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Ok, I'm not editing my previous post.Posting my precious comments on your both parts in the same post.π
First of all thanks a ton for starting this mini ff and thank you Mitzi or putting that idea into Pra's mind.
First part was kind of short and mysterious too given the entire new and different angle of the storyline though very interesting at the same time.
"Abhi , that boy hardly stays in the house . After school , he'll go for guitar lessons , then his taekwondo practice and then the gym . I am tired of telling him that he should have some fun ,hang out with his friends , but he'll never listen to me ." , his mother said a little sadly . So , an almost 18 year old with no friends.
Thank God, you kept the character that way. I love him like that only, simply The Abhimanyu Modi.π³
The whole conversation between AN near the pool was so like ummm AN...lol...Loved that to the core.
A light breeze passed around them and her hair fell across her face , partially covering it . But before she could push them aside , his hand had found its way to them .
Ab me aur kya kahu? I'm all π
When she opened them , his hand was still holding onto her hair and his eyes still piercing into hers .
What happened next? I wanna know, right now. Jaldi update karo.π‘π
Seriosly, waiting or the next part. Update soon Pra.
First of all thanks a ton for starting this mini ff and thank you Mitzi or putting that idea into Pra's mind.
First part was kind of short and mysterious too given the entire new and different angle of the storyline though very interesting at the same time.
"Abhi , that boy hardly stays in the house . After school , he'll go for guitar lessons , then his taekwondo practice and then the gym . I am tired of telling him that he should have some fun ,hang out with his friends , but he'll never listen to me ." , his mother said a little sadly . So , an almost 18 year old with no friends.
Thank God, you kept the character that way. I love him like that only, simply The Abhimanyu Modi.π³
The whole conversation between AN near the pool was so like ummm AN...lol...Loved that to the core.
A light breeze passed around them and her hair fell across her face , partially covering it . But before she could push them aside , his hand had found its way to them .
Ab me aur kya kahu? I'm all π
When she opened them , his hand was still holding onto her hair and his eyes still piercing into hers .
What happened next? I wanna know, right now. Jaldi update karo.π‘π
Seriosly, waiting or the next part. Update soon Pra.
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