OMG Liz!!! AN OS!!! UFFFFFF I LOVED IT!! aaaaa.. wait, I have to breathe before I continue commenting.
LIZ!!! This is such a freakin' fun and amazing OS!! I loved the entire
depiction of the wedding hall, the celebration at the beginning, AA +
Geet dancing, the opening where you mention what the grown ups to the
kids are doing, er... LUCKY 😆 Pinky + the rest of the guests mega-interest in Maan - hayyyyyyyyye!
it's all just So PICTURE Perfect. And then... Maan's gaze on Geet, her
being very aware of being watched, the mini hide and seek game, being
trapped by Maan... OH LIZ!!! As soon as you stopped the part, I actually
grew as much impatient to RE-Read it than I did for another part.
UFFFFF... HOW do I explain to you just how fabulously you write - and
just how much I love everything that you have going on! I swear my
brain cells are flying around in random directions at the moment cos I'm
feeling overly dazed and just am blown over with this this OS. Both
parts aaaaaare addictively, outrageously FANNNNTASTIC!
Oh I canttttttt wait for you to continue!!
Random note: I L-l-l-l-lovvvve "Sadi Gali" so it was a lot fun to see that included 😆
LIZ!!! You're freakin' brilliant..!!! LOVING this!!
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