OS | ~Limits of the Heart~ - Page 2

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by princess5341


its awesome
 i luved it
u should turn it into a ff or ss!!!!


Thanks for comment 😳

I don't know if I have time to turn it into a FF or SS...
but I may be back with other One Shots based upon these characters/personalities.
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by prettyfulwishes


Graceee.
What are you trying to do to me?

I just love your writing. & I love Premeer more because of your writing. *sigh*

OMG. Preet is so adorable. He's such a child sometimes.. but it's cute. :D

& please, please, please make a Meet OS. I always read your stuff to see if Meet is there somewhere (I know, I'm bad). & you write about Meet so awesomely. :D

<3 you,
Sabi. :)


Hi Sabi,

Wow really?  Loving Premeer more because of my writing? 😳  That's quite a compliment coming from a Meet fan.

Thanks for liking my work.

Preet is so adorable...I loved his fun childish ways.  He was always so entertaining to watch.  Probably the most consistent character throughout the run of Kis Desh.

I see that is one vote on a Meet OS...I have something planned in the back of my mind 😉


Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by premiti


wow...amazing story!! loved it!!


Thanks for taking the time to comment 😃  Thank you for loving the OS 😳
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by uswah


Another Amazing piece of work ...
Plz do continue ...


Unfortunately this is a One Shot so it won't be turned into a FF or SS
but I may return with other One Shots using these characters/personalities 😃
Posted: 12 years ago
awesomeee too good lovelyyy shot
Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks Grace for this wonderful shot.

Loved Preet calling Balraj 'Pops' its so funny.

Heer fighting with Prem and leaving the house. if she didn't like him then she should chase him out. why she is going out?

There Fine fine is very good. their emotions expressed in silent way.

They way Prem talking to himself and Preet giving some sense to him by one word 'divorce' really wonderful, that made him think about his life with Heer.

On the way he encounters some scenes which opens his eyes.

Most adorable part, confessing their love. Prem telling those gave me thrilling and i really wanted to read Heer's reaction side by side.

Okay we can't think Prem as arrogant person for long. He changed upside down because his name is Prem.

Grace its good work to help us to see Prem as unloving person in the start. Thanks for this wonderful piece.
Posted: 12 years ago
it was so nice yaar i really loved it you wrote it so well and yeah do write os you are so good in writing 
Posted: 12 years ago
ahhh...an one shot finally...
loved it...
Posted: 12 years ago
dat was <3 <3 <3 <3
 
 
lovin it! jst luved it! luv the way they fighted! sayin FINE ! dan preet cumin n makin prem undrstd of heer goin away! dan prem realisin dat he luvs heer! the confession! makin out evrythin was jst aowsum! luvd it!!!!
 
thx for d pm! dear! n yep! wil b wa8in for ur SS n FF! :))))
Posted: 12 years ago
It was awesome!! Loved it! hehehe preet eating the tea biscuit was a fun part...Prem and heers scene were sooo good!! 😍
thanks sooo much for the pm!! 🤗

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