Wow...Nikki is indeed a true blue M&B romantic!
I'd give anything to have a guy like Abhi, and here she is testing his ability to romance *sigh* I never understood the lady...women are weird 😕
Anyway, that was the cheesiest question I've ever heard, and honestly I didn't understand why he put forth so many reasons in the first place when he could've asked her to forget about the flower lolz the flower isn't more important than his life...extremely immature of Nikki to ask him something like that. I wanted to smack her across the face...😡
And I know I'm being harsh on you...poor you, started writing for the first time, and see here I am going on and on about how strange Nikki seemed to me. *slaps forehead*
But I can't help it...the desire to be honest always wins out when it comes to AN...I like to see them as they are, and I really coudn't imagine Nikki saying anything of the sort, sorry about that 😳
But one thing I loved...like, absolutely loved, no matter how cheesy and M&B, was the response from Abhi. 👏
Typically quiet, and typically avoiding saying it to her face 😆 But the way he conveyed it was wonderful...I loved it. Weird, yes, coming from Abhi, but I guess posed with such a question, he is the kind to react like this. 🤔
Nicely written though...short and simple. I like it 😃
Sorry for being so damn discouraging but yes, this piece doesn't portay AN exactly as we know them, but certainly, a very nice read...⭐️
Again, the quietness of Abhi, of course, is bang on target! 👍🏼 And Nikki's clumsiness and never ending complaints 😆 Yeah, those are definitely AN 😉
And heyyy it isn't depressing lolz! It was nice...more of the emotional kind.
You're getting there...I like your ideas, girl. Really good 😃 Keep writing...they're not exactly ANistic as we're used to, but they are definitely very good. I don't mean to demean your work, really. All I'm saying is that this isn't AN as I saw them. 🤔
But the idea, really, is superb. Loved it. 😃
Looking forward to some more from you soon, since it seems that you're on a roll! 😃
Nice! Nice! 🤗
Edited by Khushboo_AN - 13 years ago
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