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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 113)

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Posted: 03 August 2011 at 2:28pm | IP Logged
Superb update!

Enjoyed reading it thoroughly! Naini-Rishabh moments were cute, romancing secretly...lolz. Ah, Yash and Meera getting married...great! Yeah, waiting for the reactions when all their secrets are out...lolz.

Feel for Dadi though, she's so badly wanting to be a grand-mom...lolz.

Seems happy days are here...waiting for the next part...do continue soon.



Edited by Starry_night - 03 August 2011 at 2:30pm

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Did you know that Oscar Wilde once admitted  ~ "The real charm of the play, if it is to have charm, must be in the dialogue". I feel you have finally found that key to unlock the secret to a good drama is through it's dialogues. It is through the dialogues we understand the character more vs narration and your updates have that perfect blend of wits and humor.

I specially like the part of secret notes with hidden messages... there is something intriguing and secretive about them which is very exciting!

I loved the update H! You rock!

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R for 99...:)

This is what I call cuteness personified!:) Loving eachother secretly...I simply adore Rishabh and Naini !



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awesome update
aww geet is so cute and innocent... first shes totally against doing"it" before marriage and then she can't let maan leave her to live in the bachelor pad
plz let geet stay in NYC for the wedding prep.. it'll be fun to see them back in wedding mode
con't soon!


p.s. do u still send out pms?


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I know I haven't commented in so longEmbarrassed but I'm reading!
I actually lost track in the middle of where I left off.. and I realized I missed quite a few chapters.. so I've been catching up!
I love the new Rishab and Naina.. after their confession... its those moments that I love reading about (like in the last update.. and then the towel scene) and you've done a fab job in writing them!
The whole Dev situation ...totally loved! That was definitely interesting.. but poor Geet... and now coming to Geet and Maan.. well, they will always remain my favoriteDay Dreaming
Thanks Hasini!

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So sorry for the very late comments.
I didnt realize u made additional updates. I
 tot am I left one more update.
But when I check ur list. There were two more added.
Couldnt stop myself from reading all.


Part 97
Guess Geet is still in the trauma of Dev's real self.
She got sick seeing two guys kissing.
For real, I guess even I might ended up so.
So far I had only seen two gals grinding n kissing.
But I find it to be funny to see that. Like some desperate case.
Okie back to story.
The role play by Maaneet was really great.
The way they played along with each other as they were total strangers.
It sounded so cute and fun to read.
I like the part Geet says as she wants her husband back.
The best line this whole part would be, Maan's statement as
"For people who are truly in love, they don't need a mirror to start with. They look at themselves in their partner's eyes"
I just loved it. EYES...


PS  :
Oh yah I loved it when u used the term "bandeau".. It sounded more classy.
Well I wan to share how i got to know the real meaning.
Went outing with my frens to junking tracking.
And we saw a white lady was wearing tube top.
Knowing guys, they were murmuring "how on earth she wears
bandeau n tracking"
Me as usual out of curiosity asked aloud "wats
bandeau".
ey' got shocked as thou i asked some bad words's meaning, but 'ey explained to me without shame. And at the end, I got damn ashamed!!! How embarrassing that could be. Surrounded by group of guys explaining the meaning of
bandeau!!!!



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