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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 12:09pm | IP Logged

Me FIRST!!! Big smile

 
*EDIT*
 
Aaargghhh what was the need for resurrecting SLD from her grave? She could rot there for all I cared...along with her brother *seethes* Honestly I didn't even hate Jiah as much as I hated those two...Angry
 
Anyway...I'm done with my ranting Embarrassed sorry if I scared you LOL LOL LOL
 
Yeah so...Abhi ke taange todne ke liye aye the!!! ROFL Ohhh what a sight!!! ROFL I'd have liked to see that! LOL LOL LOL Why didn't you make him knock Bisham Singh dead? Wink LOL
 
Awww he's flirting with her LOL That's cute! Embarrassed
 
That end part is sweet...I wish it had not been in the Dalmiya's backyard though ROFL
 
But oh well I've always had a problem with the Dalmiyas...crazy family Shocked Dead
 
It's cute!
 
But why did you jump to the marriage night? Confused
 
Thoda aur likhti, mazaa aa jata! Embarrassed I'd like a detailed description of what happened in between, if you will! Embarrassed
 
Nice! Hug


Edited by Khushboo_AN - 23 May 2011 at 12:35pm

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
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Hey Rucha, as I've alreay told you that I liked the scene, it's very well written and a nice try for a start...Just one thing, the end of the scene was a bit sudden, I was expecting something more...
Keep writing and oblige us with some more scenes from you...Embarrassed


Edited by Nehu_1 - 26 May 2011 at 6:45am

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
chill Khush
aww so sweet !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nikki iin red lengha , abhi in pink shirt (ok im asuming that hahaha)
cute scene

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 8:15pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 6:59am | IP Logged

*Edited*

Awww Ruchu, First of all please accept my sincere apology for posting my comments late.. Seriously I'd forgotten about my reserved post.. And thanks for reminding me.Hug

 

Now coming to your OS, its indeed a nice first attempt.. The scene is very cute and sweet.. Loved it.. You have chosen very unusual scene from DMG.. I'd never liked this 'Kushtiwala scen' in DMG, nevertheless liked your take on this.. Its with nice twist n turn..

 

Only one thing.. I wonder why Abhi didn't say anything in return when Nikki professes her love twice.. I'd liked to see him confessing back before jumping on the opportunity lol.. Just kidding..

 

You have written this scene very nicely.. Indeed a good try.. But it seems you have ended it hastily.. You could've kept it open and could've ended it with 2nd part.. Never mind, now do keep writing more and more such kinda OS on our most favorite adorable couple..

 

Applauses gal!! Once again.. Please do keep writing more and more..



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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 6:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mitzification

chill Khush
 
LOL LOL LOL
 
Yeah I do tend to go a bit overboard with my hatred for SLD LOL 
 
I'd rather see Jiah any day Shocked LOL

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Hi I am totally new to Indiaforums...I have just joined it and as my name suggests m an entirely crazy abhinikki fan...So friends out here plz help me adjust here...I know u all r warm and welcoming and hope u all add me 2 ur worldSmile

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 11:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Crazy4AbhiNikki

Hi I am totally new to Indiaforums...I have just joined it and as my name suggests m an entirely crazy abhinikki fan...So friends out here plz help me adjust here...I know u all r warm and welcoming and hope u all add me 2 ur worldSmile

Hey Crazy4AbhiNikki, sry don't knw ur name.Embarrassed Welcome to IF and the beautiful world of Abhi-Nikki...

As you said, u r a crazy Abhi-Nikki fan, so if u want to talk to some more crazy ppl like you, sry, I mean some more crazy AN fans, then do visit Abhi-Nikki FC. It's a lot of fun to be there, atleast when everyone is around.Embarrassed

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