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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 63)

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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 8:58am | IP Logged
A lot of Maan's behavior is rubing off onto his darling wife... well, a taste of his own medicine. Brilliant Hasini. I do hope they have "a long night" and we are given every small detail about it. Wink

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Oh . Soo bad when will Maan learn to manofy his wife whom he loves so much and can do anything to be in her company .
I seriously think that sooner or later geet will be singing "main kya karoon ram mujke buddha mil Gaya" Hope all gets well soon.

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Part 85: Blind fold Update 1: Hmm? Blindfolds ha? Kind of on the kinky side…well since you know me well that is the first place I think! But since this is you, I'm sure there's a deeper metaphoric significance!


Sporting a look like a kid on the street robbed of her favorite bauble that she felt had been rightfully hers- this is such a cute image….I can image the expression on her face!


She wants another flower arrangement…the mood swings are def kicking in…"token of closure"….it never stops with these 2!


Despite the fact that he had argued multiple times over his preference to showing his love, than speaking about it, it had put her off, quite a bit. When distance separated them far enough, words were all they had, she had told him, but he had cleverly diverted their conversation course stating that he was a better man of action, than to fish for words to coin his feelings. –I really liked this part…especially the "words were all they had part"…you think distance makes the heart go fonder, but nok jhoks never stop!

 

So she's wearing a scandalous blouse…revealing quite a lot huh?! So maybe my blindfold assumption was right on! Nice description on how beautiful she looked!

 

She has grown so much since the beginning….can't imagine her saying "hush" or "the night is still young" or playing him with her looks…she totally playing him…I just know it! Her plan to seductively get him to do what she wants!!! Whatever the case, I loved it!!! When I read I thought it's so short, but oops there's a part 2!!!!

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Part 85: Blind fold Update 2: And the FUN continues!!! I was right she knew the power of her beauty like "the back of her hand"….nice one! He's lke her voodoo doll….LOL!!!

 

"Maan...you have to stop drooling": This is going down in history as one of the most funniest lines out of Geet's mouth…and also an epic one!  "Stupor" the word made me think of humming brids…didn't know why, but then I remembered my bio notes and my teacher talking about humming birds and their stupor state…okay that was totally random…IGNORE! LOL!

 

 

Now she's going all shy *slaps forehead*…this one is truly something else! Now she remembers their in his bro-in-law's home…how convenient! ARGH!!

 

Awww! The kissing shuru….how lovely…keep it goin'!  She's shivering with his touch…it's already established, but honestly who wouldn't?!Wink

 

Pool-side romance how cute…or garden-side…but still! Sher wants to go "up-stairs"…of course he does!Blushing

 

A brilliant sensual symphony it was, as her senses focused on nothing but his caress on her naked skin.- HOW-DY! Now that would make an awesome pick up line…'hey beautiful, the touch of your skin is like a brilliant sensual symphony'….OMG! I need to focus reading…this is getting to good! I love how to build up the tension to it's highest peak and then bam the climax! Hope you enjoyed that play on words! I know I did!!!!LOL

 

GAME TIME!!! And there's a part 3….kya?! Nearly about to faint!!! AHHH!Dancing

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H!

Guy getting beat up?! Nahin! That line would be 10 times classier than the things I've heard...any more "angel" lines and I'm gonna kill someone!

What can I say you bring out the funny in me! Yes and I'm the QUEEN of random...I don't know how but this one thing I was reading an article about Kevin Bacon and started dreaming about cheese...see most random thoughts in a day award goes to ME!

No I haven't read that...def shall check it out ASAP!!! Man you're writing so much in the past year...maybe you should consider getting it all published and stuff!!! You're fantastic at it...and you know it too!

What no deela stuff...BOO! You know how much my character is dheela...I would enjoy it so much!!! But that's cool...sometimes being seeda is best!!!LOL

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Luvely prt,hope they act fast before some intruder come to spoil their privacy

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