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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 105)

-Aarya- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 July 2011 at 7:53am | IP Logged

Ah! sensuality, a touch, a taste, a sight, a journey of absolute delight that starts with that first touch, first thought with a heart that overwhelms and is caught... It is the perfect partner of love and together there is power and there is ever ending passion.

Perfect sensual ending to Rishabh and Naini... now let the fun begin! Wink

Edited by night13 - 24 July 2011 at 7:54am

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Escapist Goldie

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Posted: 24 July 2011 at 9:00am | IP Logged
It was passionate and sensual to the core...emotions need not be highlighted in a different manner as they are there hidden in every word in every sigh and every little sweet nothings uttered! 

The part was brilliant the whole 3 parts, you've really done justice to Abhi and Naini...and loved how she was coy all along and he too played along :)

Nah it doesn't need re-editing, it was passionate not vulgar in any sense that you need to rethink again about it!

Nice one...seems like it all is coming to an end, but then every Ending is a life is a Journey !!!  :)

Take Care,

Edited by Escapist - 24 July 2011 at 9:01am

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Ramhari IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 July 2011 at 9:11am | IP Logged
Beautiful amazing part.
Rish and Naini are so super adorable.
They were so longing for each other.
They just poured out all their longing.
Rishabh finally asked  rather ordered her to come back which was
like her only wish granted i suppose.
He was so overwhelmed with the feeling of being a parent.
Naini wanted to go to the doc with him
She must have been so emotional and alone all this while.
Poor thing.
I am so glad their agony has come to an end.
Though naini got closer to Rishabh he was skeptical and did all the coughing drama Big smile
But once she asked if something was wrong and started undressing after the water spill all his inhibitions just flew away.
Their romance was so so beautifully written.
I am so waiting to see how  Rishabh is going to fulfill Naini's wish of traditional marriage.
Waiting for the next part.

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libra25 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 July 2011 at 11:40am | IP Logged
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Antares IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 July 2011 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
Wonderful update! That was sizzling yet editing is needed.

Do continue soon.

Edited by Starry_night - 24 July 2011 at 3:06pm

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punjabi.princes IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 July 2011 at 6:44am | IP Logged
hey hasini!
just read the last 15 parts right now, as i was on vacation for the past month!
loved the advances in both maan-geet and rishabh-naini's relationshi[p.
OMG naini's pregnant again!! yayy
what about geet?,... don't send her back to SF yet!
con't soon
Tyro IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 July 2011 at 9:31am | IP Logged
hasini..Hug...i am back...n now i will make sure that i catch up on all ...LOL

ok...haan my comments might be short on my focus is on completing the parts i have left so that i can come to where the story is now...Wink

Part 91 (1-5):

omg...they both r saying things that they dont want to ...but want in u understand naa...deep desires r coming out in open...WinkLOL

In the short period of time she had been married to him, he had rubbed off, a few of his not-so-fine qualities on herEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

even maan has a fear that this distance will get to her...n to some extent he is right...only their love can save them...n still keeping them together...

the silent n cold treatment started...again...D'oh

what r they upto...toe...then...headache...sari...uff...stop all this...we know what u need..LOL

i am loving the foreplay...maan is too much...but geet is also not far behind...Wink

peppermint patty n mittens did the trick what others could not...Blushing

Part 92 (1-2):

lovely...geet in a bath robe...maan in a towel...hugging...running...n dadi n naini staring at them...LOL

bechari geet...with all the things scattered around...she surely must have wished to be invisible...LOL

n now to face them when he is gone...she will be all...BlushingBlushing

they heard the name misti..LOL..geed is surely going redder n redder...if that is even a word...LOL

geet is surely getting bolder...Blushing...loved it...all of it...Blushing

dadi is really tensed abt naini n maan...especially naini...glad maan understood it n tried to make it better from his side...

 the color scarlet was deep etched in her...not just in her cheeks, but in the core of her that shimmied with every time she found him close.EmbarrassedClap

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jazzerette IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 July 2011 at 9:52am | IP Logged
Loved the updates!! 

Naini is pregnant ...awww!!

Beautifully written!! Absolutely amazing!! 

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