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Maaneet OS-The Conspiracy! Part 4 On Pg 21 (Page 6)

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 11:21am | IP Logged
wow...mayu that was a great os...Clap
loved it...
beautiful potrayal of geet's agony and distress.
could not have been written more beautifully...
bravo !!mayu bravo!!!Clap
good job!!keep it up.
do add me to the pm list dear.

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 11:57am | IP Logged
Lovely writing dear... ...thanks a lot for the PM..! Sorry for being a lil late to reply.. but thoroughly enjoyed.. Heart

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -afsha-

That was fab
Loved it
Continue soon

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 10:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -afsha-

That was fab
Loved it
Continue soon

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Originally posted by NaGeSwArI

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Originally posted by kashndsel4eva

awesome 
loved it
plzzz con this
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
Xxx

Hey Thanks so much!Hug

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 10:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by moonlight44

hey its good do continue!!!

Thanks!

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Originally posted by sweet cherry

it was amazing
do continue

Thanks!

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Originally posted by hinal_maaneet

Mayu
loved it n plzzz continue

Thanks HinalBig smile

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
Mayuuu Hug 

OMG...Loved the concept...But why this sad sad story...Anyways loved it..As usual you are a fantastic writer..loved the way you portrayed Geet's emotions..

She was ready to go the temple; the mosque; even the church just to plead to the Almighty that save my Maan ..
So aptly put..when a loved one is in trouble or pain, we think of the Almighty who is present in various forms..we pray to each and every god present on Earth.
The madness in her voice and the loss of her life was clearly visible; 
Wow...loved the emotion and usage of words here.. 
Must say Mayu..you are amazing with writing, you can create wonders..love the way you feel each and every word and then write it down. please do continue..or I will take danda in my hand and run behind you..Love you...



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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 12:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by londongirl95

please please please please continue!!
i want to know what happens next!!!

Thanks so much!

Continuing very soon:)Big smile

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Originally posted by maankigeet4ever

awesome Mayu...that was written really well...u emoted Geet's emotions really well...u should go on and write more :)

Thanks!

Will write more:)

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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 12:43am | IP Logged
nice OS...!
loved it...please add me to ur pm list...!

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