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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 87)

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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 8:59am | IP Logged
Even though it was a struggle and conflict for Naini to be in that state, it was really very adorable to read and picture. 

Beautifully written, each and every sentence!

And the last four lines were absolutely the best part.


Edited by jazzerette - 08 July 2011 at 9:15pm

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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 9:26am | IP Logged
Have beautifully penned down how Naini is yearning for Rishab's closeness!!!

Yet she is not giving in for her desire.

loved the update!!!

wonderful!!!

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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
These two remind me of this song...especially Naini




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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
hasini do add me in ur pm list.. ur ff has become a part of my day..

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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
awesome hasini...

the indecisiveness...was very well brought to front...
and the silent reassurance of hope from both...

i truly loved the last line...
What she didn't know wouldn't hurt her, and so it was, when his lips curved along with hers, knowingly too.
it had full essence of the post...

continue soon...

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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
Awesome update!

I liked it how Naini understood Geet's need to stay with Maan and left them on their own.

It's nice to see Naini and Rishabh getting closer, swallowing their pride and ego. Good to see both of them making efforts to salvage their relationship. So even Rishabh was awake all the time and was pretending to be asleep. Hope he takes the cue and doesn't waste much time in winning her back.

Do continue soon.

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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 7:41pm | IP Logged
awesome update hasini...Clap...loved the minute details you penned down regarding their positions...Wink

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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 9:13pm | IP Logged
Finally Rishabh and Naina.
This is an unexpected part. I was eagerly waiting for their part.
Naina is craving for Rishabh's touch and his closeness.
But there is a block in btwn them. She is not wiling to step out of it.
I hope the morning will bring some changes in them.
But am confuse on Rishabh's state.
Is he really drunk or he was just acting.
He seemed to be in drunk state but the last line made me confuse.
Thanks fot such an beautiful update. Loved every line of it.
Eager to read next...

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