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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
nice update 

Yash is such a nutcase ... how long will they succeed in hiding the truth from vicky

continue soon

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 6:33pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
awesome update.

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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 4:18pm | IP Logged

Recape-

'''''..Maan say to her that  how many time he had said her that don't call him cute ha then also '''''''u don't listen '''''ha Jaan'''''.well now that u call me cute '''''.it's ur punishment ''''''''.time ''''''''.jaan so are you ready for it ha ''''''''''  

Part 4

  MAAN''. Kya kar rahai hai apa ha'''.maan ''''..".. kya hai.. please  jao na.." GEET said '.. as he moved his hand on her waist.. "Kya Jaan.. tum kitni unromantic ho.." MAAN said patting himself mentally as he knew she would definitely react on this statement.."main tumhe unromantic lagti hoon.." she turned to him nd spoke.. as he nodded shamelessly she continued "Achha to Mr.Romantic koi hai aapki nazar mein jo mujhse zyada romantic ho aur aapki saari shaitaaniyan sehta ho.." GEET asked proudly expecting NO as an answer..

"Haan.. meri ek ex-girlfriend thhi.. vo roz raat ko der tak mujhse baat karti thhi.. kabhi yeh nahi kehti thhi ki Maan PLZ  JAO NA.. main usse bohot pyar karta thha.. aur vo bohot romantc bhi thhi aur Hot nd Sexy bhi.. " Maan said chuckling at GEET's expressions..

"Tumhe apni ex-girlfriend mujhse zyada romantic lagti hai.. aur Hot nd Sexy bhi.. huh..! theek hai ab mujhse matt mangna apni morning aur night kiss ussi se le lena.. bada aaya Mr.Romantic.." GEET said huffing nd turned.. now her back was facing him.. He smiled at her bickering.. nd tried to turn her but in vain.. everytime he tried to take hold of her waist she would jerk his arm off her saying "MAAN main bohot unromantic aur boring hoon so please  jao haye se.."

MAAN knew he had hit the wrong nerve so to save himself from the blasting volcano, he thought of letting her cool down abit nd then try again''but when after a few minutes he moved to her, he realized she was already gone.. ''..but he said to himself love you jaan lot''''But as soon as he saw the time that he was getting late '''..he gone to take a shower''''..and got ready for work '..after getting ready ''.as soon as he was going to go his Angle 's room '''..his cell ring  he picked up and looked at it and picked up because it was from office''''''.. for remanding him that today was very important meeting '''..he thanks the person'''''and headed toward''''his Angle's room''''. And looked at her ''''' she was sleeping '''''.he kissed her head and said sorry to her because he will not able to spend time with her today as today was very busy day for him and so much work reamed to complete''''..and he might came late to at night so'''''.sorry my beautiful Angle'''' because he knew how much his daughter misses him '''''.. one last time he kisses her and headed to down'''..Today was also a day RAJI  was coming back from trip''she had inform MAAN but he forgot to tell GEET'''..She was going to came by herself because her friend where going to drop her home so ''''..Maan was not worried'''''..  as soon as he came down he was heading toward kitchen GEET saw him coming and was putting breakfast on table ''''.at that time bell ring ''''and he went to open the door ''''..As soon as RAJI saw her JIJU she hugged him and told him that she missed him and DI lot to and her ANGLE To''.and soon GEET came and saw her and '''. And then both sisters hugged each other ''. Then GEET asked her why did not she informed that she was coming today ''''..Then RAJI told her that she told JIJU then RAJI said that he did not told you ha''then GEET looked at Maan''''.and she did not said anything ''..and then at RAJI and said that '''''.he told me but I forgot '''..then GEET told her that go and fresh up and take same rest '''''''.RAJI thought that something was up with her DI and JIJU'''''.but then she thought that she will ask later ''''.because she was very tired ''''. She gone to bed ''''.again MAAN cell rang'.. as soon as RAJI left '''''the person asked that why he is not in office because it getting late so'''.then MAAN says that he will be there in 15 min '''''..and cut the call saw that GEET was looking at him he tried to talk to her but '''''she just glare at him by showing her eyes that '''''''.she was anger''''''''..MAAN thought that he will talk to her at night '''''as it was getting late for him'''''''.so in silent MAAN and GEET eat''''''.and soon they find they are breakfast'.as MAAN was leaving he told GEET that he will be late as he was going for Meeting and don't know how much time it will take so''''.he said that wait for him '..and kissed her forehead and leaves for office '''''he knew that GEET will not talk to him''''..so he have to work hard for getting back and have to say sorry in special way so''..Soon GEET also cleaned kitchen'''''''and goes to her ANGLE room''to look after her''''..and to get her ready for day'''. As she was taking time for getting ready ''''crying little bit'' ''''.but soon GEET put her in Bathtub'''and she started to simile '''''GEET late her Play in water for some time ''''..she watched as she played in water with her toys in water '''''..which GEET had handed her''''..and GEET started cleaning her room and also watching her while cleaning''''.after cleaning the room she took HER ANGLE out''.and dread her '''and made her ready and took her down''''. For feeding her something as it was her ''''eating time'.as soon as she reached kitchen she made mac and chess ''..she started feeding her '''''..and soon RAJI joined her and GEET asked her '''''what she would like to have ''..she told that anything as she want to eat homemade food so''''.soonANGLE saw her and simile at her and she want her to take out from baby sit but'''''GEET saw that and told RAJI No '''.because  then she will not eat and then she will cry '''''and MAAN is also not here so it will be hard ''''to make her stop so ''''leave her their late her eat fast then ''''RAJI listen to her DI and only Kisses her going by near to her and start feeding as GEET was gone to kitchen to bring food for RAJI'''soon they fished and went to front room and started talking about random stuff and ANGLE started playing with her toys and that . Then RAJI finally asked "DI'''aap JIJU se naraaz hain..? You guys were not ur usual selves when he was leaving this morning..." RAJI said as a matter of factly''..GEET made a face listening to RAJI And told her about her And MAANs conversation in morning about being Unromantic.. While RAJI had a hard time controlling her giggles.. "You guys act so nave at times.. Achha to ab aap kya plan kar rahi hain..?" RAJI asked.. "Nothing much just a reality check for Mr. Romantic.." GEET said smirking'''''SOON RAJI PHONE RANG SHE WENT TO PICK UP''.saying that she will be back'

 

 

  MEET was looking at her mother for past 15 minutes'..As she was tired playing alone'''.. She was constantly thinking something and not at all paying attention to her'.. Though she knows that it's a very rare case but her felt a bit anxious so her moved closer and sat just besides GEET. Realizing the movement GEET came out of her thoughts of MAAN and looked at her daughter sitting beside her in the same posture as her..
As she shifted abit, even
MEET Shifted.. She passed a hand through her hair and MEET again copied her.. she then reacted "MEETaap mama ko copy kyun kar rahe ho..?"

"Mamma guchha hai..?" she asked VERY cutely.. nd that melted GEET in an instant.. she took him in her lap and kissed him.. "Nahi baby.. mamma apne good gal se gussa thodi ho sakti hai.."

"Phir abhi mamma ne MEET kyun bola..? mamma to pyar se
ANGLE kehti hain.." his innocence made GEET smile wider.. she always wonders how her cutie daughter manages to surprise her with her innocence and charm every time.. she was surely her best and biggest stress burster.. "Sorry baba.. but mamma apne ANGLE se bilkul gussa nahi hai.. mera ANGLE to kitna pyara hai.."

Listening to her MEET hugged her nd kissed her cheek.. "Mamma.. na bohot achha hai.. mujhe na apake saath khelke bohot achha lagat hai.. GEET couldn't help but smile at her Daughter..


While MEET gave her dimpled smiled in return..just like her daddy '''

They then played games and chatted for a long time and soon ANGLE went to bed  and then GEET was just watching her daughter sleeping as she was in ANGLE room she did not here the ring of phone so RAJI picked''..never knew till RAJI came out of her room''  and  told GEET'''that MAAN called her to inform her that  he would be home in an hour or so.. it was 9pm by then.. When she told GEET about MAAN arrival.. Getting the information GEET went to her room to act on the plan for giving HER Mr. Romantic a shock of his life'''''''''''.

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Edited by madhavipatil - 07 May 2011 at 4:24pm

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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 4:40pm | IP Logged
amazing update
pls cont soonnn
cant wait to know what
geet i'll do with MR romantic
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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 4:51pm | IP Logged
Nice update
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Nice update...
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