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Posted: 07 July 2011 at 2:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 6thElement

Originally posted by -pixie-

^^H: I also felt making him gay was too safe and cliched...I mean I can understand societal pressures in India but Dev was living in Toronto??? So why did he get married? We havent heard anything about his family and so its hard to put it down to familial pressures either.

How about he was so involved with whoever it is that he couldnt be with another person? His reasons for getting married may have been whatever!! (Maybe she was married and Geet was a decoy?). I dont know...its a bit strange that Geet would not have noticed Dev's strange (to her and what she would have expected from a husband, coming as she was from HP) behaviour in 5 years... 

However, this is your creation and you are free to take it in any which direction as you see fit, I respect that! So Gay it is!LOL


Ok...wrote up a whole lot and lost it. Angry

Alright. Dev and Geet stayed with his Mom (Part 60 Genesis) But I do agree that I had not gotten to the back story and stressed about the part why he did what he did. I felt that would draw focus from our leads, but I guess that was needed too.

As for having another angle to Dev's betrayal, In my mind, I couldn't have him involved with another woman. Didn't matter about since when he got involved with the affair, because, in case he married Geet first and found another woman later, then the part he didn't make anything out of their wedlock cannot be explained.
Or in the vice versa situation, if he was involved with someone even before their marriage, then why get married in the first place. The desperation to  get married to her would not have risen in the first place.
The wedding was more out of a necessity to keep his identity (which I agree should have been highlighted)

As for Geet being clueless...Dev had a clear facade going there with flirting up other women, which did not rise doubts in other men's minds. And for the latter part of their marriage, she was mostly away or he was traveling (Part 60 Genesis).

I can only hope there will be some justice in writing out Geet's state of mind in the next few updates. Thanks for stopping by.
Hasini

Relationships are complex or maybe we make them complicated...Maybe you did drop the hints in the story and we were unable to piece them together...

I think why get married at all (for Dev)- would remain a question whether he was cheating on her with a guy or a girl. I was expecting infidelity, and now think the gender is moot here after a point. The more I think about it, the more I feel- why infidelity at all? Maybe it was a dysfunctional relationship- never meant to be...with some mistakes from her side and some from his...Relationships like those always makes one uncomfortable- whether you see them on screen, read about them or even come across them in real life. You always expect the person to act- walk out, confront or do something? No, or am I the only one who feels that way?

As you said it, we can all debate about Dev's motivations for doing so- but thats a separate story! Who knows maybe you will choose to tell that one day too Smile

<I hope you consider this - equivalent to a rose bouquet and diamond braceletWinkLOL>

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Posted: 07 July 2011 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -pixie-


Relationships are complex or maybe we make them complicated...Maybe you did drop the hints in the story and we were unable to piece them together...

I think why get married at all (for Dev)- would remain a question whether he was cheating on her with a guy or a girl. I was expecting infidelity, and now think the gender is moot here after a point. The more I think about it, the more I feel- why infidelity at all? Maybe it was a dysfunctional relationship- never meant to be...with some mistakes from her side and some from his...Relationships like those always makes one uncomfortable- whether you see them on screen, read about them or even come across them in real life. You always expect the person to act- walk out, confront or do something? No, or am I the only one who feels that way?

As you said it, we can all debate about Dev's motivations for doing so- but thats a separate story! Who knows maybe you will choose to tell that one day too Smile

<I hope you consider this - equivalent to a rose bouquet and diamond braceletWinkLOL>

 
The above underlined sentences compelled me to share something personal with you..it's something that happened to one of my family friends.They are settled in the US and have three girls,all happily married.I can't mention names,so let me call the second daughter,  M. M had an arranged marriage to an Indian boy settled in  US itself,hailing from a good,conservative family.Everything was perfect in the beginning..the only problem was that the guy refused to get intimate with her..he used to come up with all sorts of weird excuses. The first few months,she kept mum..She didn't even tell her sisters fearing what would happen if parents (both sides) came to know about it. Finally,frustrated out of her mind, she called me up..I suggested counselling..She called back saying he was not co-operating. After a few days, i got a call from her in the middle of the night. She was continuously sobbing but I understood this much..he confessed that he was impotent!! I consoled her,but felt that she should be talking this out with her family..She said she can't because he had threatened to commit suicide if she went open about this.
The guy I tell you was one smart cookie..eventhough they didn't get intimate,he somehow  managed to get her emotionally involved with him..he could easily manipulate her..the next step he took was even more unbelievable..he begged and pleaded with her to go for IVF.I still don't know how the hell he convinced her. I was also totally unaware about this and got a rude shock when she told me that she was pregnant.Both the families were very happy..he was happy,she was also happy and I was the only one left sulking...
Anyways to cut the long story short,after her delivery within a couple of months,she discovered the truth about her husband. He was not impotent,he was gay..He knew that she wouldn't help if he told her the truth so did all the drama. She was shattered and this time had the sense to inform her parents.He did everything pssible in his power to stop this news from reaching his parents...you know the usual,suicide threats..emotional blackmail..when that didn't work...death threat!! He was mortally scared of his mother,it seems...Anyways,her family stood by her,she got a divorce..he was disowned by his family..he moved in with his partner..She met this wonderful doctor (a white man), who accepted her and the lil' girl  whole heartedly..she now has another baby... but there is still trouble in her paradise,the former husband wants custody of their daughter..She doesn't mind sending her to him but the thought that he is living with another man ,is stopping her.
                                                Sometimes, people can be so selfish that inorder to hide all of their skeletons in the closet,they don't think twice before manipulating and destroying the life of an innocent!!


Edited by tanya_vi - 07 July 2011 at 4:57am

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Posted: 07 July 2011 at 9:12am | IP Logged
Loving the progress in Maannet's relationship.
Geet is getting really bold. Totally unexpected.
Maan is geeting naughtier. Totally expected.
Feeling sad for Dadi.
She is really concern on her grandchild's well doing.

Dev is back.That is sth i didnt expect at all.
But loved the way Geet intro eveyone with great confidence level.
Maan taking Rishabh him along was a great deal.
Wow that was really violent.
I was expecting sth like man-to-man talk.
But its so fun to see Dev's got smacked.
It would be funt if the punch was directly fromMaan
But its ok Rishabh would do as well.

Dev was being a total jerk.
He was just fooling around,so that he can hide his real identity.
I truly didnt expect this.
Geet was deeply in guilt as he blames herself for their failed marriage.
But Dev was just being selfish to hide who is he really without revealing who is he really.
Smart move by Maan to track Naina to be with Rishabh.
Loved the whole convo btwn Maaneet.
It felt so real with his meaniful words and her meaningful expression.

So Hasini you are about to end NY Times.
Thou I have been visiting NY every now and then
But I always never fail to give a comment for all ur lovely updates.
Thank you for giving such an wonderful story.
Would love to hear move wonderful updates from you...




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Posted: 07 July 2011 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
awesome updates...loved it

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By Mistaken i Came to Your Thread n New York is my Fav..place so i just Read ur Heading...n After that i was Struck with ur Story for almost two weeks ...Ur story pre occupied me with day n night n Emotions So well portrayed...this is the first story where i feel that feelings are more important in an relationship be it any relationship husband-wife,frnds, anything...wen maan came to knew geet is married still he STOPPED himself bt all of a Sudden ...DESTINY place its game as TRUTH came in front DIVORCE...geet scatttered...n maan SUPPORTING her...just by Standing BESIDE her...ASSURANCE...bt she was not in her sense n wen she came back she realized ALL THE WAITING FOR FIVE YEARSS...are just teached her new lesson ...bt dis she came to kow by MAAN...Loved it...n After that all the scenes between them was Mind Blowing...his realization tht he is in love n his proposal...His understanding...his Waiting for her response...his anger towards himself for not being with her wen she needed...her confusions...her POV towards her surrounding,her missing for him...n most important DAADI being helping them...was Mind Blowing,...Sudden marriage realization Goin to Same places Again in NEw york...to Do what they had missed the Most..understanding each other ...N MOST IMPORTANT TALKING...n clearing every thing i love it ...all of a suddden Naina n rushabh i love they bonding...once i was wished i could hav motre of them rather than maan n geet scenes...n u always suprised with thoughts ...it occupied my mind for entire day...n i was lost in ur story even if i dun read ...That MAGIC u created it ...for all ur reading...i just want to say A BIG THANKu...for Telling a A Wonderful piece of urs...which towuched My Soul...Waiting eargerly for next post...

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Posted: 07 July 2011 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
Sorry for not commenting on last four parts. But when you have pesky relatives ruining your routine, it just can't be helped. But I must have you know, I am very loyal to the writers I love. I followed up the updates diligently on the phone. Just couldn't comment from the same medium. 

Whatever may have been the reason that could have been attributed to Dev, infidelity or his sad attempt to disguise his sexuality, it would be a deceit albeit its nature. And either ways, it would have left Geet questioning the role those 5 years played in her life. 

I always wanted to see a confrontation between Dev and Maan and was waiting for the due time. It was all that I envisioned and more. It was for her. It was for him too, but only because it would bring a closure or her. 

If you can't get her to talk to you, get her worried for you. Rishab-Naini seem to be heading for their closure too. 

Looking forward to the next updates eagerly.


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Such a lovely update . It felt good how Naini is yearned for abhi's closeness yet not ready to acknowledge the fact. Hope she opens up and all is well by morning.
As for Geet ,happiness is never far when Maan is near her. Hope she never goes back to frisco and Maan stops being silent around her.
I think the story is really going very good .
Thanks for the update
hope you keep writing like this.
Once again , please dont finish this story.
You might think i am repeating time and again the same thing but this story is really close to my heart.
It always make me feel Hot chocolate.

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