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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 131)

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Will come back and edit. --- no need to edit dearie. It's good just the way it is. There are a few things here and there but it's trivial compared to getting to read the update. The more natural, the better ;-)

This time I wasn't out for long. Not bad! What do you think? Let me know --- you weren't out for long?!Wacko Goodness gracious woman I was a hair's width away from PMing you when I saw you'd updated. As far as the update goes, I loved these lines:
 
She might have grown up in tough love, as she claimed but he certainly was staunch enough to show that loving her was anything but tough.
 
I'm going to do something I do very often: praise and repeat myself. I've always looked forward to your endings more than the actual content because they summarize the foundation of the update and they're truly philosophical.
 
The overall teasing of Naini by Rishabh was exhilarating. Give yourself a nice pat in the back. This part in particular had me laughing out loud:

"So you won't kiss me then?"

She stared at him. "No...I don't see you blessed with any such display of affection in your near future"

Kudos girl!

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Posted: 30 August 2011 at 10:21pm | IP Logged
loved the update...
actually loved the way rishab is teasing naini in the shop and in car...
waiting to know wat he gifted her...

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Posted: 30 August 2011 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
awesome...

loved part 102...

abhi n naini r just amazing...love their story...

naini was crying as she herself wanted to feel those moments...

abhi realized what she was talking abt...but he wanted to enjoy his wife's restlessness...LOL

she always portrayed herself as a tough one...who didnt like the traditional or for that matter some or many of the things that most of ehr kind liked...but deep inside she always wanted that...welll she is a female after all...Embarrassed

abhi really knows how to tease her...

n now waiting to c how she breaks her resolve ...

continue soon...

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Posted: 30 August 2011 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
Lovely update
I have no words to express how beautiful it sounded
The games u play in love just to annoy and tease ur beloved
Just to make them believe
that u don't care but then care is all that shower on thee
Oh gosh i am writing a poetry It seems
Lol but ur words have definitely inspired me to do so
About the update It was beautiful
Her disappointment when he said he was here to pick a gift for meera and gosh ignoring all the signs were she hinted him About the visual treat he would be Missing
But rishabh Was at his best loved the way he said
So you won't kiss me then
Ok I will just stop here I seriously need to write few lines
Which are lingering in my head after reading ur update

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Posted: 30 August 2011 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
nice update
rishab and naini's love story seems very interesting
bring in more such sequences pls...
love it a lot

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