OS--Unrequited love

yeah surprised ki how come i m editing my comment so soon . . . even i m . . . u know na i m so lazy to edit . . . anyway . . . I LOVED IT . . . and i would have been on the edge thinking what is gonna happen . . .But yeah i know what is gonna happen so me not on the edge . . . i m loving it . . . trust me had i not known what is gonna happen i would have been bugging u non stop for the next part but now that i know i m happy happy . . . jyada ho gaya na had i known not known n all that . . . anyway moving on . . . i m like . . . What is maan made of . . . i mean for heaven's sake U DO NOT TAKE UR BESTIE ON UR DATE . . . i mean what sorta mind does he have . . . oh wait forget that . . . HOW CAN U ENTER A GIRLS ROOM WHEN SHE IS IN HER TOWEL n which girl leaves her bedroom door open while changing . . . and geet took it lightly . . .  i would have murdered whosever entered my room like that had i been her . . . though i NEVER change in my room . . . SOMETHING CALLED CHANGING ROOM ADJOINED to the washroom is used for that purpose . . . he may b her best frnd, or even the guy she is in love with but come on how canm he take the liberty of entering her room just like that . . . Moving on . . . haila . . . di that movie part was like . . . meri di wapas aa gayi . . . not that u went somewhere but momentarily when u know that barging in her room thing happened you were sleeping otherwise maan wouldnt be all one piece till the end . . . Arjun is a smarty . . . maan gadha arjun just touched her for heaven's sake itna Pojjjeeeccchhhiiivvveee . . .chalo i like it when maan beats the hell out of anyone . . . so i enjoyed it to the T . . .  NOW absence makes the heart grow fonder😆

Edited by 7thHeaven - 12 years ago

Fine Idea.

Realization of love makes the moment precious. Maan need to realize.

Arjun is such a good friend. 

Right the Sequel Soon😊

Edited by serenelove - 12 years ago

Maan is a jerk!! He goes around with other girls but expects Geet to remain single...or worse still marry a guy of his choice!!🤢 Edited by jazzerette - 12 years ago

wow...another lovelyyy OS 

oh Maan and his unaware feelings...

loved it ! Hope you loose it often🤗... please do update soon😳

wow loved it yaar...awsome one !!! we hope u do update the next part sooon

wow nice OS...
interesting...
when will Maan understand that he loves Geet...
thanks for the pm and very much waiting for the sequel...

I'm loving it, buddhu Maan...😛  

Maan needs to be beaten up by Geet, maybe that will knock some sense into him 😆