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Great OS Nehu.. 👏 simply amazing... fight was very cute...😆

Nehu ,  that was such a lovely read. Did not know you write too 😊 and write you do very very well. Edited by pra19 - 12 years ago

Shalini ... that was such agood VM... loved it absolutely !!!!!!!! Edited by mitzification - 12 years ago

Shalini now write an os to go with this song naa.

Honey ... sweety I am reading your 'covenant of love' yet again ... its sooo good you just read one chaptr and you can't let go ...

Mitzi, Priyanka, Shale, Rucha and Pra thanks alot for your appreciation and those lovely words. It really means a lot.
@Shale loved your vm. Ab apni f ko b update karo. And Pri you too do that pls.

I wish someone would write an OS on the scene where abhii nsults Nikki and she thinks of leaving ... it was such a lousy scene totaly not acceptable abt her diary and that flashback with ABhi ...totaly not posible cause she never even admited her feelings to herself . Abhi had few things of hers like her scarf n pencil ... wat cld Nikki have that wld remind her of Abhi and hold her back ?? I mean to say scene was excellent , flashback was lousy hehe inconsistent.Edited by mitzification - 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mitzification

I wish someone would write an OS on the scene where abhii nsults Nikki and she thinks of leaving ... it was such a lousy scene totaly not acceptable abt her diary and that flashback with ABhi ...totaly not posible cause she never even admited her feelings to herself . Abhi had few things of hers like her scarf n pencil ... wat cld Nikki have that wld remind her of Abhi and hold her back ??

Even I was thinking of something last night.😳 The night of Shubhankar and Kirti's sangeet, when Abhi asks Nikki to come with him instead of staying there when Armaan interrupted them. I was thinking of a situation where Armaan hadn't interrupted them,where Abhi would have taken Nikki then?😳

haan nehu likho naa...

Originally posted by: mitzification

haan nehu likho naa...

 

i dont know this 'like' button dsnt work nowdays

Me likhu?*gulps* You're kidding, right? Sachi bolu to jo OS maine abhi lika tha wo b sirf tumhare aur Namy ki wajah se lika tha. You were indirectly and Namy was directly giving me hints that she wanted me write.😆 I think I have lost that aptitude for writing.