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New OS!!! ~*Love Happens*~ Updated!! (Page 4)

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Posted: 04 May 2011 at 6:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Hamlet53

ok...bush firstly thanks for the pm... that certainly did it.acted  upon it prompty.  Clap from start to finish...  contemporary setting,a much in demand job of arranging marriages,was quick to hold my attentionfrom the start. Thank you so much hammie...Big smile.his cocky love of himself when eyeing his reflection..whet my appetite. Wow...you mentioned this point...lovely EmbarrassedThe way the story moved was very mature,as it reminded me of individual scene changes on the screen, yet you managed to maintain the consistency of the sequence of events.  Aww thank you so much Big smile There were some one liners ' nice girls have many requirements' that were ingenious and showed his flippant yet mature thinking. Aww u even picked this one out..Lovely again Big smileHis preoccupation of a non commital take on marriage was also very credible,as men usually shy from marriage ,unless pressed by culture and family,and mostly men like him,who have fun! Yeah, i had this in mind while sketching his characterEmbarrassed The way ,he became inclined towards her  was indeed beautifully written, it was it was in the stars. So,bushy,short but certainly meaningful,and well put.xxxwelldone hammie Hammie..i love you for analyzing this OS so beautifully...You picked some points and analyzed them...Love you... Embarrassed

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Posted: 04 May 2011 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
you noe why i'm here LOL

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 8:08pm | IP Logged
Hi Bushy ,Srush ki chulbul  , Hug
 
i am finally catching up with all my readin,,swrriiee for this late comment but u knw na ,,was busy Tongue
 
but here i am ,loved reading this Os ,, truly well written ,,i couldnt stop
 
,,,the way ur story moved from flash bak to present was good ,,and consistent
 
I liked dutta's cool attitude was a flirt but could never find the rite girl becoz she was always before him and he was internaly comparing her standardsLOL i liked their being Kick-Ass partnersLOL totaly opposite but they say na opp attract ..perrrfecct jodi banayi hai  bushy lved it Tongue
 
he was agentle man as usual ,,drop her /escort her to the car
 
finay it was the waiter  who  woke him up ,,LOL  bless the waiter , he probably dint realise wht a punya ka kaam he did ,,LOL
 
keep them coming ,,chulbul
Raj
 
 

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 8:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prncz

Hi Bushy ,Srush ki chulbul  , Hug Hi Raj Hug
 
i am finally catching up with all my readin,,swrriiee for this late comment but u knw na ,,was busy Tongue No probs buddy Big smile
 
but here i am ,loved reading this Os ,, truly well written ,,i couldnt stop Aww thank you Embarrassed
 
,,,the way ur story moved from flash bak to present was good ,,and consistent Thank you again Embarrassed
 
I liked dutta's cool attitude was a flirt but could never find the rite girl becoz she was always before him and he was internaly comparing her standardsLOL i liked their being Kick-Ass partnersLOL totaly opposite but they say na opp attract ..perrrfecct jodi banayi hai  bushy lved it Tongue Yeah i know Perfect Jodi Wink
 
he was agentle man as usual ,,drop her /escort her to the car Aww yes..he is a true gentleman...and Nakku a true gentlewoman LOL
 
finay it was the waiter  who  woke him up ,,LOL  bless the waiter , he probably dint realise wht a punya ka kaam he did ,,LOL Yeah poor guy..usko pata bhi nahi usne kya kiya hai LOL
 
keep them coming ,,chulbul
Raj
 
 

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 2:24am | IP Logged
bush i have edited my commentsBig smile

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 2:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chithoo

bush i have edited my commentsBig smile
i thought Daya only does it in Srushs posts n u too followed herLOLLOLLOL

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 2:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chithoo

res TongueTongue
me second only to my BBS azy...so no probsBig smile
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Bush...your OS in one word...awesome!! Thank you Vij Big smile
Loved everything about it...the simplicity, the reality, the sweetness and ofcourse the happy endingBlushing  Thanks again Embarrassed
 
Dutta...falling in love with his own image in the mirrorBig smiletrait of narcissism common to most guysLOLLOL, eternal dater who even keeps count...sweet the way he corrected nakku...no 32, his being oblivious to his attraction to nakku...and needing a waiter to make him realiseLOL...so much a contender for the lead role of "I hate love stories"Embarrassed Yeah lol LOL
 
Loved Dutta getting all possessive about Nakku, it always is the case isn't it,  "people often tend to take somebody for granted until they realise they may lose that person to someone else" so it needed someone to ask nakku out, to get dutta serious about her.
"I was always possessive about her. First I used to feel insecure because of the guys and now I am insecure because of the girls as well. She is not paying any attention towards me. Damn!" ROFLROFL
bush this really cracked me up.. What shud we call...Dostana or Dostani?? LOL
 
dutta fumbling in his proposal to nakku...whatever avatar he takes he remains true to his nameLOLLOLLOL...so nakku did not allow him to waste his energy and accepted immed...i am sure she was aware of it from the time the two met and was just patiently waiting for him to realise it...Embarrassed Aww yeah Wink
 
Nice touch to the marriage too with kundali, good muhurat and stuff...dutta thanking the priest in his mind for getting all the rituals done and over with quickly...Mrs and Mr.Dutta Patil...sounds like music to the ears...wishing them a happy everlasting life together!!!!Blushing Thank u Embarrassed
 
Thanks bush for the short and sweet treat.Big smile Ur welcome Big smile
 


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