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ff:2gethr ever aftr!!updated part 15 (2 july) (Page 5)

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                    part 11
aftr he put the earring in her ear,they had a little eye lock(i ws by mistake typing lip-lockLOL)
chander asked alka 2 come out of her room.
c"cmon alka!b quick.we r getting late."
a"its ok chander!we nt gng 4 any party or meetng tat we get late.its just a dinner"
c"bt if u go late n come early,then we ll hav less time 2 spend!(he bit his lip n thot oops!wat i just said!i shudnt b 2 open 2 her.its nt a proper date yet)i mean we  cnt eat in peace.we ll hav 2 hurry or u ll get scolded by ur warden"
a"ok baba!m ready!lets go!"
c"hold me tight 4m ma waist or ull fall down"
a(holds him tight)happy??
c"a lot"
n they both went 2 the resturant.
chander pulled out a chair 4 her.
c"hav a seat lady!(smiling)
a"stop being formal chander!we r frnds"
c"ok madam jee!wat wud u like 2 order?"
a"umm!i d like alfredo pasta wid hot garlic sauce n a coke"
c(calls the waitor)bring 2 alfredo pastas n 2 cokes
waitor"ok sir!anythng else"
c"nothng"
the food came n they relished it a lot.aftr the food,chander asked the waitor 4 the bill.wen it came alka grabbed it.
c"hey alka!wat r u dng?give it bck 2 me.ill pay the bill!"
a"no it ws ma treat so ill pay"
c"ill pay"
a"ill pay"
n they both keep fightng n eventually chander has 2 surrender infront of alka n she pays the bill.
they both come bck.chander stops the bike infront of alka s hostel.
c"thnks 4 the treat alka bt tat wsnt fair"
a"all fair n square.it ws ma treat n u r always welcome(smiles)
c"ok"
a" gud nyt then.c u 2moro"
c"good nyt"(sayng this he places a soft peck on alka s cheek leaving her spell bound)c u!tc!
coming up:romanceHeart
 guys i hav tried ma level best 2 create interest in this ff bt still nobody replies.does anybody read ma ff?if so the plz leave any cmnt might it b short!!Embarrassed


Edited by tinatartari - 18 May 2011 at 6:56am

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guys plz plz plz cmnt.i need them badly
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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 7:20pm | IP Logged
its awesome dear...

continue plz..
i really liked tht u write small updates...Big smile
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thnks oozy.m really flattered wid ur cmnt.bt i get 1 or 2 cmntz at most:( still thnks n ill write soon

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ya ... few people r present on dis forum..


dnt worry dear... keep on writing...

i really like the way u write...
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                                  Part 12

note:
as u all know tat chalka z gng 2 b married in 2day s epi n tat  secretly,this ws how i had planned my ff 2.so i wanted 2 give update b4 the epi.so m gng 2 get them married in the nect epi.hope u like it
the whole night alka kept thnkng abt chander how he kissed her n their nearness.
she kept wandering how she allowed him 2 come close 2 her n they actually went on a date.they became so close in such a short time.she cudnt even imagine of tat.
on the othr hand,chander ws so happy n he ws wandering how he managed 2 actually kiss alka on the cheek.he used 2 avoid girls a lot,then how come he became so close 2 her?
wen did they both slept,they dint knw.
morning
ralph woke chander n annie woke alka.all of the got ready 4 their respective institutions.all day chalka cud nt concentrate on their studies.
alka got a txt 4m chander"how r u alka?"
alka txted bck"m good"
chander"this lec z so boring.i cnt concentrate"
alka"same here."
chander"y nt meet up in the coffee shop?"
alka"ya sure"
both quickly sneaked out of their classes n went out.
coffee shop
chander saw alka coming
c"hi!watsup"
a"m cool.u tell"
c"m good.come hav a seat"
n he pulled out a seat 4 her.alka sat n both started talkng n ordered coffee.
they only knew its 2 late wen ralph n annie came telling them tat the lec z over n they r free nw
r"so chander shukla wid a girl.man!m afraid"
c"shut up ralph"
r"ok ok.lets go"
c"whr?"
r"nw u so busy u 4got 2 go home?"
c"ok lets go.bye alka"
a"bye chander"
evening
in alka s room
annie"do u love him?"
a"wat?i dnt knw"
an"the way u both were talkng it seemed so"
a"we r just frnds"
an"ooo"
a"stop it"
an"ok babes!chill!!"
1 week later
chalka were out rejoicing ech othr s company.they were becoming closer day by day.jay ws a new student who came in chander s class.he used 2 get jealous of chander n tried 2 thnk of ways 2 let him down.
chalka were in the club 1 nyt wen he asked the waitor 2 spike chander s drink.the waitor did as he gave him a large sum of money.
chander were dizzy aftr havng the drink.he started dancing n asked alka 2 accompany him.wen alka stopped him,he announced in front of every1 tat he loves alka.she ws dumbstuck.
then she forcefully asked him 2 go bck 2 his hostel bt he ws nt in a position 2!so she took him 2 her room wich ws closer 2 the pub.
her warden saw her wid a boy talkng him 2 her room.
morning
warden called alka n asked abt the boy.alka tried best 2 avoid bt cudnt so the warden threw her out of the hostel n chander ws thrown out 2!
precap:chalka living 2gethr


Edited by tinatartari - 02 July 2011 at 3:38am
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                                     Part 13

chalka had no place 2 live.so they decided 2 share an apartment as it wud cost less.
they got 1 n they shifted their luggage thr.it had 2 rooms,a kitchen n a lobby.
1 room alka took n the othr chander n lobby ws common 2 both n they started havng dinner 2gethr.they kept turns 4 every work.both cleaned up their rooms themselves.chander cooked food n alka did the dishes.
they started living happily.1 night wen alka ws returning 4m her wards,a gang of ppl surrounded her.they tried 2 misbehave wid her bt luckily chander came on the spot n saved alka.
1 of them asked"wat z she urs?girlfrnd??or wife??"
2 wich chander replied"wife" wich left alka shocked again.
she asked him y did u say wife wen m nothng.
c"come wid me"
n he started dragging her wid him
a"whr r u taking me?"
c"no questions"
n they walked miles n then they saw a temple.chander took her in n placed vermillion(sindoor) in her maang.alka ws shocked.then he took the red veil present there n covered her head.
c"2day i ll show u wat u mean 2 me!gimme ur hand"
alka gave it.they took pheras in front of the pandit jee n chander tied the mangalsutra in her neck n took blessings of pandit jee.
they came back home.as they were on the door,chander stopped alka
a"wat happebned chander"
c"w8 till i come bck"
he went inside n bought a glass full of rice n red ink in a plate.he put the glass on the floor.
c"nw step in the house aftr kicking this glass n putting ur feet in this ink mrs shukla"
alka shyly smiled n obeyed the order.both of them matched their footsteps aftr she entered the house.
c"nw 4m this day u r mrs alka chander shukla n this home,me n my everythng z all urs.nobody cn ever dare 2 say u anythng as long as m alive"
a"bt u dint ask me wat did i want?wat if i dint want this??"
c"u knw i cn read ur eyes n i hav seen tat u also wanted this.bt 2 b sure i read ur diary n i knew u loved me the way i loved u"
a"whhhaaattt???u read my diary?how dare u?"
n then she started hitting him lovingly on the chest n he took her in his arms.
a"i love ur dear!"
c"i love u 2 honey"
precap:SREmbarrassed
 


Edited by tinatartari - 02 July 2011 at 3:59am

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                                              Part 14

note:before the most awaited SR,this epi z exclusively dedicated 2 abhini.
in india
abhi ws so heart broken tat he started drinking more.1 day while he ws returning back home tat he saw nandini chased by goons.he stopped the car n went thr.he tried 2 stop the goons bt they dint.then he fought wid them saving nandini.she hugged him n said thnks 4 saving me.then she realized wat she just did n she moved bck.abhi lowered his eyes n said"plz sit in my car.i ll drop u home"
n"no thnks ill go myself"
a"if u go urself,thr z a solid chance tat the goons again catch u n i wont  thr 2 save u again"
n they both laughed.
nandini guided him 2 her house.wen he reached thr he ws shocked tat it ws shukla mansion.
he quickly dropped her n reached home.he thot he ll 4get her 4evr cz she cnt b his.
shukla mansion:
nandini started feeling 4 abhi n she thot he z nt as bad as i thot.he z a nice guy.may b i misunderstood him n thot wen she ll meet him nxt,he ll apologise.
next day at coffee shop
nandini saw abhishek flirting wi a girl.she ws heart broken.still she managed 2 drag herself n came thr
n"hi abhishek jee"
a"hi!"
n"cn i sit?"
a"ya sure"
girl"hey abhi darling!whoz this?"
a"oh i dnt remember.btw lady wats ur name"
n"m nandini.remember u helped me??"
a"oh ya!poor lady!she ws chased by goons 2 days bck n i saved her n then dropped her home"
girl"poor girl!!good tat u helped her"
a"ya!i knw m gr8!N laughed"
n"ok so i take ur leave"
a"sit n have coffee"
n"no thnks.i hav some imp thng 2 do"
a"ok bye"
n"bye"
she came bck home cryng
mr shukla"wat happened nandini?"
n"nthng papa!"
s"tell me wat happened?"
n"somethng got into my eye"
n ran 2wards her room n threw herself on the bed n cried a lot
 
precap:maha fightDead


Edited by tinatartari - 02 July 2011 at 4:34am

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