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Posted: 15 November 2011 at 12:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mitzification

Hi I updated my ff

Will u pls give me the link mitzi?

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Posted: 22 November 2011 at 7:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by wow123

Watch this video

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IzAhXpSfY7E&feature=feedu
Good work sweety , but I liked ur mora piya also quite a lot , infact its the best !

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Posted: 22 November 2011 at 9:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mitzification

Originally posted by wow123

Watch this video

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IzAhXpSfY7E&feature=feedu
Good work sweety , but I liked ur mora piya also quite a lot , infact its the best !


thnx i know.
I become out of practice.
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Posted: 26 November 2011 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Hi guys
 
This is Prash , another AN fan like all you guys . Some of you probably remember me (I wrote a FF on the writing challenge no 2) . I have read a lot of FFs on AN and am continuing to read the rest . So far , all of them have been a wonderful experience . Mich , Honey , Khushboo, Namy , Pri , thanks a lot guys . And thanks in advance to all the wonderful writers whose work I will be reading soon . Hope all of you continue to write this amazing stuff.
 
And as for me , I had a great time writing the first FF and always wished to write another one . Finally came across an idea .
 
Here is the thread
 
Hope you guys like it.
 
Cheers
Prash


Edited by pra19 - 26 November 2011 at 11:08am

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 9:08am | IP Logged
Hey there girls! Hug

It's been a long time since I wrote anything, and I confess that even this one was written a while ago (read: more than a month ago LOL ) but I remembered it right now and wanted to share. Embarrassed As you already know, I'm no poet, and unfortunately my skills at poetry are very limited, so keep the chappals to yourselves :P I don't wanna be injured. Wink

Hard concept, but since I've written it, I consider it your duty to read it as well :P

Rant over, and here goes:




FIRE


Longing
For that love in your eyes,
I drown in them so deep.
They're soft and warm,
But I miss the fire.
I miss the fire I never saw,
The tenderness I never felt.
Oh, I miss the love I dreamed of.

I'm miles above the ground,
And I fear the fall, baby.
I've forgone the expectations,
I've given up on assurances,
I've fallen out of hope
But I can't fall out of love.

And I'm so broken, baby.
As I sit and count the pieces,
Think of all that we've been through,
I don't know how much more I can go.
Oh, fill the void inside my heart
For I miss the love I dreamed of.

Out of the broken pieces
You've taken a few to your heart
And left the rest to be.
But I want to be whole again,
Oh baby can't you see.

I'd rather be loved for who I am
Or not be loved at all.
But in between, it just hurts too much
So please don't make me fall.

And I can't even let go,
Damn my stubborn heart -
It's so completely taken to you,
I can't break us apart.

I feel your breaths,
I hear your heartbeats,
And I can breathe in your sighs.
But still I'm so broken, baby.
I can't escape this loneliness.
Let me breathe again,
Let me live again,
Let me ignite the flame I so long to see,
Because baby, I miss the love I dreamed of.



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Comments will be appreciated Embarrassed



Edited by Khushboo_AN - 30 November 2011 at 10:59am

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
So new poem Khush. Abhi I'm on my way 2 Chandigarh, so can't say much at present. Wapis aake rply karungi.

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
I love ur poem Khush. I always love ur writing dear n believe me u r very good in poem as well.

Ur poem remind me the time of Mich's ff where N completely fallen 4 Abhi but he was not taking step forward toward her (where her FIL advised her to "break him").

My curiosity of reading that book still hanging from the wall.

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