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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 4)

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^WHOA!! Already...someone is on a roll!!!!!

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Part 68: Slippery Slope: Uh OH! This isn't sounding good…I foresee something bad…or both are going skiing…one or the other! LOL!!

 

Abey now she's the one feeling guilty for shutting him up with a kiss, but OMG…these twos are so UGH sometimes! "yo-yoing" with his emotions…really nicely put…totally loved the use of this!

 

My mind ran amuck as I struggled with the loss of control over my newfound desire and over his edginess. –HOT! I so loved this…who doesn't like "edginess"!!!??!

 

Okay seriously these Maan dialogues are gonna kill me…he didn't want her to pull away! He's so hot with and without words…uff so dreamy!!

 

The betrayal and the drowning sorrow that had shaken the roots of my home had me bounded. –Epic sentence…so beautifully constructed…seriously I love it!

 

To him, the first or the second or the Nth didn't matter. I was already his; the day he had laid eyes upon me is what he had wearily repeated those worrisome days to my cursing heart. –She was HIS when he saw her…I love a possessive man…you don't understand…I really really really love it…and this sentence and way it's crafted it beyond brilliant…she will always be his…no matter how times they have a "first nights" or they fight or whatever…both are for each other and only each other!!!!

 

Well it was one thing to live outside this world of pleasure while not having tasted it and now that I have, it only did drive me crazy for more. –Okay….this is HOT…and geet is saying it…she wants him…omg! I'm lovin' this! This is what I call Honeymoon sentiments…finally!!!! Totally worhth it!

 

This juicy peach must be a foreshadow...instead of using the traditional romantic strawberries…you're using peaches, right?! Please let my filthy mind be right!

 

simmer to his soldering gaze –His affect on Geet?! Hell that's the affect he has on all GIRLS and guys too!

 

AHHH!!!! Stupid knife! UGH! I'm so mad…passion was about to be created!

OKAY! We're back…the passion returns and what a kiss…and all the aftermath too…I need to sit down and calm myself down! Okay I seriously can't believe what I'm about to read!!

 

So our sherni is a sherni is the bedroom…well kitchen in this case, but still! WHOA!!! Her moaning and then going at him at full force! Love how he doesn't care for conversation or arguments at this point…my kind of man!

 

Love the hunter and hunted metaphor…the girl is a tigress for sure! AWWW! And then going out in the snow…I was hoping for something else, but still so cute!

 

Maan's monologue was beautiful…and so serene…remembering all the good times with his mishti…I loved it!!!!

 

And what an ending….with a kiss!!! Me so happy! Seriously happy…I'm so glad all is well in paradise!!!

I can't believe I deprived myself of these chapters for so long…stupid school! But I missed out on so much fun! I'm going to catch up this week-end and for sure…it's getting so good! And I'm reading all these interesting comments…my hope is building up!

 

Excellent job like always…my Jane Austen…you keep outdoing yourself!!! So the official honeymoon begins and hopefully no more fights! Beyond brilliant love…the emotions were captured to the T!!!! Thanks a bunch for such a  lovely update…it was mind blowing!!!



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res...

awesome part...

so the family playing the match maker...
ohh i love their initiative to go to catalina...but i was expecting maan as well...
where is he??????
 rishabh and naini's past was interesting...a bet leading to beaten up leading to love...
this formula always work but really liked your approach and that catalina was their honeymoon destination was a pleasant surprise...
really looking forward to more rishabh naini scenes...
ahh and geet faints and as no maan so rishabh has to come in the picture...

and hasini you are definitely on a roll...
giving us one awesome update after the other...
its really overwhelming...thanks a ton...
still me as always greedy will ask for more...
continue soon


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loved the update
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congrats for the new thread...

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Congrats 4r new thread. . . . I found naini nd rishab's lovestory quite interesting. . . .

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