OS | ~Limits of the Heart~ - Page 5

Originally posted by: -Fatima-

hiya grace🤗
My goodness garce this OS is damn damn amazing u r really brilliant in writing totally love reading this OS.really really sweet & cute love the way u describe all the thingz.U should give more on shotz try as a matter of fact whatever u write is alwayz fabulous
keep rocking
luv
Fatima

Awww, Fatima...your making me 😳 thank you for liking the One Shot.

I'll try to come back with more One Shots based upon these characters/personalities.

Thanks for taking the time to comment 😃

Originally posted by: ...Harshiti...

Grace oh grace your just awesome at writing!👏

another Great piece of writing...Loved the OS

It was a delight to see Prem in a whole new character

I could actually imagine Premeer/Harshiti fighting like kids!😍😆, their just really good at it

and It was so sweet when prem kept on remembering Heer after she had left, good that he realised his love and didn't let her go!

when prem was saying all those dialogues about you deserve someone better than me and I'll talk to your dad and you'll be free from me > that just took my heart away I could feel his pain of losing his love even before he got it and the fake smile he had to put on awww but he did get heer so All is well!😃

Their love confession and becoming one part was so cutee😳

The whole OS was very sweet and cute...would love to read more OS's from your side grace...please do write more I love reading your stuff its just sooo good!

Abby,

Thanks for liking the One Shot.  I really wanted to give Prem a new avatar.  I didn't get a chance to really get into the goonda side of him.  I'm hoping to get a chance to do that in another OS...I have some ideas 😉  But we got a little glimpse of Prem being unreasonable, stubborn, and well being ungentleman like.  He really could care less about Heer when they were fighting but then Preet used the magical word divorce and Prem freaked out 😆 even though he was trying not to do that.

We always love it when we see the goonda fall in love...they start acting all cute and sweet 😳 😆

Thanks for taking the time to comment 😃 😳Edited by iheartChai - 12 years ago

fab OS...i loved ur concept...it was so different...realy loved it...such cute luv story...
d premeer fight in 1st chap...fine fine fine ...i was literaly laughin 😆
den their patch up...loved their kisses ☺️...u described it vry wel...
u r awesome writer...keep up d good work...👍🏼

Originally posted by: sadhz

fab OS...i loved ur concept...it was so different...realy loved it...such cute luv story...
d premeer fight in 1st chap...fine fine fine ...i was literaly laughin 😆
den their patch up...loved their kisses ☺️...u described it vry wel...
u r awesome writer...keep up d good work...👍🏼

Thanks for liking the One Shot and taking the time to comment 😃

I may even do a Meet one but I will see how the responses are...how is that for blackmail 😆 😛...Grace you blackmailer, I didn't expected this from you!!!😆😆

Hey ..

Awesome OS...

awesome os grace

Originally posted by: sharmeeli

I may even do a Meet one but I will see how the responses are...how is that for blackmail 😆 😛...Grace you blackmailer, I didn't expected this from you!!!😆

But seriousely LOVED the OS!!!!👏👏

😆Preet was so funny when he firstly didn't wanted to go to talk to Prem but Balraj made him😆😆 

Premeer making up was really sweet😳

plzzz write more OS😳 and thanks for the PM dear😳

😈 I am a blackmailer 😆 Yes, I'm thinking of a Meet type OS...we will see what ends up happening.

Thanks for liking the One Shot.

Originally posted by: Pumpkinn

Hey ..

It was a wonderful OS !

Loved it !

I really enjoyed reading !

While reading , I was feeling that it should never end !

But great work !

Keep up the good work !

Thnk for the pm !

Thanks for liking the OS and taking the time to comment 😃