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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 125)

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Posted: 11 August 2011 at 6:55pm | IP Logged
OH MY GOD!!!!! Hasini I made a huge mistake.
And u didnt correct me.
All this while I was writing Naini as Naina.Embarrassed
I just realized it when I was re-reading one the part. 
Thats when I realize all this while I wrote Naini's name wrongly.
I didnt know why I wrote that. I wont repeat it again. Confused
But truly I loved to addr Naintara as Naina.
It sounded more Indianist more me.. Big smile

Back to the update of Rishabh n Naini. I loved it.
What more can I ask for when it come to them.
Rishabh cant take off his eyes from his Lady Love.
He is admiring her without stop.
Thanking Maan for not being around, else he will be caught red handed.
Naini is feeling concious over Rishabh's non-stop staring over her.
Thou she enjoys it yet she doesnt want her other family member to knew it.
As she said, she wants Rishabh to ask her hand first.
Its pretty obvious Naini is changing.
She is changing to be a complete married woman.
Adoring sth that she didnt wanted at early age of marriage.
Wrapping herself in cotton saree, her new found likeness.
Voicing out her depression over not having her own marriage lady symbol.
Now I have started my liking in cotton saree. Time to get one for me Wink
BTW was Rishabh around there, when the black beads chain tense going on.


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Posted: 11 August 2011 at 7:06pm | IP Logged
Hasini dear... u plan to write another creation.
That's a very wonderful news.
Seriously speaking am not a great fan on epic stories.
No matter how hard I try I cant visualize what's happening unless its a moving image.
I'm really bad in History. U can see all blue n one red in my report card. 
That would be in HISTORY LOLLOL
But I will never discourage u from writing a new story for us.
I've always love ur writing and will continue loving it...
Do continue to write.ill always support you.. Clap

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Posted: 11 August 2011 at 7:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 6thElement

 
Originally posted by ajenn


Congratulation Hasini on ur 100th part!!!!!
Thou I joined this FF somewhr in the middle of NY journey,
Better to say I was kinda lazy to follow.
But once I started to read, u made me hook up.
I had to sit till mid nite with the companion on owls to finish up NY.
I turly enjoyed every bit of ur creation.
You made me keep stalking you every now and then.

Well coming to 100th part.
Maaneet had misunderstanding over the phone.
2days without contact.
Maan wants Geet to forget bout Dev's issue,
But seems like Geet need some time to digest things.
We cant blame both. 
I dont think so ill agree to long distance relationship.
That would be so not me in this love. I need my better half with me Wink
But Maaneet are managing their relationship pretty good.
Thou 'ey are madly craving for each other presence and luv,
yet 'ey could still make it work.
Thou Maaneet are having their difficulties at phase,
they seems to cant keep it long once land at their Home Sweet Home.
They cant keep their hand off each other.
Love the way Geet yanked Maan's shirt to seek his skin warm.
It sounded very sweet and cute.
The love and passion of Maaneet glows and grow each and every day.
Wonderful part dear... Plz cont soon...


ajenn, It doesn't matter when you came across this thread, but Gurl, I have no complaints with you as you have always made your presence felt in the thread. The constant feedback and support is what makes me come back and write the updates on days, when I have lost it all to write...
Long distance relationships take a toll, but trust me, I'm keeping it very light on this one. And hope its working out well for all of us just to focus on the weekend drama...What say?
I agree...I loved what Geet initiated it as well.. (trust me the scene didn't quite make its way out of my head for a long time Embarrassed)
Thanks so much ajenn for always being around.


Continue writing for those who love ur writing dear.
You cant never disappoint us.
Yes am glad that there isnt any dramatic scene with his long distance relationship.
Its going on the right phase.. Glad you made it clear by focusing on Maaneet's weekend togetherness. Even now I feel like Maaneet are always together. 

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Posted: 11 August 2011 at 9:28pm | IP Logged
Soft, loving, and tender display of love in this update...
 
Sweet :-D
 
Rishabh should sing this to Naini:
 
Tip tip tip tip baarish, shuru ho gayi
Maane ya na maane, meri tu ho gayi ;-)

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Posted: 11 August 2011 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
"Life happened

Naini's transformations, these little inclinations towards things and symbols she earlier did not deem important while still retaining that thrill for romance on the sly is really wonderful. She is still herself, yet a little more mature in some ways. 

And same goes for Rishabh, as he realizes his love for her is at a level beyond anything he ever felt before. 

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Posted: 11 August 2011 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
Amazing update! Naini, in a yellow sari, walking in the rain? Where's Rishabh? Hope she doesn't fall sick. She's changing, slowly and surely. I wonder if R would be willing to re-marry her, with all the traditions, mangalsutra, and sindoor. Can't wait to read what happens next! Thanks for the update!

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Posted: 11 August 2011 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
Ooh, I would love to read a period drama. Sounds interesting!

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