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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 102)

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Posted: 20 July 2011 at 4:01am | IP Logged
Perfect ...loved it!!!

Naini is pregnant.

The last part of update was really Beautiful!!!

Perfectly penned down Rishabh's emotions he felt @ that moment.


Edited by -dia- - 20 July 2011 at 4:01am

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Posted: 20 July 2011 at 4:10am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by libra25

me first...yippeee after a long time i managed this...

i loved the update...
both the metaphors used to describe the sensation she was feeling were out of the world...
extraordinarily heartwarming...
i was so engrossed in it that when you mentioned sensitivity the first thought that came to my mind while reading the line was that...is she pregnant...
and till i reached the end i was smiling with a sheen of wetness in my eyes...
loved the unsaid and rishabh's reaction and naini's communication...
maan's call added the required naughtiness..
i would call this a perfect reunion ...not only getting their warmth and relation back...but also what was the cause and their loss...
it was just perfect...

i am still in a frenzy and smiling to myself...
such is the impact of this piece of art...
plz continue soon


Thanks so much Libra...I know I was dying to write this scene since the weekend. Managed to note down a few points in my class then came back home and copied the entire two pages into Word. This is actually a long update, with a lot of dialogue exchange, but I could only write a part of it, will continue in the next parts. Uff! I guess it was all worth it.
Naini and Rishabh are part of my every thought now, that I sometimes wonder that they are real...
THANKS again. Coming from you it means a lot to me to. Glad you like it too.


eagerly waiting for the rest of it..Big smile

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Posted: 20 July 2011 at 4:17am | IP Logged
wow so nice
didn't guess till late
but very nice way expressing her joy
it was simply the bestest way one could bring it out
loved it totally

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Posted: 20 July 2011 at 4:35am | IP Logged
Clap Beautiful...
 
Wow... you really have your way with words... i had to read and re-read the last two stanza's again and again to confirm that what i thought was correct.. So Naini is pregnant... Smile
 
Eagerly waiting for the next one...  I'm glad Naini and Rishab are finally together. And thank you so much. I was jumping with joy afer reading one of your comments that we will cross 100.  Thank you so much ...


Edited by Azmatazz - 20 July 2011 at 5:53am

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Posted: 20 July 2011 at 4:58am | IP Logged
ok , this update was unexpected.
Anyways coming to the update, i liked the way abhi got to know this good news.
In earlier updates whenever you showed naini being unwell, i guessed this would be the news, but i thought geet will be the first to know that. Maybe you wanted abhi to be the 1st one to know ,
overall(i personally want to give you a hug  ), nice one .
keep updating

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Posted: 20 July 2011 at 4:59am | IP Logged
AWESOME!!!!! Love the way you wrote that last update... So so beautiful!

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Posted: 20 July 2011 at 5:18am | IP Logged
 Beautiful Clap. Tugged at the heartstrings and left me speechless . 

Edited by maancrazy - 20 July 2011 at 5:18am

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