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Chinchinchoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome update Tina...loved it ooh chalka misunderstanding...update soon

oh, and btw, pls dont type the whole thing in capitals, its against IF's rules...thanks

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tina tartari

@tinatartari

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Posted: 13 years ago

@suvi against if rules?oh m so sorry i dint knw.

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Ruhi

@.BeautifulSoul.

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice.. plz continue...

its difficult to read in capitals ... 😵

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tina tartari

@tinatartari

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Posted: 13 years ago

part 2

morning

annie"alka!alka!wake up!u r getting late 4 college"

alka"ok m getting up annie!"

she gets up stretching her arms upwards,quickly get out of her spread,rush 2 brush her teeth,wears a pink top n jeans n get ready 4 college.

chander has already woke up n aftr getting ready z studying.ralph woke up lazily n gets ready n they went 2 college.

3 months later

its end of term n vacations

alka z packing her bags n so z chander.both of them r returning 2 their home town aftr 6 yrs.

alka s POV

she z very excited 2 come back home.she ll smell her soil again n ll meet her parents.c the place whr she spent her childhood.meet her dear brothr n her childhood frends.bt still she z a bit gloomy n depressed of meeting her first,unexpressed secret love admiration chander who hates her nw due 2 MU his mum created.

yes,anothr twist in the story.chander z alka s 1st love 4m childhood.she always dreamt of being wid him bt his mum shattered her dreams n she never expressed her love due 2 fear of getting rejected

chander s POV

he has a definite mission in mind tat he has 2 fulfil(tats a mystery n ll b revealed aftrwards).he doesnt want 2 go home 2 refresh those memories of his childhood tat hurt him n r a hurdle in his mission.he doesnt want 2 c alka s face ever again.

aftr packing their bags,alka n chander leave 4 the airport.annie n ralph say them goodbye n they board the plane.

recap:in india

p.s sorry 4 the small update bt i wrote it twice cz wenever i write it on IF ma lap top gets struck n i hav 2 restart it.it doesnt get struck any othr time.

plz press the like button if u like it n do leme knw if u want any changes in it!

love tina

Edited by tinatartari - 13 years ago

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Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome update Tina...ooh Chandu has a mission...update soon..wanna know..

(oh and if it keeps getting stuck, then write it on word or somewhere instead so that it is saved ;)

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ozzyie

@ozzyie

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Posted: 13 years ago

Thats awesome.....plz continue😉

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anjali

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Posted: 13 years ago

This content was originally posted by: tinatartari
PART 1 (edited:plz re-read)
Evening

Alka came back in her room after her bicycle ride in the woods. she ws humming the tone"BABY,BABY,BABY" on entering her room.

Annie asked her "HEY Alka!wats the matter?alka n song?n tat 2 romantic!is everythng ok?"

Alka"yup dear!i ws just free 4m ma substage so m enjoying this"

Annie"oh!btw how did ur substage go?"

Alka"it ws awesome n guess who took ma viva?it ws our new teacher dr eric pattrison!"

Annie"Eric!man he z so dashing!i wish i had taken ma viva wid him!i wud hav loved it!u knw wat all girls drool over him!

Alka"stop it!he z just a teacher.n we shudnt thnk like tat abt him!"

Annie"oh!come on deary!he z afresh 4m medical school n z nt so elder than us!"

Alka"stop ur nonsense annie!"

Annie"oh u boring old lady!just keep dreaming abt ur prince charming n dnt take interest in handsome hot hunks!!n ull land up wid a poor soul like u or ll b alone 4ever!"

Alka"ma prince charming wud b simple,caring n nice unlike these stupid boys over wich many girls drool!"

Annie"oh u n ur stupid dreams!forget it!u wont get any1 ever n ll single like tat"

Alka"annniiee uuuuuuu(throws a pillow at her)

Annie"alkaaaa(throws a pillow back)

they had a pillow fight n end up hugging each othr n lights out...

Chander z sitting on his reading table studying 4 his law test 2moro wen his roomie ralph enters wid food 4 them.yummy chicken sandwiches wid coke.he z so immersed in studies tat he doesnt notices ralph.ralph clears his throat 2 get his attention bt no use.so he goes 2 chander n gently strikes his head.chander looks at him abruptly.

Ralph"hello!good evening gentleman!come 2 the world mr chander!i hav been calling u since 5 mins"

Chander"oh sorry ralph!i dint knw u were here!i ws studying 4 ma law test!u tell wats the matter??"

Ralph"mr chander n his books!no interest in anythng else!u knw wat chander apart 4m ur creapy books thr z a beautiful creature in this world called girls.i thnk u shud also take a look at them"

Chander"m here 4 studies so tat i wud b the best lawyer n then i d go 2 ma country n join politics"

Ralph"if u hav 2 join politics anyways,wats the use of studying law?y waste urself 4 smthng u dnt wanna follow in future?"

Chander"i wanna knw how 2 bring a change before becoming a part of it.our leaders gandhi gee n nehru gee were also lawyers b4 they became leaders"

Ralph"make some love 2!add some colours 2 ur black n white life mr chander!u n ur philosophies.life z so sweet!donot waste it gentleman!u only live 1ce so rejoice it!"

Chander"love n defeat dnt exist 4 me"

Ralph"god!u n ur dialogues!y dnt u ecome a script writer?"

CHANDAR"stop it man!"

RALPH"ok lets eat!"

n they both eat n go 2 sleep.

Recap:back 2 india

Note:I want 2 make some thngs clear before proceeding wid the story!abhishek alka n chander nandini r siblings.chander,alka,abhishek n nandini r childhood frends.they share many memories 2gether bt wen they wr 12 alka n chander went abroad 4 studies.they live in the same city bt never met each othr.coz chander s mother savitri doesnt like his n alka s proximities n she created a huge misunderstanding in chander s heart tat alka z jealous of him n in alka tat chander beefooled her n z a casanova.so both hate each othr n never met aftr moving abroad.

If u like this plz do not 4get 2 hit the like button n leave some comments.it z a treat 4 me 2 read ur comment.they really make me feel gr8!so plz comment!!!u can also write suggestions,criticism.if u want me 2 add somethng or remove smthng,do lemme knw.

love tina

@tina...awesome...u r a good writer...but plzzz write about abhini also...im dying to read their story imagined by u

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tina tartari

@tinatartari

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Posted: 13 years ago

@anjali sure ma next epi wud b abt them.i hav made the story already bt cnt find time 2 wwrite.sorry 4 tat ll update soon

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tina tartari

@tinatartari

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Posted: 13 years ago

only 4 ppl read ma ff!!no response 4m any1 else :( do i write tat boriung????

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tina tartari

@tinatartari

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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 3

india

a young boy comes out after having a bath.he z in a towel.wen he comes out,he shouts:bahadur!whr r my clothes"

bahadur replies"abhishek sir!they r here"

abhishek wears them n get ready.they r casuals.

ram comes running."chotey saab baade sahab z calling u"

abhishek replies(in an irritating tone)"tell him im coming"

then he goes 2 NNT s room,knocks at the door.NNT gestures him 2 come in.

abhishek"yes papa!wats the matter?u called me?"

NNT"yes son!i wanted 2 tell u 2moro at 6:30 in the evening u hav 2 go 2 geeta dancing academy as the chief guest.

abhishek"no papa!m v busy.i cant go"

NNT"an order z an order son.u hav 2 go"

next day

abhishek gets ready 4 his date wid reeta,his new gf.ram comes wid a reminder.

gopal"sir u hav 2 go 2 geeta dancing school"

abhishek(makes faces)"damn man!papa thinks of me as his puppet!"

he calls reeta n apologizes n sets out 4 the event.

he z given a warm welcome thr.then every1 gets seated n the show starts.

they call different dancers bt abhishek z busy txting reeta.then comes a dancer nandini.this name strikes his mind n he looks up whr he sees an angel face dancing on the tunes of chalka chalka re.

he got msemerized by her beauty.a fair colored tall girl wid dark brown hair,blue eyes wearing a white dress.

the dance ends bt abhishek still lost in her.she performs n goes back stage.abhi s eyes started searching 4 her.he forgets everythng.he then decides in his mind she wud b his new gf.the owner z sitting beside him.he asks her 2 give him the contact details of the dancer n fix his meeting wid her.

after the function z over,the owner takes him 2 his office n comfortably seats him.then he asks his peon 2 call nandini while abhi having his tea.she comes.he introduces himself n asks her 4 a coffee outside the next day.she reluctantly agrees cz of the gesturing of the owner 2 say yes.

the next day

abhishek gets ready 4 the date.he wears his best clothes n applies his fav perfume 2 enchant women.

nandini comes in the cafe.

abhi"hi"

nandu"hi"

abhi"come sit!(pulls out a chair 4 her)

nandu"(sits n looks at him in expressions of wat does he wants??)

abhi"u r looking beautiful.ur eyes,ur hair they r so beautiful."

nandu"sir m sorry bt m nt tat type of a girl"

abhi"wat type?(naughtily)

nandu"wat u r thinking.m a middle class girl whose values n self respect z everythng"

abhi"i dnt mean 2 degrade u.just wanted 2 b frends wid u"

nandu"sorry sir!i dnt make boy frends"

saying this she gets up n goes

coming up:

abhi enchanting nandini

Edited by tinatartari - 13 years ago

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