New OS!!! ~*Love Happens*~ Updated!! - Page 2

hey bushy

awesome yaar
what a lovely and romantic os dear...love it


so he finally realize his love for her... but i can't understand ki humara dutta hamesha gadha hi rehna kyu pasand karta hai means always late in realization😆 do rehearsals to propose her and like always naku understands him and accept proposal .But love that line she undestands me and i don't have to waste my energy and talent. He tries to give commission to priest but actually it means bribe 😆

love it and thanks for pm

OH Bushyyy !

Hey Bushy🤗

Fantastic OS👏

I felt as if i was reading a fairy tale😍

I loved how Dutta realised that he always had feelings for her,but never really understood it.Aise hi hum usse gadha thodi bulate hai😉

I also liked how how tried to connect his past memories with his present.👍🏼

 

Thanks a lot for this beautiful story.

Dutta & Nakku -these are just two ordinary names,but together they helped so many FF writers to creat a wonderful love story.❤️

 

Now i will wait for ur next story.😉

Lots of love🤗🤗🤗

Pooja😊

res :)

you had to post while i'm at uni eh😆... i will read & comment later if i dont by later tonight remind me lol


~*~ E D I T E D ~*~

BUSHY 🤗

guess who 😆

Ok first let me start by saying sorry...totally forgot to come back to this :S

Now about your lovely OS ...here I go:

Aww Naku so responsible

OMG 🤣 no way he pointed a finger at her

that to for a game hahaa yeh dutta bhi na *shakes head ...complete childbut cute 😍

Oh ho he is soo protective and lol he soo loves her and doesnt even know it

they are like complete opposites but they attracted 😍


You know when the waiter asked about whether naku was his wife ..


i was wondering why he didn't ask why waiter thought that..


i would've right there and then😆


lol and then he did cuz he was bored ...the things he does in boredom 😆😆

haye haye close his eyes and he see her as bride 😍

aww loved how he was ready to hit someone for flirting and asking for number

even she thought it was cute pinching his cheek and all 😳😆

oh...he soo loves her and he realized it ..thank god and their married woohoo

Bushy well written 👏 Wonderful OS...enjoyed reading it and loved their story...

great work ...do write more :-)

Edited by dg0628 - 12 years ago

ok...bush firstly thanks for the pm... that certainly did it.acted  upon it prompty.  👏 from star to finish...  contemporary setting,a much in demand job of arranging marriages,was quick to hold my attentionfrom the start..his cocky love of himself when eyeing his reflection..whet my appetite. The way the story moved was very mature,as it reminded me of individual scene changes on the screen, yet you managed to maintain the consistency of the sequence of events. There were some one liners ' nice girls have many requirements' that were ingenious and showed his flippant yet mature thinking. His preoccupation of a non commital take on marriage was also very credible,as men usually shy from marriage ,unless pressed by culture and family,and mostly men like him,who have fun! The way ,he became inclined towards her  was indeed beautifully written, it was it was in the stars. So,bushy,short but certainly meaningful,and well put.xxxwelldone hammie

Bushy that was awesome 👏👏👏    very well thought out and well written too.

will be back sooon...

Lovely story, very well written👏👏

Originally posted by: AzMishy

me

yahooo!!!🥳

me 1st!!!

Edited-

wow Bushy!! Thank u very much!! 

Superb mind blowing fantastic [ok now me out of words!!] Thanx again...

Realy beautiful dear!!😳

I too believe that opposite attracts but some where  I read it then attacks too!!😆😆😆

jokes apart!!!😉

The whole story is written on Dutta's POV, Un-knowingly  he so with Nakku😆, I liked it!!

I love the description u gave aout nakku too!!😳 Thank you...

And she is in love with him from the beginning  na, but gdaha being gadha, he took so long to realize it na!!😕😆 LOL 

Wow the waiter is the real matchmaker for these too!!😳 

Glad that some how Nakku realize it and made it easy for dutta otherwise wo gadaha will never learn!!  Lovely emo's LOL

Ohh hoo it took 1 year for them to get a good muhurath😲😲!! But at last they married!! Phew!! Finally...hahaha

So finally he started his story n gald he wowed he never gonna end it!!

 

Thank u bushy for the lovely OS, hope u will come up with something soon!!😳😃

 Thank you for liking it...😳

 On a lighter note I was kind of trying to imagine u in this!!😆😆😆

 

 

Originally posted by: rubal223

res

nice story

Edited by Bushy_92 - 12 years ago