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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 31)

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 6:36am | IP Logged
Awesome part. . . . . Its not easy 4r naini to forgive rishaab but did he aware wat naini feel on that hallway. . . . Is he really seeking 4r forgivness??? They love each other but i guess they r still dat 18year old couple. . . .

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 6:41am | IP Logged
hmm loved it Tongue

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 9:15am | IP Logged
it was a very lovely update...Hasini...

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
Four states of love...simply amazing! Loved the way you penned it!

Rishabh and Naini are writhing in love, guilt and pain. Rishabh decided to bring her back, no matter what it takes. Good that he understood his mistake and did not let his ego get the better of him. Naini has faced a lot, he wasn't there when she needed him the most. Let's see how he goes about it.

Maan and Geet, they balance and complement each other beautifully. If one is wrong, the other one corrects it. They have developed great understanding and their love acts as a catalyst.

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 2:51pm | IP Logged
Part 85 was beautiful.
Geet's game of double blindfold was great.
She showed Maan how their relation was and how difficult it is for her if he is silent.
Since words were the only way to get them closer in their current long distance relationship.
Maan's impatience to find Geet made him realize what was going on and what Geet was trying to do
I think Geet would have guessed that he would give up.
Finally Maan said he would try.Geet's efforts had paid off to some extent at least
The second part of the game was great too.

Wow another FF sounds so exciting
Loved that song .
I saw both telugu and tamil versions of the movie and liked the tamil one better.
I am so looking forward to the ff based on this movie.

Part 86
The state of four people was so beautifully described.
Rishabh deciding to get Naini back to his life was great.
 Looks like Daadi and Geet's mission accomplished.
I feel so sorry for Naini.
She must be torn between her love for Rishabh and her past experiences with him.
Hope she forgives him and lets him back in.
I am sure Rishabh is going to give his best and get her back.
Maaneet were enjoying so much.
Geet seemed to be satisfied since she could convey her feelings to Maan.
Maan got his message too .
He promising himself to try breaking  his silence was
great since it must have been so tough a resolve for him.
But anything for his love I suppose.
I loved the last line

In that dark corner of the world, if no one ever knew until now, that were just four states of being in love...

It was beautiful.
Waiting for the next part and sorry for the late comment.




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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 3:15pm | IP Logged
Very nice Hasini

Loved their individual stateiction of Pain, Hope, Regrets, Comfort, Pleasure etc was soo well balanced.

Hopefully things will change for the better for Naini and Rishab, and things will grow to be more nicer in times to come for Maan and Geet.

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 3:51pm | IP Logged
awesome ff
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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
@part 85...It was beautiful. A game, instrumental in getting the point across, evolving into a night of passion.

@part86...four different states of being in love. A love lost, a love in pain, a love in longing and yet another in giving it all. 

Loved the updates!

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