Posts: 397

Posted: 13 July 2011 at 8:41pm | IP Logged
Loving every single update.

I really like the story of Naini and Rishabh. It shows how ego and misunderstanding can play a huge role in separating lovers. The last update was a powerful one, i could almost feel their pain and also their eagerness to get back together.

And I really appreciate all the little aspects and details that you include in Maaneet's story showing that married life is great but still there are so many things that needs to be worked on. I love the way you always portray their make up. Its HOT, SWEET and it leaves a feeling of wanting more.

Eagerly waiting for the next update.


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6thElement Goldie

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Posted: 16 July 2011 at 1:25am | IP Logged

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Krishnaluv94 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 July 2011 at 1:34am | IP Logged
Great update! I have no other words. I'm so glad Geet and Maan had a chat. Maan admitting that he didn't punch Dev because he wouldn't be able to stop was great!

Thanks for the update!

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libra25 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 5487

Posted: 16 July 2011 at 2:05am | IP Logged
this part is a lil hard to write...
there is so much emotion a mixed platter...
both maan and geet have their thoughts and feelings...
i felt the you could have made it a lil longer by extending their discussion...more explicit probably...
but still i could catch on the emotion very well...
this is something she will have to deal for a long time and maan and herself are the only ones who can bring her out of it...
i felt it was a very beautiful scene...
really looking for some rishabh naini moments...

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