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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 48)

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Posted: 09 June 2011 at 7:56pm | IP Logged

Alright please forgive for getting so behind on comments! I've been terribly busy and didn't want to just skim the updates so I waited and waited until to read them leisurely but never thought it would take this long! Anyways enough of my nonsense here goes...


Four States 1

This part was beautiful I was totally confused with the title but once I read it I got it. I am heartbroken by the states of Rishabh and Naini. The latter is truly in dire need of help which only the former may be able to provide. It's not easy to forgive and forget but I hope both of them work together and let each other back in each other's life. As for Maan and Geet I have no words, I love how both compliment each other and wish their relationship continues to grow stronger.


Four states 2

I'm glad Rishabh finally hit realization and must thank Maan a great deal for that. I'm also glad for this man to man talk since it's the foundation for their blooming relationship as one family. And the Maaneet moment at the end was 


In Plain Sight 

I loved Maan and Naini scene, I'm glad he's forgiven her. And I'm more glad to see that Naini and Rishabh's relationship is moving towards betterment. 


Crush the grapes

Loved it since we haven't had only Maaneet in a while. It was absolutely wonderful with Napa Valley as the setting and all the passion and romance. Really enjoyed it.


War and Peace 1

Doesn't surprise me that Naini is back home now. I'm glad that her and Maan are slowly becoming closer again and mending their relationship. And what can I say about Geet, she's adorable and although I'm liking these cute phone calls I'm more so looking forward to her return in NY. And wonder how Rishabh is doing right about now. Great update. 


War and Peace 2

I can't believe Rishabh is moving to NY! That was a shocker. And what to do with Dadi, I hope someone clears the misconception soon before she goes as far as to make an announcement. I'm also glad to see Meera and Yash back, I've missed them. 


Once again sorry for the lateness! All of them were great and can't wait to read more. 


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Part 77: Airports, Airplanes and Abhorrence: Hmmm! This seems inspired from a Steve Martin film I've seen….no complaints or judgement…creative actually!!!

 

he held her tighter. It only brought a fresh course of tears, when her husband thoughtfully tried to draw back the focus from her, given what she had attempted a few seconds ago in front of their family.-OMG!!! This beginning was so beautiful….amazingly written..the kiss, the tears, the sadness….lambi judaai!

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Her soul was stretched apart between her need for him and her dreams to make something of herself.- So poetic…I missed this so much!

 

A Shakespeare reference…my fav! The curse line was so beautiful….It's like I'm reading Nicolas sparks…my heart keeps melting!

 

Geet's emotional turmoil was written nicely and it's to

 

Last of her fingertips slide away from his reach- a total double awww!

 

How she's going to cope with handsome men?! WHOA! That really caught my attention…I wonder why she needed to ask herself this! My answer to this question…exactly how she does now! LOLZ!!!

 

And then she meets Archie….oh boy….the drama that will ensue…I hope he a longer cameo than just this part….wonder how Maan will feel! I always fancy a jealous Maan!

 

Oh boy….did she get annoyed and real quick….I can so picture it too! But you took so much time to describe him…I hope he stays for awhile!

 

Loved it…a bit sappy, but still ube romantic with all those departing lines and metaphors!! So beautiful!

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Loved the fact that R is moving to NY. And hope the dust settles soon at their end. Waiting to see how their drama unfolds.
Dadima's assumption on Geet being preg should be a misconception...as I feel the couple needs to communicate( otherwise in some ways it will be an antithesis to the blind fold update) and let each other know their thoughts wrt to kids/going the family way. Also she needs to move back in due course of time.
Anyways l love this story sooo very much- every chapter is so enthralling. I get super excited each time, when I see that you have posted a new update. Thanks!!

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 1:34am | IP Logged
INCREDIBLE...
MAAN AND GEET ARE ONE HELL OF A COUPLE...
I JUST LOVE EVERYTHING THEY DO ...
THE DISAPPOINTMENT...FACED BY HIM...
HIS RIGOROUS EXERCISE TO RELIEVE HIM OF BEREAVEMENT HE WAS FACING...
HIS REACTION ON FEELING HER AND A SUDDEN SENSE OF SATISFACTION...AS THE FIRST RAIN AFTER A LONG PERIOD OF DROUGHT...
THE EXPRESSION IS JUST SUPERB...
I ALWAYS TEND TO READ THE UPDATES MORE THAN ONCE...AND EACH TIME THINK WHAT SHOULD I SAY WHICH SOUNDS DIFFERENT FROM WHAT PEOPLE HAVE NOT SAID EARLIER AND STILL DOES JUSTICE TO YOUR WORK OF FICTION...

JUST AWESOME...
I HAVE A REQUEST...WHENEVER YOU GOT TIME I WOULD REALLY WANT TO SEE NEW YORK TIMES IN FORM OF A BOOK WITH PICTURES...
PLZ IF YOU GET TIME ..CREATE AN E BOOK FOR THIS ONE...

CONTINUE SOON  


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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 1:50am | IP Logged
Hasini, you did that sweety..I was missing Geet in NY badly.. their coffee oments, subway..window sill romantic moments..


please continue sooon...

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I can't believe myself Hasini...I read the last 5 updates at a go...

Finally got time out of my busy schedule... and read them...

each and every part was absolutely fantastic...especially I loved the Crush the Grape part... that was so romantic...and so unusal of Maan do such things...in public...

and also Maan's decision to ask Rishabh to stay in the apartment along with Meera and Yash... that was so unexpected... slowly and steadily Geet is changing this introvert Maan to an extrovert Maan...


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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 7:58am | IP Logged
R! dedicating Niven: 500 to NYT!

***
She walks in beauty, like the night     
Of cloudless climes and starry skies,     
And all that's best of dark and bright     
Meets in her aspect and her eyes;     
Thus mellow'd to that tender light            
Which Heaven to gaudy day denies.     
 
One shade the more, one ray the less,     
Had half impair'd the nameless grace     
Which waves in every raven tress     
Or softly lightens o'er her face,     
Where thoughts serenely sweet express     
How pure, how dear their dwelling-place.     
 
And on that cheek and o'er that brow     
So soft, so calm, yet eloquent,     
The smiles that win, the tints that glow,     
But tell of days in goodness spent,'     
A mind at peace with all below,     
A heart whose love is innocent.


--L. Byron!
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Maan heart craves to be with Geet, her mere presence would be a sweet gift to his heart! How our hearts craves for the simplest things, holding hands, a soft kiss on the lips and a sweet hug! Embarrassed I wish they would be buried in a time capsule somewhere in the deep sea! They are meant to be together, and no matter how you set them free, they will always find a way to be with each other!

Loved the update :D!




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