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Posted: 12 years ago
Work By Khushboo_AN:
 
 
Hey everyone 🤗
 
Today is the 2nd anniversary of my favourite, the 4th June episode...in other words, the Riot Scene.
 
In fond memory, I present to you this:
 
 
Moments
 
 
Living moments
With you
As I see the world crashing down
In your eyes.
There's a pleasure in the pain
As you hurt me more and more.
I just can't hide
The weakness in me.
It's more than you put across -
It's more than I'll ever let you know.
If you will believe, dear,
I'll say that this is love.
More than anything I've felt before,
More than anything I've known before.
Because while you're here
I could just drown in the hurt and
In the love as it consumes me.
 
A moment of weakness
A moment of truth
A moment of realisation
A moment of love
Are everything that we share
Right now.
And as you break me
Bit by bit,
I melt at your touch.
We live a moment that
Is forever.
For as long as you're here,
I know that
This feeling is
Invincible.
 
 
_______________________
 
 
 
I'm horrible at poems, I know LOL 😳 But this is only my second attempt, and if I write more, I promise I'll try to get better 😳
 
Comments are, as always, priceless! 😉
 
Love,
Khush.
 
Edited by Khushboo_AN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww cute..
A moment of weakness
A moment of truth
A moment of realisation
A moment of love
Are everything that we share
Right now.
 
wait did u write this??
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woww who says your bad in poems...I dont agree at all lol

Nicee...😳

I loved this one also 😃...keep writing ⭐️

P.S. Im impressed you wrote this in fond memory of riot scene 👍🏼.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Merry_Shwit

aww cute..

A moment of weakness
A moment of truth
A moment of realisation
A moment of love
Are everything that we share
Right now.
 
wait did u write this??

 
Of course I did!
 
I wouldn't be putting up someone else's work as my own, would I?! 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN

 
Of course I did!
 
I wouldn't be putting up someone else's work as my own, would I?! 😲

😆 .. i was joking.. geeshhh ..BOO😆.
i love it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Merry_Shwit

😆 .. i was joking.. geeshhh ..BOO😆.

i love it.

 
*pinches you hard*
 
You're bad! :P
 
Thanks!
 
 
___________
 
 
 
@Rucha...thanks sweetie! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh ho Khush , humein aur kitna tadpaaogi ... ek short scene he ded o naa ... mujhe nahi chahiye 32 page ff :(
mitzification thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
 Hey I updated two parts of my blog ... in case neone still cares hehhe
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: mitzification

 Hey I updated two parts of my blog ... in case neone still cares hehhe


I care, I care, I really do😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: mitzification

oh ho Khush , humein aur kitna tadpaaogi ... ek short scene he ded o naa ... mujhe nahi chahiye 32 page ff :(

 
37 pages to be specific 😳
 
You'll get it, you'll get it, ab bas thoda aur patience rakho...😉