FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 - Page 48

Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful updates!

Naini and Rishabh, they confronted and Rishabh has made his intentions clear. Let's see how he goes about it and how much she makes him toil before giving in.

Poor Dadi, she had to sacrifice the comforts of a bed and settle on the couch. Lolz.

Maan and Geet, must say, Maan is pretty creative. Messaging her to bring her around without having to apologize, scheming devil! Lolz. Geet already seems to have succumbed...though can't be sure.

Can't wait for the next part, do continue soon.
Posted: 12 years ago
All three parts were beautiful.
Though Geet got away from Maan on the pretext of
exchanging pleasantries with the other two women her thoughts were still with him.
She was kind of mute or occasional participant in the ladies talks.
Nice planning by Naini to get her bro  and Bhabi some moments of privacy.
But least did she know she is setting her own trap.
Daadi was the best.
The way she quickly set things up for naini was awesome.
She is an expert in her field Sending naini for her  night medicines to buy time and falling asleep on the couch were superb.
Poor Naini got a shock initially sensing somebody else's presence in the room.
It didnt take much time for her to realize Daadi's plans.
Rishabh Naini's confrontation was amazing.
Naini finally spoke up.She accused him and broke down.
Rishabh's revelations were beautiful too.
He gave her space but still took her permission to stay around and try to make it up to her.
Hope they get closer soon.
The scenario in the pent house was amazing  too.
Maan has the most innovative ways to woo Geet.
He conveniently used texting to show his longing.
It was so much better than banging the door and getting shut up on the face like last time 😃
Though Geet was hesitant in the beginning she had to give up.
May be it was because she had realized that they had not much of time
paired up with his plans for the night.
However Maan finally got his Geet open her doors to him.
He is going to make the maximum out of it I guess
Waiting for the next part.


Posted: 12 years ago
Oh Man... Maan is sooo romantic. Love it.

Rishab has given Naini something to think about. Liked their update too... Soo all will be well in paradise soon. ðŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
Part 91: The Hours Update 1

"No games Maan...And no touching...I'm here because you promised to spend the night with me...I mean time with me" She amended quickly pulling away, with a firm tone that meant business and he raised a brow at that.

"You're serious" He held her wrist as she got to her feet, although he didn't follow through on his classic tug and pull.

"Damn right I'm. I know all those messages were just to take me to bed and I'm not falling for that" She glowered at him, her face contorted in raw anger. It was only dumb luck that she was still keeping a straight face, when he gaped at her with wonder. This really was his, nave, timid and whom he sometimes thought suffered from excessive blushing, Geet that he was looking at? He was shaken a bit at the choice of her words and perhaps more with the unyielding tone with which she spoke now. Deciding to play along with whatever game she was starting for the night, he assented to her demands mentally. The tiny guilt that lurked in the corner of his being had done a fine job of silencing his counters. His features relaxed and gave out an assuring smile. "Well didn't anyone tell you it's unfair to assume in such matters. I was only hoping you would ask me to take you to bed" She turned wide eyed to him, still standing a few feet away from him, while he managed to suppress his own surprise at how his response had come out.

Didn't he just decide not to look the gift horse in the mouth? Unconsciously his ego was getting the better of him and the slip was making him fully aware of the little devil that was taking over him.

"Yeah! Dream on Maan. Not tonight" She said and slumped back on the couch. He moved close, just as instantly, and landed right next to her, confining her to the small space between him and the arm-rest of the sofa.

"All you have to do is just spill the words, dear" he noticed she was about to get up and leave once again and so he began to hurry to finish the sentence, "And until then you know I'm a man of my word" he said throwing his hand up in surrender.

When he still didn't show any trace of guilt or slipping out an apology to her, by the time she was in the same room with him, she had known that there was little hope for closure that night. And she was certain that the 44 messages were just that: an empty lure to get her out, from behind closed doors. In the short period of time she had been married to him, he had rubbed off, a few of his not-so-fine qualities on her. And now she was beginning to like the taste of command and the sound of cracking whip for whatever period of time he let her indulge in the false impressions that he knowingly gave her at times like these. She felt, he always successfully evaded bringing up any of the misdoings on his part. Even so, she couldn't help admire his knack to make her feel like she was the only immature tyrant of the two, for holding her ground for whatever reason that was. She was unsure if it was his misplaced sense of male ego or just plain old symptom of his inept communication. However, it was clear that it came from years of patronizing and nurturing an exaggerated self-opinion of vanity. With that she concluded the schematics of his persona were nowhere near simple, almost at once wondering what had made him complex to start with.

While she was lost staring at the TV screen, involved in a mental discourse over her husband's complexity, he caught her big toe with his, once again, as if only intending her to shake out of her reverie.

"Where are you?" He shook her by her shoulder, when his playful nudging didn't do the trick.

"Nothing I'm just tired" She said in a small voice, still looking lost as she massaged her temples.

"That calls for a massage then" Without waiting for her response, he got up and went around the couch. Standing directly behind her, he kneaded her soft skin by her nape and shoulder gently with the right amount of pressure. In his head, the fears he had denied so far were actualizing with time. He noticed she was falling apart with the distance, phone calls, bickering and the mismatch in expectations. Seemingly, he felt he was doing everything in his reach to spend time with her and yet she had made it a point on dwelling upon his reticent nature. There was a constant ask for more words or more emails or more talking on the phone...And with all the time he had spent arguing it was not in his genetic makeup to be a garrulous husband, he had come to a decision to instead start making changes in him than to attempt to set her expectations right. Only in the verge of pulling out his hair over their hour long fight and upon hearing the vexing news of her postponed travel to NY, he had acted on his impulse to get back at her. There was no justifying his actions and that much he was certain.

But honest to god truth, he knew he loved her dearly and he wished for her to exactly see that for what it was...a feeling beyond words that no coined word could rightly express. In his opinion, it lived to be felt in his touch...kiss and everyday need of her...ranging from the early morning hugs to his succulent tease, going all the way up to his sweet good night kiss. And the real challenge posed its way in the distance that had come in between them, leaving him with empty words, which apparently never did measure up to her needs.

He saw her head go limp to her side and if not mistaken a slow smile was creeping up on her lips, within only a few minutes. Touch therapy baby, he mentally gave himself a hi-five. When he saw her easing up under her hold and not resist his offer, his own nerves went lax with relief. Leaning down on his elbows that rested on the couch, he tipped her head back. Looping his hand around her neck, as she no longer coughed up a protest over his advances, he gave a fleeting kiss on her forehead and quickly lifted his head to observe her reactions. A willing smile erupted on her face, entrancing him to blurt out the very thought in his mind.

"You do know that I love you too much right?" He asked her abruptly.

It had been days or weeks, she didn't know, since she had heard him claim his affections with that sentence, she knew, he felt was an unforgivable cliche. And hearing it from him was definitely saying something to her that moment. Compounding the effect of his words was the inertia that came from his caring touch which was slowly arresting the flux in her mind and body. All her mental calculation had gone up poof, when she had felt his fingers pressure the strain out of her back. Despite the dowsing sense of lightness she felt, there was still enough congruency left in her to make sense of the mischief that was hidden beneath his compelling smile.

And so, instinctively, she whispered back her response. "Yes and I love you more..." She paused and her smile shared the same mischief as his, while she added "But that still doesn't get me to go to bed with you" She gave out in a finality that confirmed he had a long night ahead of him. Nevertheless, he was certain, the ground work, to term it a 'long night' was done.


To be continued...

I think it was time to lay out the conflict that played out between them explicitly. So this was the first and last of it hopefully. THANK YOU all for the wonderful comments. I really really do want to get back to you individually, but I'm unable to at present. Towards the next couple of days for sure. Until then, keep liking and keep posting your thoughts.

Edited by 6thElement - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
and we continue to twist ðŸ˜†
Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update.
Though Geet opened doors and sat by Maan she made her rules and intentions very clear.
Nothing more can be expected from the MSK  except for playing along.
His actions and words surely instigated Geet to hold on to her ground.
Looks like she is pretty adamant and not giving up this time.
All she had expected was a simple apology which Maan will not give out so easily.
Geet's point was valid all she wanted from Maan was more of communication and
he was acting as if there was no mistake of his.
No wonder she was firm on her grounds.
Poor Maan wanted to try meet her expectations too.
But   looks  his longing to meet her and spend time with her made him act out of impulse this time.
He is trying real hard to make it up to her.
His massage was one smart move but Geet was no less smart she caught him right on time.
Wondering what his next move would be.
Waiting for the next part

Edited by Ramhari - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful part!!!

Geet is not giving in ...Maan needs to pull the cords really hard.


Posted: 12 years ago
hey  nice  updates  yaar...
maaneet  r  really   rocking...poor  maan 😆...he  trying  hard to  manofying  her...
interesting  to  read  abt  maan's  tries...looking   fwd...

Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part..
i am really hoping for their heartfelt conversation to come...
as if they do not communicate lot of behavioral issues are cropping up which they are not able to resolve and the distance is adding to their plight...i am  scared if not communicated ultimately it will take toil on their relationship...
really like that geet has made up her mind to talk and is trying to keep to her decision...
looking forwrd to which side their story will bend to...

two days and 4 updates..i am loving it...but being a human i am always up for more...
plz continue soon..
Posted: 12 years ago
Nice prt.maan hav to work really hard this time

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