ManeetFF Dancing Frm The Ashes link on pg146

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Prologue

It was late, past midnight and he wanted to go home and sleep. Running the Dance company was anything but easy'but he was Maan Singh Khurana. Defeat was something he couldn't accept nor was it anything he had ever encountered.

When he had taken up the challenge to run a dance company he had never imagined how tough it would be. But, a challenge was a challenge and he'd only give up when the company was on firm ground and he could return to Khurana Constructions.

He pulled out his keys and switched off all the lights. The complete darkness made his senses even more alert. He walked out of the room, when he heard music.

''That's strange. Did someone leave the system on?'', he thought

He had thought everybody had left and he was the last one. Heck even he wasn't supposed to be here , but the need to finish pending work pulled him there - Not even Farhan stayed that late.

He walked quietly to the studio from the back door of the office and saw a light on. The door was a bit ajar'''.

He walked in as quietly as possible and walked in from the wings.

That was when he saw her. Surprise hit him as he actually saw her. Dressed in black tights and a vest with her wild mane open - she was dancing!

Dancing like there was no one watching. Dancing in a way that he had never seen her dance. It was raw. It had passion and he could feel pain emanate from her body as she moved and turned and twisted and leaped. He recognized the song. It was an old R&B number, ''Bleeding Love''.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3rIs2S2WH7M[/YOUTUBE]

He didn't want to let her know he was watching so he partially hid behind the wings and just stared.

Every move was perfect and every turn had an expression. The movements were saying something but he didn't seem to understand. He was stunned by her'.the quiet girl, the loner, the girl who kept away from the group. The most unresponsive person he knew, was doing something that he had never imagined.

   The music stopped and she huddled to the side on the floor and kept her head on her knees, panting. Her shoulders started shaking and it was then that Maan realized that she was crying. Heaving heavy sobs and crying her heart out. He felt a bit guilty about spying on her. Suddenly she just punched the floor and let out an angry noise. She stood up and walked to the main door and picked up her things and went out of the main door. Maan stood stunned, unable to process what he had seen. Geet'.? His mind questioned. Is that the same unresponsive rude girl he saw everyday''..?

Hey guys, this is my 1st ever FF with a very very different storyline from the usual. lemme know what you think of it and I'll keep updating my posts.

cheers

Amruta

Character Sketch Page 1 scroll down.

Season 1

Flashback Chapter 1Punge Le lo - Page 2

Chapter 2 - Who's Maan?Page 2 

Chapter 3 - Nikhil's taskPage 2

Chapter 4 - A task is not fulfilled until ... - Page 3

Chapter 5 - Unlucky in Love - page 4

Chapter6 - Oh, the guilt - page 5

Chapter 7 -The Unlikely Bonding - page 6

Chapter 8 - Reality Bites - page 7

Chapter 9 -Honour n False pride - page 8

Chapter 10 - A Slice of Humility - page 10

Chapter 11 - The Hurts We Hide - page 11

Chapter 12 - All's fair in love and lust - page 13

Chapter 13 -Lollipop, Lollipop, Can I be that lollipop??-page 14

Chapter 14 -Brothers and Sister - page 15

Chapter 15 - Commencing Anew - Page 16

Chapter 16 - Of BFs and BFFs - Page 17

Chapter 17 - Fire Burning, Fire Burning - Page 20

Chapter18 - In My Heart Of Hearts - Page 22

Chapter 19 - Intoxication - Page 22

Chapter 20 - Interlude - page 24

Chapter 21 - The Making Of Maan - page 26

Chapter 22 - The Making of Maan II - Page 28

Chapter 23 - The Unthinkable - Page 30 

Chapter 24 - And So Goodnight!! - Page 32

Disclaimer - PAGE 36

Season 2
Character List and Summary - page 37

Chapter 25 - The Bet - Page 37

Chapter 26 - The Eyes Have It - page 41

Chapter 27 - And That's How It's Done! - Page 45

Chapter 28 - Who's Afraid Of Geet Handa - Page 48

Chapter 29 - What Makes Us Tick? - Page 52

Chapter 30 - What Just Happened - Page 54

Chapter 31 -Flash Mob - Page 58

From Geet to Nik

Chapter 32 - The Error of my Ways - Page 64

Chapter 33 -Jiyein Kyun - Page 67

Chapter 34 Here We Go, Then - Page 74

Chapter 35 Unexpected - Page 80

Chapter 36 A Birthday and a Gift - Page 85

Chapter 37 The twist in the ... what?? Page 94

Chapter 38 Colour Me Green - page 100

Chapter 39 Hope... - Page 110

Chapter 40 Anger is only skin deep - page 117

Chapter 41 Situations - Page 118

Chapter 42 Bang! - Page 123

Chapter 43 Stories To Tell - Page 134

Chapter 44 I'll Be... - Page 139

Chapter 45 Observations - Page 146

Chapter 46 Thread Two

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Geet Handa:

Daughter of the famous Mohinder Handa

Smart, tomboyish, rebellious but intelligent. Knew how to get her work done. College ki Shaan and the heartthrob of the college. A spoilt rich brat. She's had a neglected childhood. Mom, Rano died when she was young and was raised by Nani. Dad frequently busy with work'no time for daughter.Was closest to her mom. Has a lot of friends. They love her for what they see in her'..often surrounded by bad company. They party out every night and have no sense of direction to their lives - just out spending money and boozing. Geet n gang were college ke much loved lafange! Everyone's cautious of Geet'not because she got mad'but becoz she got even.He sense of style is a tank top n cargoes paired with utility boots.

Prized possession: Her sporty utility jeep.

However, when she loves someone, she'll do anything for them and keeps them close.

Friends: Mayank and Siddhant

Nikhil Chopra-

Middle class boy., street smart,  fun loving. Very calm patient well put together boy. No parents but loves life.His closest relative is an uncle who's in the Army. Is into extreme sports'.one bad quality of his is ' he's very stubborn. Down to earth and very helpful towards others. He's a dancer and will do whatever it takes to fulfill his dream. However, back up plans are sensible n he's pursuing a BA to keep his uncle from taking him along on his transfers.

He is geet's 1st love...but is it meant to be...??

 Maan Singh Khurana-

Rich elder grandson of Savitri Devi. And son of Gaurav Khurana. 

An all rounder and a party boy, page 3 boy. A ladies man, but he always seems indifferent to the world around him. A regular at the Capitol and everyone expects him there frequently. He does stay away from girls whenever possible. Once bitten  twice shy! A fantastic dancer quite the heartthrob of the Delhi high society crowd. He's the best when it comes to all European and latin American dances. He has the Midas touch. Anything he does of gets involved in has to come out well.He's his father's right hand and Daadi' confidante

Siddhant Arora 

Rich spoilt brat. Handsome and hot'the heartthrob of the college. Arrogant but the only persons he'll listen to are Geet and Mayank/Mayank. No real purpose in life and is a bully to some extent! He thinks the world revolves around him, but is a big softy.

Friends: Geet and Mayank.

Mayank Shroff-

The dreamer..the artistic one'..spoilt to but not as rich. Wants to be an artist, but is pursuing the Arts degree just to get his Dad off his back. Once that's done, he'll follow his dream.He's creative and not as snobbish as Sid.

Friends:Geet and Sid.

Raina 

The class topper. Psych major. Loves reading. wanted to be a counselor.Dabbles in contemporary dance.She ends up with Sid. Is a stark contrast to his aggressive nature. Knows that he n geet are just friends, but hates his bullying nature and his arrogant attitude! Becomes friends with Nikhil n Ayush. Was Sid, Mayank's and Geet's school mate.

She is the one who lets Nikhil know that Geet was a dancer, till her mum passed away.


Vikram Singh Khurana

The younger brother of Maan. A dancer by choice. It's all he cares about. Quite a flirt. Warm hearted and not quite a practical as Maan. Loves his brother and listens to him the most. Has a big gang of friends, most of who have similar interests.

Anvesha Khurana

The middle sibling. The laadli behen of the Khurana brothers and is close to both of them. Intelligent and tactful. Is very close to Dadi and is her Dad's pet. Pretty and Jovial. Keeps away frm the party circuit to some extent.

Nida:

One of the sweetest most lovable persons in Vicky's dance troupe.She's mute and has to resort to sign language. She majors in contemporary dance, thought she's good at most others. Her waterloo is Hip-Hop and has to train hard for it.

Zakhir:

Nida's boyfriend. He's the one who translates most of what she says. They are  inseparable.

Farhan-

The loner. The dedicated dancer. He spoke less and acted more. Nothing and nobody can take his eyes off his goal'and that is of becoming one of the best dancers of India.

Meera Shergill.

Maan's secretary at Khurana constructions. She's calm and quiet and very hardworking. No nonsense air about her. She and Maan get along very well. Maan has recently promoted her.

Ayush:

Raina n Nikhil's friends. Sid becomes jealous over his friendship with Raina.

Chapter
 one -Flashback 2 yrs ago on page 2.

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awesum prologue n part 1
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