Suhagraat se pehle Suhagraat,a vision for reunion.

Song: Tu mile dil khile

Movie: Criminal

Idea: Reunion scene when Geet finds Maan..the real union happens Edited by Drashtisfriend - 13 years ago

Expected Maaneet reunion scene if not better than this atleast like this...

Well we know it wud be better than this...lol...hehehehehehehehe...

Recap: Geet after realising she had stretched the matter too far and it was indeed not entirely Maan's fault when he reacted and used the word which was made a bigger crime than rape by Geet...regrets her behaviour..

Geet misses Maan even more after reading his letter...

Geet's mind haunts her with sweet memories of Maan and his passion,love and sacrifice and she regrets for not respecting the emotions which were dedicated to her...

Restless Geet...searches for Maan...and goes to Maan's bedroom in hope that he might be back...but she finds Maan not there as her beleif gets stronger Maan had gone back and quiet possible he wont go back to Delhi and wud now be somewhere where she cant even find him...

Geet's regret gets even more intense..she rushes back to main room and calls back in Delhi only to realise Maan wasnt there... she calls up Adi who asks Geet if everything was ok and Maan wasnt in Delhi...Adi too gets worried as Geet's tone makes him feel if Maan was ok...Geet calls up Dev who replies the same and all get worried...


Geet's harsh realisation and her fear coming out as true...as she was right and Maan was indeed not in Delhi and knowing Maan and how much he loved her..he might well be giving himself punishment and a misunderstanding that Geet wud be happy without him might push him far and too far where she wud never be able to get him back again.

Geet gets even more demoralised and demotivated when she realises
No one knew where Maan was and making Geet feel she had lost Maan and now she has to pay for it as she feels she cant live without him and she was only pretending from outside and the result was Maan left her thinking she wud be happy without him."

Geet talks to herself and prays.to Babaji..that Maan doesnt feel that she wud be happy without him and comes back soon...

Geet rushes back to her room and decides to pack her bag and leave fror Delhi the next day...

While she is packing...she finds Maan's snap she holds the snap and hugs it and apologises to Maan as that was the only memory she had with her...

Geet...closes her eys...hugs the snap...tightly and prays babaji for well being of Maan and requests babaji to forgive her for the stupid act...and for the one last time...she gets to see Maan so that she can convince him and then she wud never ever repeat the mistake of taking Maan's love,care and dedication towards her for granted and wud rather give him even more love to pay back for the illogical and unnecessary behaviour of hers...

Geet literaaly begs and pleads Babaji to listen to her wish as she wud never ever repeat the mistake if Maan comes back and she gets to see him for once...again..

Geet's eyes are closed and she is hugging Maan's snap which is close to her heart and just after she finishes her prayer...she listens to something...

Its the word she was dieng to hear...praying to hear...and more importantly from the person from whom she wanted to hear...

"Geet"...

As Geet with eyes closed and in a state where she is hugging Maan's snap..realises it was Maan who had called her

"Geet'...

Happens a moment where Geet slowly opens her eyes...and her expressions change where tears of happiness and joy flood out as she sees Maan standing right infront of him...

A scene where Geet realises her Maan was there and Babaji had listened to her prayer...

A smile on Geet's face after seeing Maan...and so is a smile on Maan's face...

As both Maan and Geet with controlled tears...with feets moving slowly towards each other...get ready for the reunion which wud never seperate them again...

A reunion which will ensure...Maan and Geet become "Maaneet".. Edited by Drashtisfriend - 13 years ago

Scene continues:

Geet and Maan move towards each other with Geet expressing guilt,happiness..determination not to loose Maan again and also a doubt if Maan was indeed infront of him..

Maan sees and feels Geet missed him alot and her eyes were good enough to potray she was feeling sorry and he is also feeling the pain Geet had gone thru in his absence and was going thru with the thought of missing him for ever...

Maan sees tears in eyes of Geet and at the same time Geet just looking at Maan with controlled tears in her eyes as if she was in a state of shock and was still doubting if Maan was infront of him...

Maan touches Geet's face with one hand...Geet feels Maan's presence...holds Maan's hand...sees at it and then holds it back and looses her control and starts crying holding Maan's hand close to her head on her cheeks...and then starts kissing it...expressing her love for Maan..

Geet then comes close to Maan's face..feels it was maan and kisses him on the entire face...

Maan holds Geet's face with both hands and assures her he was there with her and it was him..

Maan: Geet yeh mein hu,tumhara "Maan"..

Geet hears that and hugs Maan so tightly that Maan feels the passion and happiness and also the feel and determination in Geet not to let him go far from her..

Geet hugs Maan...as if she had got him back from death..or he was missing since years and came in front of her after she strived till death to get him back...

Intense expressions by Geet where she holds Maan in manner that evern his collar is holded...

Maan feels Geet was in shock and he himself holds her tightly...

A scene where Maan and Geet hug each other in a manner that even air cannot pass between them...

After a gap of few seconds..Geet cries and cries with pain...deep pain making Maan feel bad and worried...

Geet is not ready to settle and look at Maan and she wants to be in his arms untill she is convinced Maan was with her and wud be there for ever and wont leave her again..

Geet in a similar state apologises to Maan..

Geet: " I am sorry Maan"

Maan: Geet tumhein sorry kehne ki koi zarurat nahi...tumhari koi galti nahi thi..

Geet: Galti toh thi na Maan..mein bhul gayi thi ...ki Geet ke liya Maan ke kya jazbaat hai..meine hamesha ki tarah iss baar bhi...aapko galat samjha aur takleef di..yeh jaante hue bhi ki aap mere bina nahi reh paoge...meine aapko khudd se dur rakha...aapke saamne hote hue bhi aap se dur thi...

Maan: Geet woh tumhari majburi thi...

Geet: Nahi Maan woh meri zidd thi..kyuki mein jaanti thi aap mujhse pyaar karte hai aur kabhi mujhse dur nahi reh sakte...itni badi sazaa aur woh bhi uss insaan ko jissne meri sazaa jaisi zindagi ko apnaya, apne jiwan ka hissa banaya..

"Meine kadar nahi ki Maan.."

Maan: Geet tum jyada soch rahi ho..

Geet: Nahi Maan..agar socha hota toh iss tarah aapko akele choddkar nahi aati..mein yeh kaise bhool gayi ki aapne woh shabd gusse mein aakar sirf mere liye kahein the...aur woh gussa bhi toh mere liye tha...naaki apne liye...

woh shabd toh mere aatma sammaan ke liye kahe the...uss aatma samman jiske liye mein sab kuch chod kar aagayi..uss aatm samman ke liye jiske liye aapne apne parivar ka saath nahi diya..uss aatmansamman ke liye jiske liye aapne apne ho khoon se duriyaan banali..Geet ki khushi ke liye...sab kuch kurbaan.

Maan feels bad for Geet and finally he manages to settle Geet down and both Maan and Geet facing each other with Geet's eyes down as if she was feeling guilty...Maan feels bad as she need not to feel ashamed or regret it and it was a fault where both were responsible for misunderstanding..

Maan: Geet meri taraf dekho..tumhein aankehn churaani ki koi zarurat nahi kyuki tumne agar mere saaath aisa kiya toh uske peeche mera gusse mein kaha woh shabd hai..jiske liye tumhein nahi balki mujhe sharam ka ehsaas hona chahiye...

Maan makes Geet look at her..

Maan: Geet mein kabhi bardasht nahi kar sakta ki koi tumharein kareeb aaye..aur phir Dev ko tumhaarein itne kareeb dekhkar mujhe Dev ki niyat par shaq hone laga tha Geet...Shaq hone laga tha ki kahi woh meri jaan bachaane ke ehsaan talein...apni galat niyat tum par na daale...kahi tumhein majbur naa karein maaf karne ke liye...

Charitra par sawaal uthata Geet lekin tumharein nahi Dev ke...aur phir...tumhara Dev ko iss tarah tilak lagana..aur uska tumhare saath holi khelna...mein bardasht nahi kar paya Geet..kyuki mein chahkar bhi nahi bhool sakta ki Dev ne mere apne bhai ne tumharein saath kya kiya tha...

Gusse mein mein yeh bhool gaya ki Dev ke saath holi khelna..usse maaf karna tumhari majburi aur tumhara badapan tha...majburi ki usne meri jaan bachai thi aur badappan isliye ki woh uss ghar ke beta hai jiss ghar ki tum bahu ho..mera bhai..dadi maa ka pota...aur Khurana Khandaan ki khushi aur bhalaayi ke liye tumne apne saath hue saare gunahon ko bhoola diya..

Geet tumhari koi galati nahi..agar galati hui hai toh mujhse tumhein samajhne mein..

Geet: Aap koi koi na tarika dhoondh hi lete hona Maan?..taaki mujhe galti ka ehsaas naa ho..aur iss baar bhi meri khushi ke liye...mujhe iss dard aur iss galati ke ehsaas se bachane ke liye aap yeh baatein kar rahe ho na Maan..taaki mein shant ho jau aur isse bhool jau..taaki mujhe iss gunaah ka ehsaas na ho..

"Maan ko apni Geet se dur rakhne ka Gunaah"..

Yeh bahut bada gunah hai Maan..kyuki mein jaanti hu...aap mujhse kitna pyaar karte ho...aur yeh gunaah hi toh hai..ki aapko tadapta chodkar...aapki aankhon ke saamne rehkar...aapko khuddse dur rakhkar..uss tadap mein akele chodd diya..woh tadap jiska dard meine aaj mehsus kiya jab chahkar bhi mein aapke paas nahi aa sakti thi aur..aapko diya dard toh isse se bhi bada hai Maan...kyuki aapki tadap aur uska dard toh wur bhi bada hai...kyuki mein aapke saamne thi aur aap chahkar bhi mere paas mere kareeb nahi aa sakte the..

AApne sahi kaha tha Maan...mujh mein gairat sach much nahi hai..aur agar hoti..toh aapko iss tarah akele nahi chodti...aapko iss tarah...driver bankar...yahan nahi aana padta..aur naahi yez zillat sehni padti jo aapko yahan rehkar inn sabki wajah se uthani padi..

Kitna dard saha hai Maan..aapne bass meri ek zidd ki wajah se...

Maan keeps his finger on Geet's lips and asks her to stop...

Maan: Geet jo hua..woh ek bura daur tha..jo aaya aur guzar gaya...aaj hum saath hai aur pehle se aur bhi kareeb..

Geet: Maan meine zidd mein aakar kya kuch nahi kiya..aur aapne uff tak nahi ki...aap kyu mujse itna pyaar karte ho Maan?

Maan: Geet...pehle tum meri aadat thi phir zarurat bani..aur ab tum meri dhadkan..ban gayi ho...tum nahi toh yeh dil ki dhadkan nahi..aur dhadkan nahi toh kya zindagi aur kya maut...sab ek samaan hai..

Geet feels highly emotional...and hugs Maan again...and kisses Maan on his heart...right in the center...and keeps her head on Maan's chest...

Geet: Kuch mat kahiye Maan...bass iss pal ko mehsus karne dijiye...uss ehsaas ko mehsus karne dijiye jisse mein apne hi haaton se khudd khone waali thi...

Geet finds brusies on Maan's chest...and feels the pain..as she recollects that moment when Maan fought for her pride and she rudely did not even bother to apply ointment only to later come down and do it but also hurt Maan when she forced him to leave her..

Geet removes Maan;s shirt..and feels sorry for the wounds...Maan had felt...only becoz of her...

Next comes the song sequence..

hayee rabba!!! PLEASE continue!!!!

Song Sequence :

TUm Mile Dil khile from Criminal...

Scene:

Geet sees wounds on Maan's chest..she touches them and feels the pain..and also sorry and sad becoz it was becoz of her...she kisses Maan's wound...as her tears dont stop and she is still not in control...still feeling sorry..still tears rolling out...

Maan...holds her face again...kisses Geet's eyes and the wipes tears of Geet..with his kisses..where every drop of tear is consumed by Maan...

"Pee loo..pee loo...tere...aansooyon ko pee loo"..

Maaan tells Geet to take rest...and makes a move backward...Geet holds Maan back...

Geet's eyes express she wanted Maan to be with her...Maan comes close to Geet...and Geet holds Maan's hand even...closer...

Maan and Geet...come close to each other...

Geet: Aaj khudd ko mat rokiye Maan..aaj mein aapko woh khushi dena chahti hu jisse meine aapko itne din dur rakha...aaj mein aap mein kho jaana chahti hu..ek hojaana chahti hu...taaki Geet ko Maan se aur Maan ko Geet se koi jooda naaa kar paaye...

Maan comes even closer to Geet...and so does Geet...

Happens the most passionate "Lip lock"...as Maan and Geet get locked...to become Maaneet...

( This scene can be shot with angles and a trick where Maan can kiss Geet's chin) if shot from distance this wud look a lip lock...

It is a cinematography trick...

Since prime time zone and actors personal preferences needs to be considered...Maan and Geet's expressions wud be good enough to express and make everyone feel a lip lock happened..


After the lip lock ...Maan and Geet look in each others eyes as they feel happy to feel each others love...

Maan and Geet with heads touching and both smile and feel good after the kiss...

Geet hugs Maan..and so does Maan...a hug with emotions settled but not the passion as both just get dissolved in each other... but Geet still in state where she wanted to be in Maan's arms...and if possible she wud never ever get out of it..

After a while she holds Maan's hand and brings him towards the bed...and begins the song...

"Tum Mile Dil Khile aur jeene ko kya chahiye" from movie criminal...

Romantic moves of Maaneet to follow next...

wow awesome well written 

wow... Tooo gud... Plz continue...

Wow superb. Plz continue soon

tooo good yr...cn u pls continue...

awesome...hope this happens