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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 109)

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And then it began slowly, the process of losing herself in him, seeing her unbiased image in his eyes...affirming in a wordless language, that she never did need a mirror after all.
                Wow,words so perfect...they touched my soul. Isn't this what every girl,every wife dream of??Hats off to you Hasini..you are truly amazing!!

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hey hasini..
i am glad you are back...

i quite like it...
the way you expressed her insecurities..
i loved when he said that true lovers didnt need mirrors but could see in the eyes...
i dont have words to describe the impact of it...
its so overwhelming...
and the even better part was when she asks for her husband back..
the depth of their love can be seen...its just incredible the way you connect me with the story...
and even better was the last part of the update..
when she saw her completeness and assurance in his eyes...

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Wow, another beautiful update!

Geet needs more time for the truth to sink in completely and get over the feeling of betrayal. Loved the wordplay and the subtleties. Maan's words..."For people who are truly in love, they don't need a mirror to start with. They look at themselves in their partner's eyes"...so beautiful and true. All in all an amazing update! Do continue soon.

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Sorry for the late comments
The part was beautiful.
Geet didnt even recover fully from Dev's shock and she got
to face another gay couple.
No wonder she had such nauseating feelings.
Maan must have surely been concerned by her sudden disappearance.
Though geet tried her level best to cover up her disgusting feeling maan surely got it.
Loved the role play started by Geet and played along by Maan.
The mirror image part was super good.
You can change mirrors but the image will always show yourself so true .
Maan's words about people in love not needing mirrors was so beautiful .
The way he played along making her comfortable and excited was so sweet.
Though their role play was going superb Once they got intimate Geet so wanted her hubby back and loved the way Maan too reassured her.
Waiting for the next part.

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