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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 41)

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hey  amazing  updates  dear...
maaneet   romance  n  annie n  abhi  love  track  both  r  nice  n  interesting...
looking  fwd...

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thx god Cricket came on time to alert Rishabh.
Loved this man-to-man convo.
They way maan explain to Rishabh from his own experience. At least it would make some point for Rishabh-Naina relationship. He is really well composed without anger.
Finally Maan had spoken to Naina, afta all she is still his sista.
He spoke with the same amount of love.
Am loving Rishabh-Naina jst like Maaneet.
They get me engrossed.
Loved the way Rishabh confess.
SO there is a secret code behind her message.
Am loving this. What exactly is her move.


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awesome ... just loved it... 

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Part 86 -- part 1 -- 

loved the portrayal of rishab's n naini's feelings...Clap

both r lost but still reliving their moments...its like they want to go back but something is restricting them to do so...

geet is also reliving their moment of passion...to make sure he is with her...their day has also been tiring...but near ur loved one...makes it all better...

The instinctive kisses were what she often called her panacea.EmbarrassedEmbarrassed



Part 86 -- part 2 -- 

omg...naini was lying there unconscious...Shocked...

good that cricket came on time ...n brought them here...

rishabh froze..seeing ehr lying there...well what can u do...when u c ur life lying lifeless...u dont know what to do...ur thought leave u..u realize whether u r just having a bad dream or is this reality...Ouch

good that maan was in his senses...n brought her inside ...

As if she recognized the hold of her own blood, that she had been devoid of for the last nine years, she cuddled in the assuring arms of her brother. Without his knowledge, like it was only natural to follow the next second, his eyes moistened at her unconscious gesture, while she scooted closer and felt the last reigns of consciousness leave her, right after she felt safe in the net of sibling love.ClapClap

maan realized that these two idiots still love each otherLOL...good...now he will b able to help them...

loved the way maan explained to him..the words...the lines...were just amazing...ClapClap



Part 87 -- 

maan left her in the care of rishabh...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed...but the main point is that he actually talked to her...Big smile

rishabh wants her back...he wants to talk to her...but he is having trouble letting words out of his mouth...mayb dreading to know what she might say...n it would shatter him...

even naini wants to give in...but she is stopping herself...

i am still not able to grasp what went wrong between them???

what is naini upto?? the message hidden in plain sight?? i think only rishabh would understand that...



Part 88 --

maaneet r back in this one...Big smile...

a drive to napa valley...how romantic...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

so the siblings r talking again...n maan blames all the changes on her...LOLLOL

baby beech me kahan se aa gaya...Stern Smile...maan bhi naa...thinking what not...LOL

love it...when he calles her nautanki...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

wow...crushing the grapes..i so want to do that...seems like geet was enjoying every bit of it...n maan by seeing her like that...

It was the last place on earth he would have ever thought, to make love to her. Although when she had broken so many core rules in his life before, this was nothing worthy of a mention...Blushing,...Embarrassed...Clap...Embarrassed

continue soon...


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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 4:58am | IP Logged
awesome part...
loved the romantic italian setting...and love in winery...
sounds so intoxicating...
while reading it i am feeling high and trying to visualize the height of ecstasy of such an experience
superb...

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 5:22am | IP Logged
loved this Tongue

beautifully written, well i remember my days in california, when i went out first with my husband...great one Smile

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