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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 - Page 109

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part!
ahh maan and geet saw them lol
should get interesting to see how maan and geet act around them
con't soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

I would Like the next update to be on a new thread!

Can I sapm?😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow wow , maan's  reaction was awesome, I loved this update thoroughly
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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved reading this update (3), and I did not enjoy the prior one as much ( if it is ok to say so), but I guess it was needed to propel the story . Totally waiting for the next - wonder how they are going to be exposed by Maan /Geet.
Keep it going, and love you for penning NYT:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb! Finally, they are caught! Can't wait for Maan and Geet to teach these brats a lesson...that sounds fun. Abhi-Naini part was so cute...his thought behind the gift and all. It was great!

Do continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very sweet part Hasini
Naini was trying to seduce Rishabh unnecessarily as here mere presence was enough to seduce him.
Rishabh was so restless waiting for her and couldnot keep himself from kissing.
So the gift was a toe ring.
Rishabh was so thoughtful in picking a symbol which was very inconspicuous so that they would not be caught.
But finally they were indeed caught by Maaneet.
Our super smart Geet picked the hints at the poker table itself.
But looks like Maan was not ready to believe that his sister was back to her prankster self.
Now that he has witnessed it he sure is going to thoroughly tease her i guess.
After all the teasing they had been through now the time has come for Maan and Geet to return the favors i suppose.
Waiting for the next part.
Thanks for taking time to update


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Posted: 12 years ago
hey that was a very nice update
so now abhi-naini are in big trouble
they are going to be nicely teased i hope
would love it if they have a proper wedding too...
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb!! Cant wait to see Maan tease Naini.. Thats gonna be fun..


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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it! They are so caught! Hehe.. Can't wait to read what Maan has in store for his sister. The toe ring part was so sweet and unique! It was awesome! Thanks for the update! 
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Posted: 12 years ago
this was lovely. so finally those two lovers are caught. cant wait for the next pat. do continue soon.