FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 - Page 43

i will say maan is in trouble...
women have better control over their wishes and urges than maan...
and now maan will have a hard time bringing geet down...
i am actually expecting some light banter full of sarcasm and humor...
so i bet maan is definitely in the doghouse

Precap: Part 90: Rush Update 3.

Its been a long time, since I gave precaps so thought will give one for this. It's a long update and taking quite a bit of time to write the scenes. So keep you all going, here is one scene I'm writing now for the draft.

"...While they were half way bickering about his last win, his menacing cellphone began to ring once again. She scowled at once and he got up to pick the phone that was dangerously close to falling off the table as it buzzed with vibration. He paced the living room a few feet away from the couch she was seated in. It was only obvious that he was drifting to a world, where his flippancy just had to disappear. His forehead furrowed in obstinate worry and splayed hands on his hip, reminded her of her own stringent days in his closed cabin. When at that, and she didn't need to know particularly why, but sometime in between him unbuttoning his shirt and callously falling back to the other end of the couch she was seated in, her lips went dry and the first queer mix of uneasiness and anxiety surfaced. She gulped now, looking away. The tips of her fingers had a tingle that was making it come alive with a want to trace it over his bare chest. Scrunching up her eyes in disgust at her shameless require she later shot him another look surreptitiously from the corner of her eye. Good heavens! she exclaimed as she noticed that the shirt was now completely off. She shifted in her seat feeling nervous, for she thought there was little hope she was going to last the night with the refinements and propriety of a lady..."

Hope you all like it.
Edited by 6thElement - 12 years ago

Originally posted by: libra25

i will say maan is in trouble...
women have better control over their wishes and urges than maan...
and now maan will have a hard time bringing geet down...
i am actually expecting some light banter full of sarcasm and humor...
so i bet maan is definitely in the doghouse

Alright considered Libra. Thanks for calling out your thoughts.
Maan - 2
Geet - 1

For women I feel its more mental. As long as desired closure is given by their men, I think women succumb equally to animal attraction and impulses. Would you agree?

Yes there is quite a bit of dialogue exchange...whether its mirthful or not, I will let you decide. I know I suck at comedy. 😆

Edited by 6thElement - 12 years ago

Beautifully written. Loved it.
Maannet are longing for each other's company.
Maan took exta hour just to kill the time without Geet being around.
But Geet came all the way just to help Rishabh and make an surprise for Maan.
Now Maan needs to work hard for the making up session.
Actuallly to be precies I was expecting for Rishabh-Naina update.
Ever since I read their relationship, they keep running in my mind.
Eager to read about Maanet and Rishabh-Naina...
Update soon...

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Alright considered Libra. Thanks for calling out your thoughts.
Maan - 2
Geet - 1

For women I feel its more mental. As long as desired closure is given by their men, I think women succumb equally to animal attraction and impulses. Would you agree?

Yes there is quite a bit of dialogue exchange...whether its mirthful or not, I will let you decide. I know I suck at comedy. 😆

i totally agree that women succumb equally...
i even say that women are more difficult to satiate than men...
they take more time and pleasure😆
Edited by libra25 - 12 years ago