FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 - Page 15

loved the update...

awesome ff! finally caught up with all the parts... can u plz pm when u do the next parts... thnx!

lovely part

haha i love  geet!!!! Can't wait to see what happens next xxx

Awesome update Haasini.
Geet was in ecstasy that Maan sent those flowers but
poor thing was disappointed when she knew it was from Rishabh.
They fought twice already 😕.
Maan was from the beginning  a man of very few words.
And there is a lot of difference before and after marriage in men ;may not be all.
But looks like that is true in Maan's case.
The fear that she might slip away from the relation is gone
and somewhere the fact that they are going to be together forever
tends to make him take her for granted . may be. my POV.
May be thats why there were no surprises,acknowledgements and
excuses.
Again my POV . As it happens with many married couples though
love is undercurrent it is not exposed as much as it is before marriage.
Geet seems to not give up. no wonder she is dressed to seduce and kill.
Maan is definitely going to be bowled over this time.
Loved the visuals as always.
saree and nose ring were both fantastic.

Take your own time updating and it is better if u dont finish it by 19th
we greedy people always crave for more.

Hey People...
I just want to call out to the way Maan and Geet came together. They never dated period. There was no time spent together to even compare and contrast on the changes that marriage has brought about in Maan.
Maan and Geet met at a time, when she was separating from a life that was soon to become her past. And then another instance of personal trauma (in form of assault) in her life brought them more closer.
Of course, she ran away from him at his first proposal, thinking getting together would be a rebound. Ultimately she had to give in with the wise words of Daadi and from the scheming of Daadi and Meera.

They get married soon after that without a period of getting to know each other. And after that is when their true time together as a couple has started. Even with that they had so many testing times ranging from Geet's ear ailment to the divorce filing date to Naini coming back home.

So there is no baseline to be compared for either Maan or Geet. Neither knows the other. All of it is to show up now.
Hope this helps to treat this married couple different from others you have seen and let me know your thoughts as well.

People, I have a few fillers and would like to know if you have a few scenes you want me to write for NY times. Do let me know and its going to be first come first serve basis. Please PM me the scene instead of posting here.

Cheers
Hasini
Edited by 6thElement - 12 years ago

My bad Haasini
I misinterpreted
need to rush now
will come back and edit my comments.

Originally posted by: Ramhari

My bad Haasini
I misinterpreted
need to rush now
will come back and edit my comments.

No please dont. I love it when I get to hear your thoughts. Another reader pointed out that even though Maan has been a man of few words, everyone got to read him through the monologues. But then off late there has been less and less updates from his POV. I agree to it and I will try and put up some updates from his perspective. Hope that will help to get into his head. Really, don't change your comments.

Hasini


Edited by 6thElement - 12 years ago

R! In hope to get some response to my post, since you are in mood to respond!😉

<edit>

I agree with Ramhari... where there is a difference between Maan before and after marriage! We have got to know Maan and Geet only through their monologues and not through their conversations! In the past Maan's monologue gave us look into his mind and heart, for which is currently missing! Oh! How I wish you would write more on Maan's monologue! :)

<part 85> At the beginning of the update, I felt sorry for Geet, but as I progressed towards the end ... Oh! I felt so so so sorry for Maan! poor guy, does he even know what his wife is capable off. <lol> If anyone should give Maan a lesson on seduction, it should only be Geet <high & dry!>. I feel as though Geet is about to tell a <secret!>  to Maan cause to me secrets seduces everyone!

<filler> I would like to see Maan and Geet visit a winery... and have them jump into a grape barrel.. wet, wild and sexy! 😳 will PM you the glory details.:)

Edited by night13 - 12 years ago

As you say Haasini
Agree that they got married under different circumstances
but i felt that there was a difference between this one and the one
in niagara falls or india.
Again my POV and also this may be either due to Naini's presence
or because we are completely oblivious to Maan's POV.
Anyway we are more than eager to know what is going on inside Maan.
Thanks for the reply.