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wow. that is great for a first part.. seriously! Great Job :) hopefully geet is gonna ask something for yash.. :D

nice update dear...
Really excited for d surprise...

hey cong.....

oh this part is awesome 

lovely introduction..

the first part is awesome...

Just read your FF, 

Start is quit interesting, i think you should continue very soon my dear,,,

Coz normally I am getting excited when I see the word "Surprise" hehe!

Plz PM me when u updated!

love,

Pini...

p.s. @ the moment nothing to criticize yaar!

 :) 

Nice strt

farheen....first of all,heartiest congratulation 4 ur 1st ff,n thnks 4 d pm sweety!! :)
n 1st update is heart-steeling..:) vry nice....:)
update soon...wsh u all d vry bst..

yaar...it was fab......................omg i loved it i really like hw yash and geet hav such a cute relationship