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FF-Aisi bhi Ek Love Story#1 See Page 154 (Page 14)

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 8:56pm | IP Logged
Nice updateClap, jijs new technology and panchi's and sid's conversation were very romanticBlushing

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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 12:15am | IP Logged
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shivangi luved ur update,Heartbut abhay came with ruhi why.......?


that must be angad..typing error..

Yeah I'll just correct it! it's Angad!
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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 12:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RB81

hei shivangi,
wish abhay came to c the gorgeous piya..but wat is this..where did he go?it geeting a long no show day..he was friends with piya then how come he goes like this..not at all fair on abhay..do unfold the reason for abhay's absconding ..continue soon..
Sorry! That's Angad...not Abhay! I have corrected it...still no Abhay in the scene dearies!!
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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 12:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Gals1110

Gr8 update Shivangi.. It was awesome.. Piya-Panchi part was sweet 1 & Mish part was funny.. Sid-Panchi n d whole blushing thing was superb.. Loved Madhu's behaviour towards Piya n Piya-Kabir's bond. Enjoyed it.. Just Missed Abhay a lot.. Carry on.. lolz.

By the way! your new Picture is cute...must say!

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 7:04am | IP Logged
-Aisi bhi ek Love Story-

PART 13

It was the time to exchange rings. Piya got hold of the camera and clicked the pictures as Panchi and Siddharth exchanged their rings. 
Tears welled down the cheeks of Mr. and Mrs. Dobriyal. Even Misha's eyes moistened. Piya and the gang had planned a romantic date for the newly engaged couple... They hadn't been able to spend time with each other since they had told their parents about their love. Meanwhile Siddharth and Panchi sat together at the stage as the elders blessed them. They started talking to each other.
My oh My, My birdie looks gorgeous!
Panchi blushed again! Thanxz Siddharth
I am blessed...How can someone be so fortunate as me...to have got you.!
Panchi blushes again!

Now...this is the limit...I wonder...How can someone blush so much in one evening...No doubt why Misha calls her birdie! She is too girly!!

I must say Panch! You look stunning than you did in the MMS. I am bewildered!
So do you Mr. Mehra. I must say...you complement Panchi Dobriyal!
Oh! Thank god i got my bubbly Panchi back...woh typical bride behavior tumhe suit nahi karta love...
Even Panchi Dobriyal prefers being bubbly than girly...Pur pata hai Sid mamma din mein 100 times remind karti hai to blush and behave shyly...I hate it...specially before Piya and Misha!
Panchi saw Madhu staring at her and almost immediately dropped her head down.
Phir se tumhe kya hogaya!
Sshh, mamma is staring. Panchi spoke still looking down. Siddharth gazed at Madhu and her stare turned into a smile. 

Ah! The same old ritual...the 'damad' is considered as elder than the bride's parents even! 

Piya and the group had converted Panchi's room as a romantic candle-light date! Of course Madhu would never allow Sid in Panchi's room so the gang had managed a ladder from Panchi's window down at the parking lot where the ladder landed near Sid's car...well-hidden. After the dinner was over...Misha and Piya escorted Panchi back to the guest room to change. Meanwhile the boys-Angad, Shankar, Shaurya and KB helped Sid change his dress and brought him in Panchi's room via the ladder. After Panchi came back in her casuals, they blindfolded her and brought her to her room. They left her there and got to their respective positions. Piya and Kabir took the charge of the parking lot where the ladder landed. T, Ruhi and Angad and Shankar distracted Madhu and Arnav and Shaurya and Misha started strolling around her room pretending they were talking to each. Their danger signal was cock-roach and as soon as the word was pronounced the gang would jump into action to hide all the date-scene.

PARKING LOT-DOBRIYAL HOUSE

Kabir- What were you telling me in the kitchen which was left unfinished. I saw you were sobbing. What happened.
Piya- KB, It's about Abhay...he disappeared...where? how? why?...no idea!
Kabir- That *****,****,*** I will kill him If i find him. He always gets tears in my princess' eyes...
Piya- Calm down KB...First listen! The last time we met...we had a quarrel and then he left...He tried to apoloqize but i misbehaved with him. I feel guilty and now when I wanna apologize...he doesn't show up...
Kabir understood that Piya had developed feelings for Abhay. He wasn't sure if Abhay had the same feeling or not. Well none were sure about this..Not even Piya!
Kabir- He must be busy...He'll be back soon. Don't worry! I'll tell my dad to contact his dad and inquire about Abhay
Piya- Thanxz KB! By the way..how is it going between you and T?
Kabir- It's all cool and awesome. She is the most beautiful women I've ever met!
Piya- KB...a boy would say that for his girl...no matter how ugly she may be...or no matter of he had met any women prettier than his girl...
Kabir- Arghh! I can't be romantic in front of my sister...smart sister!
Piya- Ya'ah you can never!
It was nearly 3:00 in the morning and so both of them climbed the ladder to warn the love-birds to end their prolonged date! They jumped from the window and saw them kissing each other. Immediately they closed their eyes and turned around.
Humne kuch nahi dekha! sorry! 
Could you atleast knock and enter
Jijaji...window pe pane nahi laga hua tha! Sorry! But it's too late...Panchi di...i think it's better to clear up the mess. KB will help you reach home safely without being recognized by anyone.
Ya'ah...I must say! Great Work team! and Piya thanks for the date!
Mention not BIL!
Ah! A new name! What does BIL stands for!
Brother-in-law...duh!
Cool name! Love it...better than jijaji!
Super-cool! But BIL now get going!
Bye dearies! Panchi love-ummah!
Leave BIL! go! 

They sorted out the mess by 5 in the morning and then slept. At about 7:00 Misha and Piya woke up and got ready for College. While Piya was having her breakfast she texted Abhay-

Abhay,
I wish to see you today...It's been long time...I have started to miss you Mr.Raichand..come soon. Hoping to see you today!

Luv,
Piya

THE DENSE HIMALAYAN MOUNTAIN FORESTS

The forests were super-dense except for a plain area which marked a tent. A big grey tent. Nothing visible from outside! It was the Raichand's tent.
Abhay was lying on his sleeping bag when he got Piya's message. I am sorry Piya! I will not come soon! I need time! Time to get myself back to normal! -Abhay thought. Suddenly he heard Haseena Raichand-his mom entering the tent.
Abhay, you should probably satisfy yourself before we go back to dehradun!
You're right mom. I just probably need 2-3days more. Pandher Fort discussion has revived my memories...I need time!
Should we shift somewhere else?
Never Mom...don't even think about it!
Take care..we are going!
Okay Mom!

MOUNT COLLEGE

Piya waited long for Abhay to come. She finally gave up and proceeded to her class. The seat was empty! She sighed..That was the limit. She moaned and ran away!...........

SAME PRECAP GUYS-NO ABHAY

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 7:20am | IP Logged
yay!i am firstTongueah it was so lovely! really the gang made superb plan!!!
oh!Winkthank you so much at least little but you gave something about abhay also!!
when will he come ?Confusedhow can such a short discussion about pandher can make him so furious?**Confused
update soon LOLand please do reply....... 


Edited by ilove99 - 06 April 2011 at 7:38am
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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 8:20am | IP Logged
Wow Awesome update Dear.. Sid-Panchi were Gr8.. D whole romantic date Idea was nice.. I just love Kabir-Piya's bond.. What is Abhay doing in dat dense mountain.. Missing him a lot.. Carry on..lol.

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 8:33am | IP Logged
Amazing dear.
fantastice.
it ws vry nice updt.
poor piya!!!!!!
Hpe abhay cum soon.
plz cnt wid nxt part nd do pm me.
luv u
vritika

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