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Abhiya FF: Entwined Bk-1 .Ended. (Page 32)

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cuteshrishti

<font color="#ff0000" size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">hey superb post.Loved it.So whts the new twist?Metz,Pia.Piyali all r different</font>
Thanks! Yeah metz is different bt pia n piyali aren't. Its the same girl. She's been reborn to get back her love n fight her greatest enemies. She'll remember everything soon.

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mijanur

excelent update.pleas update soon.pleas pm me when you update next time.i am allready in your buddy list.
Thanks 4 liking. Sorry i missed you out while sending pm's
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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mangona

awesome der
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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
yaar itna cute update tha na k bas kiya batown...u r sucha superb writer plz add me to ur pm listt plzzz em sending u add request.
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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 2:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rehanasadique

yaar itna cute update tha na k bas kiya batown...u r sucha superb writer plz add me to ur pm listt plzzz em sending u add request.
Thanks 4 liking rehana! Send me a frnd request n i'll pm u nxt tym.
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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 5:42pm | IP Logged
wao so much suspense...i love ur ff really alot...pls continue soon...n pm me

Sanu.


Edited by Soulmate_Sana - 17 June 2011 at 5:42pm
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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 11:01am | IP Logged
A Horrifying Memory. As Abhay entered the huge mansion with an unconscious Pia sleeping in his arms, he saw Haseena sitting at the fireplace reading an old mysterious book. "Mom? What are you doing here at this hour of the night? I mean you were supposed to be out hunting with dad",he said trying to hide Pia in his arms. "What did you think Abhay? You thought I'll never come to know of this?",she asked gazing at the fire. "I don't get you",lied Abhay. "Why are you getting attached to this girl? That night you lied to me that there was no human other than Avanti at home. I knew she was in your room. I saw you kissing her that night. Why Abhay why? Answer me",she demanded. Abhay sighed and sat opposite to her still holding Pia in his arms. "Mom this girl is in danger. The family of werewolfs for whom we have come to Dehradun has entrapped her. They've adopted her with an unknown evil motive. I just saved her that night after a car accident and came to know that she's a Saxena",he explained. "Saxena? That's Raveena's evil werewolf family!",said Haseena. "You are right mom. But I don't know why they are entrapping her. Two of them are even at college to look after her. Its true that I fell for her 'cause Mom she reminded me of Maithli",he said. "Maithli? Your long lost love?",she asked. "Yeah for whose death I turned a vampire",he said. "But mom trust me I can control my love. I just want to protect her and finish this werewolf family",he continued. "Then it's okay. I'm with you my son",she said patting his head. "Gosh she's all wet! What happened to her?",she asked. Abhay smiled,"I behaved rudely with her and she tried to drown herself in a drunken state". "Poor girl. Don't you ever hurt her! Don't break her heart Abhay. She must be loving you a lot. Don't give her false hopes and then just abandon her. Stay in your limits from the very first day",she said. "I will",he nodded. He got up and turned to go upstairs. But he stopped and went up to her. "I never knew of you greatness mom but today I found that I'm the luckiest guy ever. You're the best mom anyone can ever have",he said. "Now stop it! You don't have to flirt with your mom",she said smiling. "I love you mom",he said.   Back in his room, Abhay placed Pia on the sofa wondering what to do. She gained consciousness and started asking,"My head's hurting". Abhay gently caressed her forehead stroking through her wet hair. He leaned to her ear softly whispering,"Pia? Can you hear me?" "Hmm?",she asked her eyes half opened. "Look you're totally wet so you need to change. I'm giving you a dress,you'll wear it. Okay?",he whispered. "Okay",she weakly uttered. He led her delicate body to the washroom and handed her the dress. She was still weak and wasn't in her proper sense. The world seemed to be spinning around her but she still managed to change quickly. Abhay was waiting outside and when she opened the door she fell on his chest unable to balance herself. She seemed so helpless. Abhay picked her up in his arms and led her to his bed. "Abhay?",she murmered. "Hmm?",he answered. "I'm hungry",she said. "Okay I'll get you something to eat",he said placing her under a blanket. He quickly rushed to the kitchen which was never used. There was nothing he could find for his love to eat. He got in his car and went to a restaurant. He ordered some pasta and a pizza. He quickly headed home with the food boxes. As he opened the door to his bedroom he found Pia sleeping. He again whispered in her ears,"Honey wake up I've got something to eat". Pia woke up still in a daze. Abhay took her on his lap resting her delicate body on his chest. She was still sleepy but he fed her patiently.    At midnight, he was sitting at the left side of his bed while Pia was deep lost in chains of slumber. He was staring at her face. Gosh! She looked so divine while she slept. Suddenly he visualised another vision. Flash: Some people were dragging Pia away and stabbing several knives in her frail helpless body. He saw himself tied up as if he was powerless. The most confusing thing was that the people stabbing his beloved weren't normals. They were vampires too. But not the Ultraviolets. They were the Infrareds. Pia's horrifying shrieks and cries deafened his ears. He woke up from the bed and went to the window. "What was this Pia? This vision isn't fake. There has to be something very deadly. Something is been hidden from me. I've to find out from Naina. Only she knows me from the beginning of time. Since I was born as an innocent human. She's my own sister. She must be knowing the meaning of these visions",he said staring at the moonless dark night.   Unknown to him, Naina was at the doorpost hearing everything. "Please don't question me bro. Whatever I did was to lessen your agony. I just can't allow those horrifying memories to come back to you or Pia if she's really back in her old tortured soul",she thought sadly.

Edited by I-love-Roses - 18 June 2011 at 1:20pm

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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 11:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Soulmate_Sana

wao so much suspense...i love ur ff really alot...pls continue soon...n pm me

Sanu.

Hey sanu! Thanks for the compliment dear.

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