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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 81)

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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 4:41am | IP Logged

Okay!

so, i know I haven't commented in a while now and I think the last i commented was on the Blindfold update...so I will go on in an ordered way,trying to cover all the updates!

Four States Updates-

the way you put forth th

e turmoil in two hearts along with the clear love brewing in the other two was brilliant.

Rishabh's attempts to avoid something that is actually far deeply engraved in him than even his own self...Naini's fight with her emotions, feeling angry at having lost herself to him yet again, took my attention away fron even Maaneet in the first one!

The second one however was just for Maan. the way he gave a sense of direction to Rishabh-the subtlety of his confession was mindblowing, and no doubt I was blown away!

 

In Plain Sight::

Ahhh! i love Rishaini! And I am glad that Naini closed the gap!Embarrassed
 
 
Crush the grapes:
The whole set-up was so warm and not to forget inviting and they gave in  and it was just beautiful!
 
 
War and Peace:
Sweet, and most importantly, as I went back to re-read the updates, i realised that i had indeed missed the second one and hence had blamed myself for not being attentive enough after the Rishaini encounter in a recent one as I wasn't aware of hi shifting over. But, i am glad he finally made that effort!
 
Rush Updates:
I can't help but admire his love and craving for her when she informed him of her imeding delay in arriving in NY!
She was hurt and he had serious making up to do, and I confess that i was eagerly looking forward to how you would make him do that because you keep surprising me with your fresh ideas!
I completely love Naini and Daadi for giving them the privacy that they needed and used pretty well. I would also Like to give it to dadi for her act to bring the other pair of her grandchildren together too, yet feel sad for the failure of her plan, coz now I am really looking forward to the union pretty much as I look forward to Maaneet. But, the pain that shines through your words makes me feel that Naini might not be wrong in taking her time.
It must have felt utterly horrible, if hat word can capture even a bit of what she must have gone through , after getting a cold shoulder from the only support she had, and the only she needed most badly at that time!
But,she will come around soon, and I am waiting eagerly for that!
my dying laptop battery forces me to stop now as I am in the midst of a power-cut!
hope to be back with the rest soon enough. I again apologise for the delay...
Love
Swati
 

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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 4:53am | IP Logged

Oh My!

Just saw you updated...Though i will read on this dying battery somehow, I can't commentCry
but, i am happy that Dev is GAYTongueWink
Oh God, that sounds digusting the way I put it, but I hope you get what i meantLOL
P.S-the page is getting pinkerEmbarrassed

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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 5:32am | IP Logged
Dev is Gay ...lolz...

After all these updates his true identity has been revealed...

I cant stop laughing... my stomach is aching...

But that was a good update Hasini... so finally came a closure to this issue...

hhmmm so now only Naini and Rishabh are left... 

I'm all sad that NYT is coming to an end... but hasini...I have enjoyed reading...  this FF is one of my favorite ...


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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 9:39am | IP Logged
Dev such a jerk...cheating someone to hide your own identity ...but I'm Glad he turned out to be a GayLOL

loved the way how maan very tactfully played with Naini - Rishabh

loved Maan's convo with Geet ...it was really incredible,

simply perfect...her reactions and her words were so real!!!

Beautifully penned down!!!

loved Rishabh - Naini encounter.

wonderful updates!!!

loved it ...awesome!!!


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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 9:48am | IP Logged
That was one shocker part.
Dev is gay and he just used Naini and Geet to cover it up Shocked
He deserved all the beating he got.
He deserved more than that.
Geet and Naini were concerned about the whereabouts of the men as expected.
Maan made Rishabh act drunk so that Naini would soften up.
Maan is trying his level best to get them together .
Looks like his efforts will be fruitful pretty soon.
Maan broke out the news to Geet very plainly without much of prior prepping.
She was initially super shocked to hear the news and took a long time to digest it.
Finally looks like Geet is slowly getting out of her guilt.
I wish somebody would break this news to Meera too since
She was also guilty at a point of time as she didnt help Geet get out of
the incident that happened in their childhood.
Loved Rish Naini's confessions.
Rish Naini are super adorable.
Me too hope along with Maan that Naini seeks closure Per se pretty soon.
Thanks a ton for lots of things Haasini.
Firstly for the long weekend Marathon.
Secondly to spend all your valuable vacation time giving us so many beautiful updates.
I know how hard it is coz we hardly get these long weekends.
Thirdly for your pinky promise.
Waiting for the next parts.

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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 11:16am | IP Logged
I must admit that I was little disappointed with this update, the fact that you could have taken Dev's character in any direction thus you decided to go with his sexuality issues. There are more loop holes with this track then the required closures. Have you thought of the turmoil Geet may be going through thinking of all the times she was with Dev, he might be somewhere else with someone else (of the same sex?)... honestly the thought of this situation disgusts me and is more traumatic then just being cheated by another women. I would have accepted a track where you have Geet feel sorry for Dev instead of making me feel sorry for Geet.  In short I am unable to understand why you decided to go with this track and thus no closure to Geet.





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