Abhiya FF: Entwined Bk-1 .Ended. - Page 77

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Yipee I am first yes yes
Awesome wonderful gr8 lovely I guess I am short of words finally Abhiya became one looking forward for next updateEdited by pari_smart - 12 years ago

hei got the update..
*off to read*
*edited*
hei shalini,
a passionate update..
it is hard to resist if someone wears saree like that n in their case both r very much in love..
it must have taken immense control for abhay to take her to shopping without doing anything..
but wat was this??😲😲😲
abhay lost control n pia succeeded in seducing him..
abhay made love with pia..
did he not think abt telling the truth before doing it..
i dont want her to regret for making love with abhay after knowing his truth..
so more complications r awaited right..
bring it on..
continue soon..
Edited by RB81 - 12 years ago

hei shalini,
a suggestion..could u make that song in different colour..it is like running text..r make it line by line instead of continuous one..

it is really nice...

romanticcc

hey shalini awesome update I loved it yaar.Superb.Abhiya romance was damm cute.Oh I guess vansh is near + Abhay identity is yet 2 reveal.I wnt 2 c how Pia will react 2 tht?😊

Awesome Update👏^^Loved ABHIYA's scene❤️❤️,, I think dat it's Vansh who was their//N i really want Pia 2 know abt Abhay 2 c her reaction😲''' N accept Abhay👍🏼!! I think dat Pia will turn into a VAMPIRE in order 2 married abhay😊;;aww a cutE Vampire(Raichand) familY:)😃

Lovely update...awesome...

Wow ! Wat a passionate update!
Pia tried to seduce abhay. .that she devil. .hehe
omg! Wat problem. ..i hope pia accepts abhay after knowing his truth. . .thanks for the pm. .continue soon
tc

super duper hawt and romantic update