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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 74)

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Posted: 04 July 2011 at 12:17am | IP Logged
awesome...loved it...

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Posted: 04 July 2011 at 2:48am | IP Logged
the last 4 parts...wr hell awsmClap...i dont hv word to explain hw i felt by reading it...i had to re read some lines thinking that i might hv left some words  or lines that held their love nd feelings..in that process i ended up reading each para more than onceBlushing ...pheww...well coming to rishab nd naini...for sure they r madly in love nd need each other..but some times some incidents leaves a mark deep down in their heart that as times passes by.. the hurt..the pain..the agony...will only increase...a mere meetng of twice or thrise will nt heal wht naini went through...but she s somewhr ready to gv him a chance but she dosent want to face it yet...nd rishab no matter wht he s nt going to leave her..he made that clear whn they wr last togeather...nd daddima...her worries r natural...she dosent kw wht exactly went through behind the closed doors...hmm nw i wonder maan s upto...

pheww it was long...actually the longest ever sice i joind  IF nd started commentng on ffs...i hope it wasnt boringEmbarrassed...eagerly waiting for the next part..do continue soonDay Dreaming...


Edited by eiya22 - 04 July 2011 at 2:50am

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Posted: 04 July 2011 at 4:55am | IP Logged

Embarrassed All i can say is I'm lovin it Blushing 

And please don't be concerned about overstepping. I guess you are still well within your confined boundaries with all your updates and words aptly maintaining the decorum.

Frankly i'm loving the way you show a gradual growth in Maaneet's relationship with all of their disputes, brawls and banters bringing them closer to one another everytime rather than having any unpleasant or hostile effects. Goes to show the depth of their love for each other Smile.  

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Posted: 04 July 2011 at 6:33am | IP Logged
I really loved their romantic moments...

I guess Dadi is right somewhere... for how long she has to suffer seeing her grandchildren s suffer...

I think its high time Naini and Rishab sort out their differences and look forward to spend rest of their life in peace with each other...

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Posted: 04 July 2011 at 7:33am | IP Logged
Blushing Brilliant... 

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Posted: 04 July 2011 at 9:15am | IP Logged
I don't think you did anything overboard that you need to manipulate, it was a good sensual update, it did make me blush but it was not something I felt like why am I reading it or gosh its too much...in fact there are plenty of people who go overboard and that's something I don't like personally.

Loving the way you're exploring the details of their relationship...every banter every cajoling and finally the loving...after all being away from the one you love increases the love and longing  :)

hmm...at least Dadima is now relieved to some extent...lets see what you've stored in next :D
and yes I din know Maan and Geet esp. Maan could have this side too...a bit surprised though not shocked to see this part of his persona Wink

Take Care


Edited by -shabnoor- - 04 July 2011 at 11:17am

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Posted: 04 July 2011 at 9:20am | IP Logged
Beautiful lovely updates.
Maaneet got caught red handed by Daadi and Naini.
The whole place was in a mess too D'oh
Daadi seems to be gloomy or else she wouldnt leave a chance to tease them.
She is till under the MU that Geet is preggy.
Hope it gets cleared soon.
Now that Daadi has returned to bed it was Naini's turn to take over.
She did a great job making Geet go red.
Maan was the best though  He very nicely escaped still giving a peck to Geet making her blush more i guess.

You described Geet's sleeping form so beautifully that
both Maan and us were totally lost admiring her .
Maan couldnt control though he didnt want to wake her up and Geet sensed him.
Geet was again concerned about the family being around but guess Daadi and Naini gave them
their privacy again.
Their love making was beautiful.
Geet was getting so bold.Embarrassed
Their longing to make up for all the nights spent alone was evident.
Naini and daadi are back so the lovebirds had to break apart.
Geet was so concerned about Daadi's gloominess and dragged Maan long.
Daadi  wanted all her grand kids together .
It was so hard to see her breaking down.
Maan tried his level best to cheer her up .
Now that Maaneet know Daadi's concerns they will surely get Rish naini together as soon as possible.
Hope Daadi's dreams come true soon.
Thank you for the double updates.
Waiting for the next one.


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Posted: 04 July 2011 at 9:32am | IP Logged
wow beautifful!!!!!!!!! Lovedevery bit of it and loved the way Maan-Geet's relation being carved out.!!! waiting eagerly for the next one!!!!!!!!!

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