FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 - Page 76

5 updates...what a treat, Hasini!

Amazing! Loved each of them!

Enjoyed their back story and the way they confessed. The kiss part was cute and kinda funny. He frequented that coffee shop to catch her on her way to the animal centre and back. They did need to re-live the memories of their past to know what they are losing out on and to take that conciliatory step towards the other.

The way you coalesced Maan and Geet moments into the update to make Naini realize was beautiful. It was lovely!

Possessiveness and jealousy got better of him and for once I did not mind him forgetting all rationale and dragging her out of the lounge with him. Loved the chain of events that followed. Her wearing a sari and his apologizing for his behaviour. This distance did make them value their relationship more. Those last lines by Naini...awesome!

Can't wait for the next part...do update soon.

Oh, and that puppy part was so cute! It reminded me of the puppies that had been given birth by a stray dog in our locality...everyday I used to go out at night with my dad and give them milk, though I was pretty scared to touch them. Lolz!

awesome writing hansini

i loved all parts...finally naini is back with abhi...

Thank you for another update.
Its pouring updates this weekend.
Me too couldnt bear Naini's agony but thought it would be greedy to ask for more.
Finally our darling Naini made her move after Rishabh left her at her door step
without a word.
Beautiful silent treatment by Rishabh.
Good that Naini wore that yellow saree again.
Looks like our lovebirds have influenced her a lot.
Rishabh was obviously shocked.
Loved the way she slowly spoke out whatever she wanted to.
She completely broke down and melted in his hug.
It was so wonderful to see them together again.
The choice of BGM was fabulous
Thanks again for the beautiful part.

R for 101 baby!

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A peek into Naini's heart... ~ I can't help that I think about the past, the present and what the future could be... I can't help to miss you when you're here and gone... when I am with you, I have no doubts  with one word you can change my world... It's not my words, but the actions that should prove that no matter what, I will always belong to you.. and I hope you will see that all I need is...you!

The updates were beautifully portrait :H! 

ps.. This is for your 'Give Me Everything'...

~Tonight I will love love you tonight
Give me everything tonight
For all we know we might not get tomorrow
Let's do it tonight




Edited by night13 - 12 years ago

Awe loved the hug! This is what came to my mind: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N1t0nHgO2ls&feature=related

This content was originally posted by: pushpi

Awe loved the hug!

This is what came to my mind: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N1t0nHgO2ls&feature=related

for you...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6cgAh7WPD5Q[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by night13 - 12 years ago

Wow what a brilliant update! You portray the characters so well! Am so glad R&N have made up! Well my question to u is...are any of the pairs going to be giving good news to daddima about a baby? Well looking forward to your answer. Thank u so much for all the lovely updates they make my day I don't always comment sorry but I do press the like button must count for something! Keep up the fab work going to miss NYT when it ends and also please could u add me to your pm list! PS so sorry for such a looong comment lol anyways once again Fabulous writhing !

for Naini & Rishabh...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9BHoj8uFdr8[/YOUTUBE]

ps.. I am in a spamming mood... 😆
Edited by night13 - 12 years ago

SorryDear, I was not able to comment for all the updates. I had a busy schedule. It was my brother's engagement. Had to run all over the places to get things done. Now am back to the update tracks...

Loved Maaneet's chat in the bath.
Geet was shattered  as she wasnt aware about Dev's real identity.
She was emotional down and Maan came on right time to give her company.
Loved the way Geet questioned Maan for not beating up Dev at least for once.
And the way Maan answered for him. The way he put in as he wont be able to stop himself later.

Loved the way u potrayed Naina's first kiss.
And the way Rishabh made her feel comfortable.
Basically it sounded like a lesson on how to kiss. I loved it. Beautiful.
They were uncertain about their relationship but they knew what they want.

It was surprise to see Naina turned to the coffee shop.
Maybe she wanted to afta relishing  their wonderful moments.
Rishabh is tryin hard to make things go smoothly without pushing her to the edge.
Papaya sounds really cute.
The whole animal shatter scene was good.
Naina was too engross with her task and Rishabh was ever ready to support her.
Rihabh's compliment to Naina sounded very genuine. 

Maaneet moments are making Naina relishing back her own memories with her husband.
This is really wonderful.

Rishabh was trying to impress Naina with his act.
Joey was just acting so stupidly and he needs to punch.
Rishabh though Naina did that on purpose.
He was so furious...

Finally the most awaited part.
Her first move to Meera's doorstep to meet Rishbah was a good start.
Naina wearing saree was a surprise and it was the same yellow saree.
His apology for his behavioral towards her was accepted.
And the way he justify for his act.
I loved the way she tries hard to stop him from leaving.
She was reluctant to say it but as last she did it.
Naina's confession was unexpected.
She seeks comfort in him
Totally it was a lovely package.

Thanks all this wonderful update... Really loved it. All were beautiful...