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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 61)

ibelieveinpink IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 27 June 2011 at 3:47pm | IP Logged

Part 84: Seeing and Believing Update 2: I'm all calm down now!!! LOL 

Oh man….they should just tell her, but are they positive she's pregnant…I mean test toh banta hai! Just to be a 100% sure…confirmation much needed!!!  Secrets are never ever a good thing…just saying! 

Okay you're right I'm liking Rishabh even more now!!! The whole carrying her away when she falls asleep reading…my dream man must do that since I love to read…I wonder if there'll happen when I'm reading your FF! LOL

His desperation was bordering on frenzied madness and yet he was cheating himself with a sham ego that paid for nothing, not even an ounce of happiness.-Chalo he's not a complete idiot...he's realizing his ego problem...really love this part...and the tree house love making part too...but you know my mind is too filthy all the time! Wink

OMG!!! She wanted him there too, the Whole " she feared if could hear it all" part was really cute...So glad slowly the repair is beginning!

She's still wearing his clothes...I'm guessing that's a huge hint hint!! YAY!!! Bewakoof Bandha!ROFL

Double peeping toms...Bad heavily wagging my finger! I guess soul mates for life! Poor guy trying to strike a shut down so rude Naini! Chalo, at least he doesn't bite...even though you know I wouldn't have mind if he did!!

Now it was his turn to experience racing breath and thundering beats that he prayed, she didn't hear how much he was still affected by her.- This was so beautiful! Such a kodak moment...oh an EPIC Hetal awww moment...I should just call these Hetu moments b/c I say "awww" out loud and my mom looks at me like I'm crazy!Silly 

Fingers lacing together...YES! More progress! And I was beginning to worry about these 2..but Ris is a man's man...straight down to business! All the "shamelessly romantic" lines and words and images...MORE PLEASE!!! I loved loved loved it!

BTW: Did I tell you how much I loved it?!LOL 

HOLY SH&T! I hate him...he did WHAT?! seriously, uff this kamina!Angry and what a big fat Censored!!!! UGH!!!!!!!!! Okay I'm done venting, but patch unless he truly truly makes up for it big time...did he apologize yet even...okay time to read on!

OH! So that was what the title was about...makes total sense...she does love him, but he's been a big jerk so she obvious can't forget...I hope they can fix it, but it's so much more complicated that I expected it to be! Can't believe she was preggers! 

Excellent job...more to read and ASAP!!!!!!! YAY!!Dancing

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ibelieveinpink IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 27 June 2011 at 4:03pm | IP Logged
I'm with pixie...any cure for reader's block?!

Actually the problem is my mom...she's a huge me WAY too many's summertime for goodness' sake!

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Antares IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 June 2011 at 4:14pm | IP Logged
Wonderful updates!

Naini and Rishabh, they confronted and Rishabh has made his intentions clear. Let's see how he goes about it and how much she makes him toil before giving in.

Poor Dadi, she had to sacrifice the comforts of a bed and settle on the couch. Lolz.

Maan and Geet, must say, Maan is pretty creative. Messaging her to bring her around without having to apologize, scheming devil! Lolz. Geet already seems to have succumbed...though can't be sure.

Can't wait for the next part, do continue soon.

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Ramhari IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 June 2011 at 4:52pm | IP Logged
All three parts were beautiful.
Though Geet got away from Maan on the pretext of
exchanging pleasantries with the other two women her thoughts were still with him.
She was kind of mute or occasional participant in the ladies talks.
Nice planning by Naini to get her bro  and Bhabi some moments of privacy.
But least did she know she is setting her own trap.
Daadi was the best.
The way she quickly set things up for naini was awesome.
She is an expert in her field Sending naini for her  night medicines to buy time and falling asleep on the couch were superb.
Poor Naini got a shock initially sensing somebody else's presence in the room.
It didnt take much time for her to realize Daadi's plans.
Rishabh Naini's confrontation was amazing.
Naini finally spoke up.She accused him and broke down.
Rishabh's revelations were beautiful too.
He gave her space but still took her permission to stay around and try to make it up to her.
Hope they get closer soon.
The scenario in the pent house was amazing  too.
Maan has the most innovative ways to woo Geet.
He conveniently used texting to show his longing.
It was so much better than banging the door and getting shut up on the face like last time Big smile
Though Geet was hesitant in the beginning she had to give up.
May be it was because she had realized that they had not much of time
paired up with his plans for the night.
However Maan finally got his Geet open her doors to him.
He is going to make the maximum out of it I guess
Waiting for the next part.

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Soapoperasrfun IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 June 2011 at 7:46pm | IP Logged
Oh Man... Maan is sooo romantic. Love it.

Rishab has given Naini something to think about. Liked their update too... Soo all will be well in paradise soon. Big smile

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Posted: 27 June 2011 at 11:10pm | IP Logged

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-pixie- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 12:00am | IP Logged
and we continue to twist LOL

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Ramhari IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 12:30am | IP Logged
Beautiful update.
Though Geet opened doors and sat by Maan she made her rules and intentions very clear.
Nothing more can be expected from the MSK  except for playing along.
His actions and words surely instigated Geet to hold on to her ground.
Looks like she is pretty adamant and not giving up this time.
All she had expected was a simple apology which Maan will not give out so easily.
Geet's point was valid all she wanted from Maan was more of communication and
he was acting as if there was no mistake of his.
No wonder she was firm on her grounds.
Poor Maan wanted to try meet her expectations too.
But   looks  his longing to meet her and spend time with her made him act out of impulse this time.
He is trying real hard to make it up to her.
His massage was one smart move but Geet was no less smart she caught him right on time.
Wondering what his next move would be.
Waiting for the next part

Edited by Ramhari - 28 June 2011 at 12:30am

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