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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 86)

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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 3:34am | IP Logged

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-Aarya- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 3:59am | IP Logged
My heart goes out to Naini...

Touch my face gently, Wipe these tears away
Kiss all of my scars, Tell me they won't stay

Come up behind me, And wrap your arms around my waist
Grab my hand, When I walk away 

Because when I turn away, I'm waiting for you
To tell me to stay, If you don't
I will just end up this way

Memories are killing me, Just the thought of you
Tears stream down my face, This can't be true

My life was perfect, I'm not kidding you
I had a picture perfect family,  And friends who were true
I had people who loved me, And most of all I had you

Now I'm left in the cold, Having to comfort myself
I just wish he would realize, I could use some help. 

No I don't wanna talk about it, But I hug will do
I don't want to talk, I just want to be held by you

Hours will pass, But I don't mind
Imagining being in your arms, Will be the rest of my life

~by Scarlet Shay

Edited by night13 - 08 July 2011 at 5:43am

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Escapist Goldie

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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 5:05am | IP Logged
It gave a warm cozy feeling to me...something quite unexpected as in the update!
I loved every part of it...and sigh the poor girl seems to have suffered a lot...hope the grey clouds will descend and the sun shine brightly ...but is Rishab really drunk or is he just playing along..?? Feeling he played along but kya pata :D..Whatever be the case, at least Naini is acknowledging him again and their relationship too!  

Loved this one...and yes it does  give a Hot Chocolate feeling ! :)

Take Care.

Edited by -shabnoor- - 09 July 2011 at 6:26am

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Tyro IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 5:51am | IP Logged many parts...i am so late in commenting...well gettting back to my comments...LOL

Part 89--1 --

maan understands her pain now...n is scared abt her...worried abt her...

he really loves his sis...just needed a push...provided by his wife of course...Wink

love geet n her calls...LOLit really gets him mad n annoyed but i bet he wouldnt have it any other way...Embarrassed

loved the talk between bro n sis...though sometimes they were talking indirectly...but understood each other well...

Part 89 --2-- 

daadi is waiting for the good news...LOL...lekin abhi nahi...

all on the call...planning for nice...they all want her to be happy...

maan bought it in naini's name...aww...rishabh has to agree now as he too wants to be close to her...but not sure how to let it all in the open...

maan knew hat to say...he does know his sis...Embarrassed

Part 90 -- 

both r missing each other...n thinking of spending time together...

she came n he sensed the change...Embarrassed

not again...a wonderful destroyed as both were in a to complete the work n the other to make himself immersed in work...

naini is too good...she wanted to give them time alone so that they can enjoy each other's company...daadi is also a sweetheart...understanding all this...

omg...strip...Shocked...what was he planning to do...LOL

glad that naini asked n he answered...though not the answers i was expecting...but different ones...

rishabh is here to bring her love never leave her again...

It was again showing their disconnect in how they bonded with each other.Clap

they surely know how to tease each other...first maan with the messages n then geet ...uff...

PS -- will comment on the rest later...

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mandymore IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 7:12am | IP Logged
Awsome prts,maan n geet reached a newlevel in their relationship,luvd the sensual n passionate prt
u hav amazing writing skills,

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Amoureux IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 7:54am | IP Logged
So now even Rishab has learnt it... should i say he is a tease Wink I thought that was Maan... LOL
Loved it Hasini...  Thanks for the beautiful part...

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mandymore IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 8:21am | IP Logged
Wonderful prt,its grt that couples r talkng abt themself rather worrying abt others,omg dev s gay n poor geet all the while blamed herslf.nice prt

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mandymore IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 8:38am | IP Logged
Nice prt,naini want him but nt acceptng it but she crave 4 him hope she make right decision abt future of their reltn

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