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Maaneet OS-The Conspiracy! Part 4 On Pg 21 (Page 22)

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 4:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Mayu-

Holaaa Guys I am back with another update!

This update is dedicated to my Twinieee ShradzzzHug

Geet was in a rush to reach the hospital; she had heard her name!

"Mujhe mere Maan ne pukara hai. Main aa rahi hoon Maan; aapki Geet aa rahi hai aap ke paas. Main aa rahi hoon Maan."
 
 
Reassuring herself again; wiping her tears away; she recollected what her daughter had said.
"Ma rote nahi hai; humien papa ne sikhaya hai na; ki har mushkil ke saamna karo; use bhaago mat; phir dekhna bhagwaan hamari zaroor madad karenge."
 
The innocence in her daughter's voice and the words she spoke were so true. I will fight; may what may come. Till his Geet is alive; destiny can do nothing to Maan. It will have to first fight with me. Saying this she opened her car door; and started driving and she soon spotted the same Dargah where she realized that she loves Maan. She knew that my prayers will be answered here.
 
She spotted a Fakir Baba; she stopped him. She knelt in front of him. He held her and made her stand.
 
Baba: "Kya hua beti? Itna kyun ro rahi ho? Yahan aane par Allah apne har bande ki baat sunte hai, unki har muraad poori karte hai. Tumhari kya takleef hai? Andar jaage ke bolo; aur agar sacche dil se dua mangogi to zaroor sunenge."
 
Geet: "Main kuch bhi karoongio Baba; apne zindagi ko bachane ke liye. Main kuck bhi karoongi. Main apne zindagi bachane ke liye; main apne bhi zindagi daav pe laga sakti hoon. Bas mujhe kuch aisa bata dijiye taaki main maan ko bacha sakti hoon. Main kuch bhi karoongi; chahe woh kaam kitna mushkil hi kyun na ho?"
 
"Boliye na Baba; kya karna hoga mujhe taaki bhagwaan mujh par khush ho aur mere Maan bach jaaye."
 
The Baba just closed his eyes and said that with all your heart and soul; if you have let go of your past; the Malik will bless you! He will listen my child.
 
Baba: "Andar jaao aur mannat mango beti. Allah tum par rahem kare."
 
Geet rushed inside the Dargah! Her only hope now; her only hope was the Malik now; and with the Baba instilling confidence in her; she ran towards the Dargah and fell in front of him. she prayed; weeping; trying to draw some peace; some amount of comfort in the Dargah; she prayed.
 
Geet: "Maine bahut suna hai aapke baare; main aaj aapke saamne bheek mangti hoon; apne pati ko bachane ke bheek. Aapka sirk ek ishara; main kuch bhi karoongi unhe bacahne ke liye. Mere liye unke sivay aur koi nahi hai is duniya main; woh mere aatma hai; meri zindagi. Meri beti ke pita; woh mera saaya hai. Aapko unhe theek karna hi hoga. Mere khaatir. Yahin woh Dargah hain jahan aapne hi mujhe yeh yakeen dilaya tha ki maan hi mera saaya hai; meri zindagi hai. Ye zindagi to aapki hi den he; to aap ise mujhse wapas kaise cheen sakte ho? Kaise?  "
 
Saying this she came out of the Dargah and sat under a tree. Trying to recollect what happened. It was high time she called Dadima and told her everything. Only she can help me in this situation. I was stupid of not letting her know. How can you be so stupid Geet that I didn't call her?
 
She opened the car door and with a lightening speed went straight to Khurana Mansion; and ran into her room. She rushed into her arms; and Dadima was trying to calm her down.
 
Dadima: "Kya hua Geet bete? Aap kuch bol kyun nahi rahi hai? Sab theek hai na? Sia ko kuch hua; ya phir maan ko?"
 
As soon Maan leaves her mouth; Geet sobbed again; and went ahead;
 
Geet: "Dadi woh maan ka accident hua hai. Main wahi se aa rahi hoon. Maine aapko sab kuch pehle hi batana chahiye tha; mujhe maaf kar dijiye. Main nahi chahti thi ki aapko koi takleef ho. Maan aapki jaan hai; main jaanti hoon Dadima. "
 
Dadima went in a shock; she didn't know what to reply. She just held Geet's hand and went to the temple located in the mansion. She prayed; gave her the Dhaaga and said;
 
"Geet agar aapka aur Maan ka pyaar saccha hai to dekhna; Maan theek honge. Main jaanti hoon ki jab tak meri Geet Maan ke saath hai; maut unhen choo bhi nahi sakti. Aap jaiyiye; main bas kuch khaane ka saaman leke aati hoon. Main jaanti hoon ki aapne kuch nahi khaaya hai; aur jab Maan ghar aayenge to mujhe datenge ki main unke Geet ka khyal nahi rakha."
 
Geet's tear stricken face for the first time showed a smile; a genuine smile. She hugged Dadima and went back to the hospital. She knew he will be safe. And I will be back in his arms; tonight and forever more! We are a couple blessed by destiny and she can't take away my life so easily. I will fight no matter how difficult it is to save Maan.
 
With a array of hope; she left! In the hospital Maan's pulse and blood pressure were returning to normal. Geet sensed that Maan called me near him; he needs me right besides him.
 
Was it a hallucination or a reality?
 
So guys how were it? I hope I have lived up to the standards of all the Maaneet fans! So if you want me to continue; please do let me know.
 
Positive criticism is always welcome!
 
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Love And Luck Always!
Mayuuu
 



sorry 4 late reply..LOL,,i was busy wid studies...Dead,,loved d part,,very well written,,,awee my poor geet , she 's feeling so helplessConfused...

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 4:30am | IP Logged
part- 4...it was really touching part,,but mayu why did u make maan sleep into coma, i was expecting his recovery in this updateConfused,,,,u better make him recover soon in next update n maneet milanHugnahi to i will come after u wid my panLOL,,,chalo now iam feeling sleepyPinch n i hv to finish some boring chapters tooDead...


Edited by SlovHanda - 21 May 2011 at 6:33am

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 8:03am | IP Logged
Twinieee Hug
Jhappiya and papiya to ya LOL
Okay, I am speechless and I got goose bumps while reading your update Shocked
It's heart wrenching part CryCry I almost cried just by reading your update! I felt the Geet pain Wink
Tum kitni achchi ho when it comes to expressing characters' feeling and pain girl. All I can say is brilliant thought and beautifully written down ...hats off to my twinieee ClapClap

Please let the miracle happen and get Maan out of coma sooner than later coz I can't handle this sadness in their lives ROFL
They should be living happy and peaceful life now coz they deserve it =) LOL

Waiting for your next part...keep it up!

Love ya twinieee Heart

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 8:26am | IP Logged

wow mayu wat a lovely updat i so much wanted it 2 nt end i ws jus readin n radin n even didnt realiz ki bus it over aww mayu update it soon dear waitin..geet bichari ko aur ma tadpao wase bhi wo apni rankin se slip hp gayi hai ...thodi to khushi do next wale updat mai v want maan back..mujhe tumhara idea pata chal gaya tum geet se siay ko maan ke paas leke jaogi na...Winkwell dis one is a long one rit??LOL



Edited by shradha14 - 27 May 2011 at 5:43am

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 1:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by NaGeSwArI

awesome update dearSmile
now im eagerly  waiting for your next update dearSmile

Thanks so much Nageswari:)

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 1:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MaaneetLuverr

Another Wonderful update mayu::Clap
Annie should hav told maaneet together otherwise ther wouldn't hav been a fight between them
Yess only our darling sia can save maan now
Can't w8 for nxt part
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

Awwieee thanks so much!

Can I know your nameEmbarrassed

Continuing very soon:)

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 1:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BhartiKhushi909

nice part 

Thanks BhartiHug

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