Abhiya FF: Entwined Bk-1 .Ended. - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
Precap: He urgently held her bleeding head and asked,"What's your name? Tell me! Quick"

She was fainting but answered vaguely,"P...PI...A...". She collapsed in his arms.

"PIA?!",he shrieked to regain her consciousness.
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was good👏👏
the surprise birthday party for piya was so sweet😳
 ohh who is this mysterious guy😲
thanks for the pm😊
 update soon😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mansim

it was good👏👏

the surprise birthday party for piya was so sweet😳

ohh who is this mysterious guy😲

thanks for the pm😊

update soon😉

Thank u! Come on don't tell me that you couldn't guess who he is
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry for replying late. just finished my u.s. his exam, and have chemistry at 7:00 p.m. here. But , as soon as I finished my test. I came running to see r p.m. and check if u have updated or not. I love this ff. U r such a awesome writer. It's too good. And , the surprise party the best part. I am guessing abhiya are going to meet in next update. Plz make it longer. I know you are through ur phone, but can't help feeling greedy for longer updates. ur a such a amazing writer. anyway, g2g. update soon.🤗 Edited by syria2014 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: syria2014

sorry for replying late. just finished my u.s. his exam, and have chemistry at 7:00 p.m. here. But , as soon as I finished my test. I came running to see r p.m. and check if u have updated or not. I love this ff. U r such a awesome writer. It's too good. And , the surprise party the best part. I am guessing abhiya are going to meet in next update. Plz make it longer. I know you are through ur phone, but can't help feeling greedy for longer updates. ur a such a amazing writer. anyway, g2g. update soon.🤗

All the best for your exams! Baby my fingers are paining badly so didn't type more. Yup abhiya will meet n it's gonna be very interesting
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Posted: 12 years ago
hei shalini,
that part was nice..friends throwing surprise party,,family members playing as if they dont remember her b'day..poor girl..got hit by speeding car..continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG Abhay save Piya
Awesome start
Thanks for d PM
Posted: 12 years ago
gr8 start of this ff.piya get hurt on her birthday.waiting for abhay's introduction.pleas update soon.thank for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice start sweetie...I'll give a detailed comment after the next or maybe two updates when I understand the story a bit more...
Love,
Nidhi.😊🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Dear Amazing Update.. Loved d Bday Part.. Wat is gonna happen on Piya's 18th Bday.. Everything is gonna change forever n abt illuminating d dark soul.. Waiting for dis Mystery.. D Mysterious guy must b Abhay.. Eagerly waiting for d next part.. Continue soon.. Thanx for d pm..lol.