My Rap song for colors, updated pg 4 - Page 3

Posted: 13 years ago
Kiran please ise colors ki personal site per bhi post kar do. Loved it yaar
Posted: 13 years ago

Hi Kiran, thank colors for giving you an opportunity, to realise, this hidden talent of yours. Now Gurudakshina to banati hai na. So came up with something more appealing, bizare, drastic for themπŸ˜†

Posted: 13 years ago
hey kiran,

lovely rap dear...... the wordings are so in sink😊...

just loved it........ the rhyming is too good.......

keep making more....

tc
divya
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by Yuvika_15


gr8 outcome for a first attempt...u sure its ur first?πŸ˜‰..lol..jus kidding...reali gd rap...

thanks yuvi :P

Originally posted by -Huma-


nice one..πŸ˜†...make the next one a bit more spicy..πŸ˜›...colors deserves a lot of rudeness from us..
Thank you dear !
the spicy one is underconstruction!

Originally posted by dg0628


🀣 LMAO .... Nice! 
you defo have a career in rapping ! πŸ˜‰
u sure its your first time? lol

thanks dear 
its really my first !

Originally posted by Hamlet53


yooooo maaan!
wicked brudder!   yoooo maan...gooo maan
doin a gud jaab maan
yes kiran great attempt .. keep dem cumin girrl.. merrcy merrcy!
gawd help dem colors losers, dem  colors losers!

Thakns Hamlet !
oh i think even u are too good with rapping :D
yeah next one is  from frustrated mind 

Originally posted by ivy_11


Great job Kiran and so apt for the current situation!!! I can imagine us LTLians rapping to it. Thanks for making me smile the first thing in the morning πŸ˜Š. 

Thanks dear 

Originally posted by mishimano


very nice Kiran πŸ˜Š πŸ‘
Thanks Noor :)
Originally posted by pbtghosh


ROFLROFLROFL
kya rap banaya πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ‘

Thanks dear 

Originally posted by stranger2rose


kiran u surely brought a smile on my dull face . continue with ur rap songs , it was a great attempt.

Thanks Rose !
but im mad at you 

Originally posted by duttanakku


Kiran please ise colors ki personal site per bhi post kar do. Loved it yaar

Did that 

Originally posted by mnx12


Hi Kiran, thank colors for giving you an opportunity, to realise, this hidden talent of yours. Now Gurudakshina to banati hai na. So came up with something more appealing, bizare, drastic for themπŸ˜†


sure will try :)
Originally posted by dc17-7


hey kiran,

lovely rap dear...... the wordings are so in sink😊...

just loved it........ the rhyming is too good.......

keep making more....

tc
divya


Thanks dear !




Edited by kiran255 - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Well Guys thank you for ur liking 
i really appreciate and now i am with another rap but its not completely bashing but its a frustrated mind yelling !

A feeling which alot had , is and will experince !

My second rap song from a frustrated fan !

                                    RAp # 2

    Aao Sunao tum ko ek kahani 
   ek tha channel jis ki bare rangeen thi  jawani !
  
par ab raat a rahe hai andhera chaa raha hai 
colors ka rang ab urta ja raha hai 

         Jis ko chaha apna samjh  kay 
        us nay chora hum ko bekhari samjh kay ( orignal was kutta samjh                                                                                                                  kay :P)

              we beg we cry  but no body cared 
                we felt like dummies , whenever an article passed

 no reply no mercy   they thought we are  barking dogs 
now  the time has  come when we will bite them their asses off !


I Know guys kahin rhythm is tricky but cmon its my second one !
i know its more abt us than the Colors but wait im working for colors special :


Note :Hopefully no one sentimets hurt cuz there are two times i write dogs !
but as i know i have written ita as a frustrated fan !
hopefully no one  mind !

    
Edited by kiran255 - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago

                                    RAp # 2

    Aao Sunao tum ko ek kahani 
   ek tha channel jis ki bare rangeen thi  jawani !
  
par ab raat a rahe hai andhera chaa raha hai 
colors ka rang ab urta ja raha hai 

         Jis ko chaha apna samjh  kay 
        us nay chora hum ko bekhari samjh kay ( orignal was kutta samjh                                                                                                                  kay :P)

              we beg we cry  but no body cared 
                we felt like dummies , whenever an article passed

oye Kirrrrannnnnn...tu to lyricist ban gayi re⭐️....
damn right...we are not going to spare them for this insensitivity....
Ek channel ki kahani,
daalo uspe paani...
I swear that is what we will do if they go ahead with this...
By the way great work...colours ka rang sach mein utar raha hai😑
berang ho jayega ab ho jald....
keep them coming...we need more such war songs...πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by kiran255


Well Guys thank you for ur liking 
i really appreciate and now i am with another rap but its not completely bashing but its a frustrated mind yelling !

A feeling which alot had , is and will experince !

My second rap song from a frustrated fan !

                                    RAp # 2

    Aao Sunao tum ko ek kahani 
   ek tha channel jis ki bare rangeen thi  jawani !
  
par ab raat a rahe hai andhera chaa raha hai 
colors ka rang ab urta ja raha hai 

         Jis ko chaha apna samjh  kay 
        us nay chora hum ko bekhari samjh kay ( orignal was kutta samjh                                                                                                                  kay :P)

              we beg we cry  but no body cared 
                we felt like dummies , whenever an article passed

 no reply no mercy   they thought we are  barking dogs 
now  the time has  come when we will bite them their asses off !


I Know guys kahin rhythm is tricky but cmon its my second one !
i know its more abt us than the Colors but wait im working for colors special :


Note :Hopefully no one sentimets hurt cuz there are two times i write dogs !
but as i know i have written ita as a frustrated fan !
hopefully no one  mind !

    
 
Hey girl😊
 
Aawww sooo sweeeet, ok i no sweet dnt quite go wid ur lyrics lool, but hey whenever there's music involved in whateva type of genre den it's always best to keep tru 2ur feelings dats wot music's all about hun....allowing urslf to express ur feelings openly.....n from wot i've read ur doing a real good job.....
....hey just a thought lol, y don't u video urslf rappin instead n post it on utube lol, and den post d link here, dat way we can get a better idea of ur rappin lol, n hu no's mayb colours myt hire u for better ratings !!πŸ˜†
 
Nice job keep it upπŸ‘πŸΌ
 
TinkπŸ˜‰
Posted: 13 years ago
Wah Wah Kiran dearπŸ‘
Ab tak ye talent kahan chupa rakha tha.
Keep them coming ,next one should be more tod-phod,what sayπŸ˜‰
 
Posted: 13 years ago
Haaaawwwwwwwwwww! Nice one!πŸ‘

Next one should have Colors and a certain person being ripped to shreds by fans!😑
Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing kiran...you're rapping like a master....*hugs*

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