FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 - Page 80

me first...yippeee after a long time i managed this...

i loved the update...
both the metaphors used to describe the sensation she was feeling were out of the world...
extraordinarily heartwarming...
i was so engrossed in it that when you mentioned sensitivity the first thought that came to my mind while reading the line was that...is she pregnant...
and till i reached the end i was smiling with a sheen of wetness in my eyes...
loved the unsaid and rishabh's reaction and naini's communication...
maan's call added the required naughtiness..
i would call this a perfect reunion ...not only getting their warmth and relation back...but also what was the cause and their loss...
it was just perfect...

i am still in a frenzy and smiling to myself...
such is the impact of this piece of art...
plz continue soon
Edited by libra25 - 12 years ago

Originally posted by: libra25

me first...yippeee after a long time i managed this...

i loved the update...
both the metaphors used to describe the sensation she was feeling were out of the world...
extraordinarily heartwarming...
i was so engrossed in it that when you mentioned sensitivity the first thought that came to my mind while reading the line was that...is she pregnant...
and till i reached the end i was smiling with a sheen of wetness in my eyes...
loved the unsaid and rishabh's reaction and naini's communication...
maan's call added the required naughtiness..
i would call this a perfect reunion ...not only getting their warmth and relation back...but also what was the cause and their loss...
it was just perfect...

i am still in a frenzy and smiling to myself...
such is the impact of this piece of art...
plz continue soon

Thanks so much Libra...I know I was dying to write this scene since the weekend. Managed to note down a few points in my class then came back home and copied the entire two pages into Word. This is actually a long update, with a lot of dialogue exchange, but I could only write a part of it, will continue in the next parts. Uff! I guess it was all worth it.
Naini and Rishabh are part of my every thought now, that I sometimes wonder that they are real...
THANKS again. Coming from you it means a lot to me to. Glad you like it too.

Perfect ...loved it!!! Edited by -dia- - 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Thanks so much Libra...I know I was dying to write this scene since the weekend. Managed to note down a few points in my class then came back home and copied the entire two pages into Word. This is actually a long update, with a lot of dialogue exchange, but I could only write a part of it, will continue in the next parts. Uff! I guess it was all worth it.
Naini and Rishabh are part of my every thought now, that I sometimes wonder that they are real...
THANKS again. Coming from you it means a lot to me to. Glad you like it too.

eagerly waiting for the rest of it..😃

wow so nice didn't guess till late

👏 Beautiful... Edited by Azmatazz - 12 years ago

ok , this update was unexpected.

AWESOME!!!!! Love the way you wrote that last update... So so beautiful!

 Beautiful 👏. Tugged at the heartstrings and left me speechless .  Edited by maancrazy - 12 years ago

Wow,abhi naini r so cute toghtr when not fightng