Abhiya FF: Entwined Bk-1 .Ended. - Page 91

Awesome..but poor Piya...and Abhay too..

awesome update. .
I feel so sorry for abhiya!
I hope. . Naina makes pia understand & pia accepts abhay!
Continue soon
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HEY I LOVE READING UR FF...IT'S  INTERESTING...EAGERLY WAITING FR NEXT UPDATE...U R REALLY VERY CREATIVE...UR PIECE OF WORK IS  IMPRESSIVE...KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK...ALL THE BEST!! Edited by prerna26 - 12 years ago

HEY SHALINI😃

AWESOME UPDATE DEAR👏👏👏...

OMG...THIS CANT BE HAPPENING YAAR...PIA CAN NEVER HATE ABHAY YAAR...

I REALLY FEELS BAD FOR THIS TWO😭😭😭😭😭...

HOPE NAINA DO SOMETHING ...

HOPE PIA ACCEPT ABHAY THE WAY HE IS ASAP...

PLZ UPDATE SOON DEAR ...CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE...

HAV A NICE DAY

LUV U

SUNITA

hei shalini,
expected reaction from pia..
but please make her accept him as soon as possible..
coz she cant hate him forever..
she love him with each n every pore of her body n soul..
so next update make it quick please..

It was totally heartbreaking  😭 😭

awesome update!!touching!!i hope pia accepts him soon!!update soon!

awesome yaar.. wats gonna happen now.. i can't c abhiya parting ways.. plz plz continue soon.. thanx for d pm..lol.

fab part shalini👏👏👏👏
u av done an outstanding job...specially d dialouges u av used when abhay was trying to convience pia dat even he is vampire , bt he was never bad to her...dey were simply beautiful
this confrontation was totally different n unxpected, yes n no both r running hand in hand here
looking forward to naina's part as a cupid nw
continue soon

wow amazing update yaar.So sad poor Abhay.Ohh hope Pia forgive him soon & agn they become one😊